[Part 14] Beloved (or, if Nobody Wins, Who Writes History) - Lithuania/Belarus {placeholder}
anonymous
April 20 2011, 09:17:28 UTC
Based off this prompt: "Lithuania, when the Kievan Rus broke apart and Belarus went to stay with him, was actually quite cruel. I want to see this aspect of their relationship.
Bonus: Belarus isn't yet obsessive about Russia. Bonus 2: Breathplay is included. Bonus 3: Belarus is still a child/preteen."
Although it doesn't really include any of the bonuses except that Belarus' isn't crazy about Russia while Lithuania has her. There's no breathplay (or really explicit non-con at all), and she's not that young (13-15, she's meant to be.)
Trigger warnings, though: kidnapping and false imprisonment, violence, stalking and sexual harassment, and general mindfuckery.
[Part 14] Beloved (or, if Nobody Wins, Who Writes History) - Lithuania/Belarus {7/14}
anonymous
May 19 2011, 11:08:48 UTC
She's fairly certain she doesn't have much freedom. She's spoken to Katyusha, and apparently Poland acts better than Toris has ever done to her. Not that it's surprising. Poland is less insane, so these things happen
( ... )
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anonymous
May 20 2011, 01:00:01 UTC
wow anon this fill is intense. i hate how some people make Belarus completely crazy and moraless and Lithuania the nicest person in the world. you do a really good job of balancing their characters. this is a really intriguing concept. please keep going. i want to see how it ends :) also cool title
[Part 14] Beloved (or, if Nobody Wins, Who Writes History?) - Lithuania/Belarus {9/14)
anonymous
May 28 2011, 01:14:22 UTC
“Sister, you cannot seriously be considering doing this.”
Katyusha looks tired, and hurt, and sighs. “What choice do we have?”
“We can say no.” Poland and Toris have sent Katyusha to her to convince her to do this, this conversion, away from her actual faith, but she refuses to let it work.
They can take everything from her but God.
“It wouldn't be good to fall so heavily under Moscow's control,” Katyusha says, fidgeting with the buttons of her dress. “That's why they're doing it, really.”
“I'd rather be under our brother's control than those bastards!” Natalya shouts. “I never wanted to leave, remember.”
Katyusha sighs. “I don't think Ivan would treat you much kinder than now. Things have... changed. From what I understand, Poland treats me a lot better than Ivan treats, well...”
“Poland does,” Natalya says, trying not to choke. “You don't know me. What happens... Toris is a madman with an obsession; you must know that
( ... )
[Part 14] Beloved (or, if Nobody Wins, Who Writes History?) - Lithuania/Belarus {10b/14}
anonymous
May 28 2011, 09:32:54 UTC
“Is that what this is about? Him?” Ukraine asks. “Bela... I know your relationship with Toris has been, well, troubled,” she says. “But I thought you may have come to terms. It's been over a century.”
“I have come to terms,” Belarus tells her. “Didn't you see how many times I have held a knife to that man's throat?”
Ukraine winces. “Belarus, don't.”
“I am okay with my life,” she says. “Don't treat me like a madwoman for it.”
Ukraine inhales heavily. “Belarus, you cannot possibly pretend Russia's treatment of us is right, can you.”
“We're meant to be with him.”
“But look at me and tell me he has treated us well,” Ukraine pleads. “Surely you can't be so ignorant that...”
Belarus stares. Dammit, her sister wants an answer and...
“He's done what he's done,” he says. “He's our brother and we should love him. We should do what he says. It would do you could to remember that. Now, you may take over the laundry if you wish. Thank you, in fact. I have two more tasks to do before I can go to bed.”
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anonymous
May 29 2011, 17:46:48 UTC
I continue to love this fill for its originality. I rarely see Lithuania portrayed as anything but perfect unless he's terribly OOC, but you've managed to both keep him IC and flawed. I applaud you for that. I also rarely see Belarus not being entirely obsessed about Russia. Even in the more modern sections she is not "marriedmarriedmarried", but she still is unhealthily attached to him like she should be. It's wonderful characterization that does not make it into fics as often as it should.
By the way, I really liked what you did with the religion part. About how originally, Belarus refuses to convert to Catholicism, but later she drops her religion entirely just because Russia wanted her to while Lithuania's the one refusing to let go of his religion. I thought it was very interesting.
[Part 14] Beloved (or, if Nobody Wins, Who Writes History?) - Lithuania/Belarus {placeholder}
anonymous
June 10 2011, 12:13:59 UTC
“There you are; could you please tell me what the hell is going on-” She doesn't even get to finish her sentence before Toris drags her up, by the hair, slamming her against the wall.
She's confused. She woke up this morning in one of the dungeon cells, where she has never been held, even when she was first captured, or after her many escape attempts. She was in a new section of the house with Katyusha, in preparation for the impending transfer; what happened.
“...Ow. Okay, seriously, what's going on? Where's my sister? Why am I in the dungeon- agh!”
