Fem!France (named Marianne, please) is the resident slut at school. She happily sleeps around with all the boys and then tells juicy details and teases everybody. She loves to entice and seduce, to turn people on, the thrill of the hunt. She’s also proudly bisexual and a shameless flirt.
One day, a group of students (or just one) insult her and call her ‘worthless whore’, in front of the whole school, and give her a verbal lashing that hurts her deeply.
The other two (not genderbent) members of the Bad Touch Trio are out for blood and revenge, since no one insults their precious friend.
Hated [part 6/??]
anonymous
February 26 2011, 06:52:13 UTC
Marianne begins to suspect something is wrong during soccer practice. Not that any of the girls were close to being professional players, but she did not recall Bel being clumsy enough to “accidentally” trip her six times over the course of thirty minutes, once sending her face first into the dirt. Katya runs up to her and apologizes tearfully for not being able to defend her, and Marianne accepts her apology with as much cold dignity as she could summon. She doesn’t think they are acting on their own, though, so she swallows her anger and gets back up, wiping the dirt from her face
( ... )
I loved the Trio interaction! They're so cute, and they have fun like dudes, but then, the boys' sweetness and desire shows...dawww, love it <3
Marianne teases, knowing Gilbert hated to be reminded of how much more built his little brother was, and how thoroughly she got to appreciate Ludwig’s fine, muscular body last summer after her pool party.
You continue slipping in my favourite pairings (France/Germany ♥)), and that info about Gilbert was very interesting fits, him very well! He's so worried about being totally manly that something like that has to sting xD
She touches the small gold cross necklace at her throat
I know this is a characterization detail, but I can't help finding it really hot just adds to the hot seductive schoolgirl deal ;)
Marianne already bragging about her latest conquests while Antonio and Gilbert grin and nod and try their best to not think up creative ways to castrate their rivals*squeeeeeeeeeeeee
( ... )
Thanks, OP, I'm so glad to hear you are enjoying this, though it looks like other people lost interest once they realized Fruk was not going to show up again, heh. I am very fond of messed-up Rome/France dynamics myself, though of course this is all just my headcanon. I apologize for being a little slow in updating, but I hope you enjoy the rest, OP! I shall deanon someday with proper names for the unnamed characters.
Re: Hated [part 6/??]
anonymous
February 28 2011, 07:22:15 UTC
OH God, poor Marianne, with all the self-hate and then with Rome. Oh he would do that when she was so young. Well, I only see that bit with Maximus prolonging the Alanis Morissette kick I've been on for the past few weeks. Break ups and all that jazz. But seriously, this is such a well done fic.
Hated [part 7/??]
anonymous
March 5 2011, 00:19:57 UTC
Marianne pulls the hood of her jacket over her hair and sneaks out of the headmaster’s office and into the nearest girl’s restroom. Wetting a paper towel in the sink, she then dabs at her neck and her collarbone, scrubbing at her thighs, trying to erase the smell of his cologne from her skin, that lingering musky scent that marks her as his own. She can’t help but laugh under her breath as she does so, remembering the time Sadiq dragged her into a broom closet, how she knocked over a bottle of lemon disinfectant when he shoved her against the wall, and how they smelled citrusy fresh the rest of the day. Smelling like that would have been preferable, she thinks, throwing the paper towel into the trash
( ... )
Hated [part 8/??]
anonymous
March 5 2011, 00:21:09 UTC
There is a knock on Gilbert’s bedroom door, and the three friends look up when Ludwig announces that dinner is ready. Antonio waves at him cheerily, Gilbert grumbles and removes his hands from under Marianne’s shirt, and Marianne simply blows a kiss in Ludwig’s direction, making him flush even redder
( ... )
Hated [part 10/??]
anonymous
March 5 2011, 06:33:19 UTC
“Wow, how did you get out of a visit to the headmaster’s office?” Gilbert later asks her.
“Arthur interceded on my behalf, as I did not start the fight.” But in exchange for that, he demanded to see her in private before the next student council meeting, and she had to accede.
“Are you really okay? You can’t keep doing this, Marianne,” Antonio says, putting his arm around her shoulders carefully.
“I know, I know. And I hate making you two worry, that is cruel of me.” The sad part is that she has not even told them everything she has done, and she wonders bitterly if that would change their opinion of her any. “I am so sorry, can you ever forgive me?”
