the sound of silence. 1a/1
anonymous
January 25 2011, 14:24:41 UTC
I hope you don't mind dubcon. If you do, I'm sorry for not asking earlier (T-T it somehow just turned dubcon-ish) and I'll rewrite it, eep!Canada's eyelids flutter open slowly. His head is throbbing, the pain is almost unbearable and he finds that he is unable to see or think straight... Which reminds him of something that has been nagging at him for a little while - where exactly were his glasses? He has absolutely no idea
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the sound of silence. 1b/1
anonymous
January 25 2011, 14:26:54 UTC
America slides the sound in, slowly, millimetre by millimetre and Canada freezes, mouth opening in a silent scream. As much as he hates to admit it, he likes being filled completely; the way it burns, the sweet friction of metal underneath hot flesh feels so good that he moans incoherently, wanting more. Somehow, with liquid barely leaking from his tip as America teases him mercilessly, angling the sound upwards, probing deeper, he manages to find brief respite from the hell he is now living in. America licks at the crook of Canada's neck, then nibbles gently, teeth slowly piercing the sensitive skin as he withdraws the sound.
Canada hates how he becomes a quivering mess merely from America's ministrations. He slides the sound in again and sweet heavens above it feels goddamned wonderful and when America presses down lightly on his perineum, pulling the sound out, he spills his seed all over his brother's hand
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Re: the sound of silence. 1b/1
anonymous
January 25 2011, 16:25:11 UTC
This is one of my most favorite kinks, so, yaaa-y! But I have to say, even though sequel would sound fantastic, I would much rather see the prequel to this mess of a relationship...
Oh, wow, anon! I don't mind dub-con at all (but if you want to do a consensual version I would love you for always :) That was HOT STUFF, anon ... loved the way you handled the smut, and the events surrounding it definitely have me interested. *joins chanting for sequel/prequel*
Re: the sound of silence. 1a/1
anonymous
January 26 2011, 01:59:13 UTC
I have a huge sounding kink, and normally dubcon is fine with me too, but the overall darkness kinda.... turned me off =( Sorry authornon. It's well written, and I'm really liking the way you write smut, but...
I guess what I'm saying is I WOULD LOVE YOU SO MUCH FOREVER IF YOU WROTE THE CONSENSUAL VERSION YOU MENTIONED 8D SRSLY IT WOULD MAKE MY LIFE.
sleep soundly, love 1/?
anonymous
January 26 2011, 10:49:12 UTC
Um, so I think the general consensus was that a prequel should be in order? And I make lame puns with songs, the sound of silence and sleep soundly love (okay so it's a little too far off from speak softly, love), har har har orz Err I was thinking that maybe 911 or something made America weird and stuff like that but I thought it may be a little insensitive and stuff so like. Sighhhh. Anyway here's the first bit of the prequel. Does OP want sounding in it too, or...?
Canada's head hurts. It hurts so badly and his world is spinning round and round and round and round and he has no idea where he is. The last thing he remembers is talking to France, after a World Meeting, with him asking if he was alright because he looked a little pale and he said he was fine even though he had been suffering from insomnia every night. England came along after that, and he asked something too, but he cannot remember what it is, it sounds dull and fuzzy in his head, muffled, incomprehensible. His head hurts too much, so he stops trying to remember and
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Wow! This prequel definitely has me excited for more~ It was amazing how gritty and real you wrote every line - really made me feel Canada's fear (and I am very much anticipating what comes next ...)
It's definitely not my place to demand a consensual version XD You've already given me an awesome scene and a half. If you become less busy and feel inspired, however ... *wiggles eyebrows*
As for sounding in the prequel: I'd love you forever if you fit it in, but if you don't feel like it/it feels clunky, no need. Other bondageish kinks are aok with me!
sleep soundly, love 2/?
anonymous
January 27 2011, 14:30:00 UTC
I am so screwed up. I don't know why I'm listening to Smoke Gets In Your Eyes as I write this. Good Lord.
America will come for me, he repeats in his head, over and over again. It's his new mantra, he clings on to those five words, hangs on to it desperately, pitifully, clawing at it, trying to convince himself that someone will remember.
No, someone has to remember.
He takes a deep breath and rolls over, resting on his side so he won't have to lean on his arms. His wrists hurt (no, everything hurts) and he wonders if he'll fall asleep soon enough, because there's nothing else better to do apart from waiting. Waiting is painful, because when he's awake, he thinks of things, things that he shouldn't be thinking about, like how he looks at America sometimes and wonders what will happen if they weren't brothers and he tries to push it back all the way, tries to tear the thought into a million pieces but it refuses to disappear and his head hurts, hurts, hurtsHe squeezes his eyes shut and tries to lull himself to sleep by thinking of a
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(basically, sticking a long, thin tube down a man's urethra)
Rarepairs equally loved!
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Canada hates how he becomes a quivering mess merely from America's ministrations. He slides the sound in again and sweet heavens above it feels goddamned wonderful and when America presses down lightly on his perineum, pulling the sound out, he spills his seed all over his brother's hand ( ... )
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Sequel! Squeal! Sequel!
Etc, etc.
Yeaaaaahhhhh I liked it. Way to tackle a seldom-seen kink, and mix all sorts of freaky possessiveness shit in there with it.
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But I have to say, even though sequel would sound fantastic, I would much rather see the prequel to this mess of a relationship...
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I LIKE THE "SOUND" OF BOTH A PREQUEL AND A SEQUEL~!
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I guess what I'm saying is I WOULD LOVE YOU SO MUCH FOREVER IF YOU WROTE THE CONSENSUAL VERSION YOU MENTIONED 8D SRSLY IT WOULD MAKE MY LIFE.
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Canada's head hurts. It hurts so badly and his world is spinning round and round and round and round and he has no idea where he is. The last thing he remembers is talking to France, after a World Meeting, with him asking if he was alright because he looked a little pale and he said he was fine even though he had been suffering from insomnia every night. England came along after that, and he asked something too, but he cannot remember what it is, it sounds dull and fuzzy in his head, muffled, incomprehensible. His head hurts too much, so he stops trying to remember and ( ... )
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You're actually writing the prequel.
*rolls in fits of ecstatic energy*
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It's definitely not my place to demand a consensual version XD You've already given me an awesome scene and a half. If you become less busy and feel inspired, however ... *wiggles eyebrows*
As for sounding in the prequel: I'd love you forever if you fit it in, but if you don't feel like it/it feels clunky, no need. Other bondageish kinks are aok with me!
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America will come for me, he repeats in his head, over and over again. It's his new mantra, he clings on to those five words, hangs on to it desperately, pitifully, clawing at it, trying to convince himself that someone will remember.
No, someone has to remember.
He takes a deep breath and rolls over, resting on his side so he won't have to lean on his arms. His wrists hurt (no, everything hurts) and he wonders if he'll fall asleep soon enough, because there's nothing else better to do apart from waiting. Waiting is painful, because when he's awake, he thinks of things, things that he shouldn't be thinking about, like how he looks at America sometimes and wonders what will happen if they weren't brothers and he tries to push it back all the way, tries to tear the thought into a million pieces but it refuses to disappear and his head hurts, hurts, hurtsHe squeezes his eyes shut and tries to lull himself to sleep by thinking of a ( ... )
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More than okay, hon.
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