He twists her hair again, hard, and it hurts. “Your brother came for you,” he murmurs.
“...What?”
He pushes her back roughly and she flinches. “There was a war,” he says. “He wanted to get you back. He almost...”
Natalya's mind races as she tries to understand this; she hasn't seen her brother since the thirteenth century - “Ivan!” she calls out, thoughtlessly trying to break past and find him, to escape. Of course Toris stops her; he grabs her and squeezes brutally, and she cringes
( ... )
[Part 14] Beloved (or, if Nobody Wins, Who Writes History?) - Lithuania/Belarus {11b/14}
anonymous
June 10 2011, 12:18:13 UTC
That last bit was meant to be "11a". >_> - An overwhelming wave of anger and illness suddenly crushes through her. This was - the one decent thing he ever did, to give her some kind of freedom, and now... “But that's not fair!” she cries like a child. “I didn't do anything wrong!”
“But you would have if you'd known. You'd have wanted Russia to take you away. Idiot.”
His smile is affectionate again, and she has to avert her eyes. That's not wrong, she tells herself, but nothing will come of telling him that. “...I thought you wanted me to be happy,” she says, looking back at him cautiously.
He looks at her blankly. “I want you to be happy with me. You'll understand one day.”
He walks out the door, locking it behind himself. She collapses on the floor, too tired to keep fighting when he's not even here. Suddenly the emotions start to sink in, because Ivan-
Oh god, Brother was here and he could have saved her, and Katyusha too no doubt, she was so close to getting out of here and she didn't even know until it was too late. It's too
( ... )
[Part 14] Beloved (or, if Nobody Wins, Who Writes History) - Lithuania/Belarus {12a/14}
anonymous
November 14 2011, 20:59:08 UTC
Uh, yeah, this thing... exists still. Sorry about the delay. I'm warning you though, this chapter will be long one.She understands that things are going badly for him. The schadenfreude is vaguely undermined by the fact when things go badly for him, things sort of start going badly for the rest of them
( ... )
[Part 14] Beloved (or, if Nobody Wins, Who Writes History) - Lithuania/Belarus {12b/14}
anonymous
November 14 2011, 21:03:05 UTC
He grabs her by the waist and pulls her in close, making her gasp. “It's all your fault. Don't you even feel guilty?”
She's trying to stay composed, but her breath gets shallow. “That doesn't even make sense,” she says, avoiding his eyes. “I'm no angel, but I'm not your guiding light. I'm not responsible for what you do.”
He pulls back and pushes her back onto the table. Ow, she thinks but she doesn't cry out. She quickly pushes herself back up again, just to stare at him with contempt. He runs his fingers through his hair. “You are such a bitch
( ... )
[Part 14] Beloved (or, if Nobody Wins, Who Writes History) - Lithuania/Belarus {12c/14}
anonymous
November 14 2011, 21:20:11 UTC
He pulls back, not far enough that she can see anything past him, but enough that she can't possibly pretend he is anyone else. She holds her breath. “I'd like to make it very clear: you have a choice here,” he says. “I'm not forcing you into anything
( ... )
[Part 14] Beloved (or, if Nobody Wins, Who Writes History) - Lithuania/Belarus {13b/14}
anonymous
November 24 2011, 22:25:02 UTC
There is a meeting, for some reason. They all have to be there; the representatives of each SSR, as well as each country that made that pact in Warsaw.
Things have been confused and disoriented lately. Russia doesn't know what to do; she knows that. He wants things to be better, but he doesn't want to lose them all. Belarus wishes she could help him, but she has no experience with this sort of thing and he'd just run away if she tried in any case.
Poland is giving them all a smug, contemptuous look. Hungary is staring out the window, dreaming of far-away lands unknown. Ungrateful bastards.
“Belarus,” there's a hand on her shoulder and she jumps a mile high. “Oh, sorry!” says Lithuania. “I didn't mean to frighten you. I was just asking - Russia's late; do you know where he is?”
She's ashamed to say, she doesn't. She looked all over the house for him this morning; she needed to see him (she's never been any good at these meetings) but no matter what she did, she couldn't find him. She even checked all his regular hiding spots in the
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"Lithuania, when the Kievan Rus broke apart and Belarus went to stay with him, was actually quite cruel. I want to see this aspect of their relationship.
Bonus: Belarus isn't yet obsessive about Russia.
Bonus 2: Breathplay is included.
Bonus 3: Belarus is still a child/preteen."
Although it doesn't really include any of the bonuses except that Belarus' isn't crazy about Russia while Lithuania has her. There's no breathplay (or really explicit non-con at all), and she's not that young (13-15, she's meant to be.)
Trigger warnings, though: kidnapping and false imprisonment, violence, stalking and sexual harassment, and general mindfuckery.
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i hate how some people make Belarus completely crazy and moraless and Lithuania the nicest person in the world. you do a really good job of balancing their characters. this is a really intriguing concept. please keep going. i want to see how it ends :)
also cool title
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Katyusha looks tired, and hurt, and sighs. “What choice do we have?”