“You don’t have to be sorry, you didn’t do anything wrong!”
“Well, technically, you might have, but yeah, it definitely wasn’t all your fault
( ... )
Hated [part 12a/12]
anonymous
March 5 2011, 06:35:28 UTC
Once or twice, someone dares to ask Gilbert and Antonio where Marianne is, why she hasn’t been to school for nearly a week, but they get no answer, only menacing silence. Alfred even stops by her house, but his considerable charms are not enough to persuade her father to let him in to see her. No one can find out what happened to her, and the gossip on the webpage slows down somewhat now that the target has been eliminated
( ... )
Hated [part 12b/12]
anonymous
March 5 2011, 06:51:05 UTC
Once they clean up and change into less bloody clothes, Gilbert and Antonio head for Marianne’s house. Her father lets them in after they explain, but it takes a little more convincing to get Marianne to open her bedroom door. She does eventually and looks startled to see her friends injured so, and invites them to stay a while
( ... )
Ohhhh, that was really painful. ;_; And yet, the solidarity and love between the Bad Touch Trio was also so beautiful. Really, truly, thank YOU for writing.
Man, I hope Marianne beats the everloving shit out of Arthur. (Eh, that's not wrong of me... right?) I love that she once had a "tomboy phase". Actually, I'm pretty sure I love everything about your Marianne. ♥♥ (Also your Gilbert and Antonio. ♥)
Thank you again for such a well-done Gakuen Hetalia fic.
Re: Not OP, BTW
anonymous
March 5 2011, 18:22:54 UTC
Thank you for reading, anon. I just had a story to tell, and I'm so glad someone liked it. As painful as it is.
Haha, I didn't know if I ought to make England the villain, he's such a popular character, but with France, there can be only one enemy of that magnitude. Thanks again for commenting!
Fem!France (named Marianne, please) is the resident slut at school. She happily sleeps around with all the boys and then tells juicy details and teases everybody. She loves to entice and seduce, to turn people on, the thrill of the hunt. She’s also proudly bisexual and a shameless flirt.
One day, a group of students (or just one) insult her and call her ‘worthless whore’, in front of the whole school, and give her a verbal lashing that hurts her deeply.
The other two (not genderbent) members of the Bad Touch Trio are out for blood and revenge, since no one insults their precious friend.
[I hope this is what you were expecting, OP!]
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Marianne teases, knowing Gilbert hated to be reminded of how much more built his little brother was, and how thoroughly she got to appreciate Ludwig’s fine, muscular body last summer after her pool party.
You continue slipping in my favourite pairings (France/Germany ♥)), and that info about Gilbert was very interesting fits, him very well! He's so worried about being totally manly that something like that has to sting xD
She touches the small gold cross necklace at her throat
I know this is a characterization detail, but I can't help finding it really hot just adds to the hot seductive schoolgirl deal ;)
Marianne already bragging about her latest conquests while Antonio and Gilbert grin and nod and try their best to not think up creative ways to castrate their rivals*squeeeeeeeeeeeee ( ... )
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I shall deanon someday with proper names for the unnamed characters.
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Well, I only see that bit with Maximus prolonging the Alanis Morissette kick I've been on for the past few weeks. Break ups and all that jazz.
But seriously, this is such a well done fic.
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“Arthur interceded on my behalf, as I did not start the fight.” But in exchange for that, he demanded to see her in private before the next student council meeting, and she had to accede.
“Are you really okay? You can’t keep doing this, Marianne,” Antonio says, putting his arm around her shoulders carefully.
“I know, I know. And I hate making you two worry, that is cruel of me.” The sad part is that she has not even told them everything she has done, and she wonders bitterly if that would change their opinion of her any. “I am so sorry, can you ever forgive me?”
“You don’t have to be sorry, you didn’t do anything wrong!”
“Well, technically, you might have, but yeah, it definitely wasn’t all your fault ( ... )
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Man, I hope Marianne beats the everloving shit out of Arthur. (Eh, that's not wrong of me... right?) I love that she once had a "tomboy phase". Actually, I'm pretty sure I love everything about your Marianne. ♥♥ (Also your Gilbert and Antonio. ♥)
Thank you again for such a well-done Gakuen Hetalia fic.
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Haha, I didn't know if I ought to make England the villain, he's such a popular character, but with France, there can be only one enemy of that magnitude. Thanks again for commenting!
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