“We can say no.” Poland and Toris have sent Katyusha to her to convince her to do this, this conversion, away from her actual faith, but she refuses to let it work.
They can take everything from her but God.
“It wouldn't be good to fall so heavily under Moscow's control,” Katyusha says, fidgeting with the buttons of her dress. “That's why they're doing it, really.”
“I'd rather be under our brother's control than those bastards!” Natalya shouts. “I never wanted to leave, remember.”
Katyusha sighs. “I don't think Ivan would treat you much kinder than now. Things have... changed. From what I understand, Poland treats me a lot better than Ivan treats, well...”
“Poland does,” Natalya says, trying not to choke. “You don't know me. What happens... Toris is a madman with an obsession; you must know that ( ... )
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“I have come to terms,” Belarus tells her. “Didn't you see how many times I have held a knife to that man's throat?”
Ukraine winces. “Belarus, don't.”
“I am okay with my life,” she says. “Don't treat me like a madwoman for it.”
Ukraine inhales heavily. “Belarus, you cannot possibly pretend Russia's treatment of us is right, can you.”
“We're meant to be with him.”
“But look at me and tell me he has treated us well,” Ukraine pleads. “Surely you can't be so ignorant that...”
Belarus stares. Dammit, her sister wants an answer and...
“He's done what he's done,” he says. “He's our brother and we should love him. We should do what he says. It would do you could to remember that. Now, you may take over the laundry if you wish. Thank you, in fact. I have two more tasks to do before I can go to bed.”
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By the way, I really liked what you did with the religion part. About how originally, Belarus refuses to convert to Catholicism, but later she drops her religion entirely just because Russia wanted her to while Lithuania's the one refusing to let go of his religion. I thought it was very interesting.
Looking forward to more!
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She's confused. She woke up this morning in one of the dungeon cells, where she has never been held, even when she was first captured, or after her many escape attempts. She was in a new section of the house with Katyusha, in preparation for the impending transfer; what happened.
“...Ow. Okay, seriously, what's going on? Where's my sister? Why am I in the dungeon- agh!”
He twists her hair again, hard, and it hurts. “Your brother came for you,” he murmurs.
“...What?”
He pushes her back roughly and she flinches. “There was a war,” he says. “He wanted to get you back. He almost...”
Natalya's mind races as she tries to understand this; she hasn't seen her brother since the thirteenth century - “Ivan!” she calls out, thoughtlessly trying to break past and find him, to escape. Of course Toris stops her; he grabs her and squeezes brutally, and she cringes ( ... )
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An overwhelming wave of anger and illness suddenly crushes through her. This was - the one decent thing he ever did, to give her some kind of freedom, and now... “But that's not fair!” she cries like a child. “I didn't do anything wrong!”
“But you would have if you'd known. You'd have wanted Russia to take you away. Idiot.”
His smile is affectionate again, and she has to avert her eyes. That's not wrong, she tells herself, but nothing will come of telling him that. “...I thought you wanted me to be happy,” she says, looking back at him cautiously.
He looks at her blankly. “I want you to be happy with me. You'll understand one day.”
He walks out the door, locking it behind himself. She collapses on the floor, too tired to keep fighting when he's not even here. Suddenly the emotions start to sink in, because Ivan-
Oh god, Brother was here and he could have saved her, and Katyusha too no doubt, she was so close to getting out of here and she didn't even know until it was too late. It's too ( ... )
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....Russia hiding under the floorboards.... XD
Happy to see more of this story. It's really a fascinating one.
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She's trying to stay composed, but her breath gets shallow. “That doesn't even make sense,” she says, avoiding his eyes. “I'm no angel, but I'm not your guiding light. I'm not responsible for what you do.”
He pulls back and pushes her back onto the table. Ow, she thinks but she doesn't cry out. She quickly pushes herself back up again, just to stare at him with contempt. He runs his fingers through his hair. “You are such a bitch ( ... )
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“Oh - oh god.” Her dress is ripped and there is... something running down her thighs, and no, no, no ( ... )
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Things have been confused and disoriented lately. Russia doesn't know what to do; she knows that. He wants things to be better, but he doesn't want to lose them all. Belarus wishes she could help him, but she has no experience with this sort of thing and he'd just run away if she tried in any case.
Poland is giving them all a smug, contemptuous look. Hungary is staring out the window, dreaming of far-away lands unknown. Ungrateful bastards.
“Belarus,” there's a hand on her shoulder and she jumps a mile high. “Oh, sorry!” says Lithuania. “I didn't mean to frighten you. I was just asking - Russia's late; do you know where he is?”
She's ashamed to say, she doesn't. She looked all over the house for him this morning; she needed to see him (she's never been any good at these meetings) but no matter what she did, she couldn't find him. She even checked all his regular hiding spots in the ( ... )
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