gentleman caller (p1/3)
anonymous
February 11 2011, 07:01:35 UTC
This is anon's first time writing smutfic; please be gentle to her! Rhe poem in here is 'i like my body when it is with your' by e. e. cummings ~ and nah, the title doesn't have anything to do with anything. I just like how it sounds.Maybe it was the heat that did it. It had a mind of its own, after all. Always did
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gentleman caller (p2/3)
anonymous
February 11 2011, 07:03:00 UTC
After a good long while, she became bored with just looking - not that she couldn’t stare all day - and something compelled her to move forward, to touch him, to see if he was real and there because she wasn’t, generally, that lucky a person. She reached her arm up, out, carefully, and brushed his shoulder. He was warm to the touch, pleasantly so, and didn’t move at all.
Good, some lonely part of her encouraged. Good.
“Heracles.” She tried next, exhaling his name on a soft, hesitant breath. He stirred and she froze, but when he went back to being still she melted and grinned impishly. She was about to move in closer when she realized -
with a too-loud squeak, what she was doing -
what was she even doing?Kiku, blushing petal red, rolled over to the other side of the bed and tried not to let herself unravel into a mess of raw horny panic. She pressed her hands over her mouth and stared at the sterile white wall. It was pleasantly nonthreatening and also quite unsexy
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gentleman caller (p3/4)
anonymous
February 11 2011, 07:04:38 UTC
In the ideal situation, any number of things would have happened. The bed might have been sucked into a huge, endless void, taking her (but not him) with it to be punished forever in the so-professed fires of Hell. There would have been a knife placed conveniently near the bed, perfect for an ‘honorable’ death via the spilling of entrails. She would have woken up from this dream, he wouldn’t have woken up at all, she wouldn’t have been doing any of this in the first place.None of those happened. Of course not. Kiku was not, in general, a lucky girl
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gentleman caller (p4/4)
anonymous
February 11 2011, 07:05:23 UTC
She crawled back over as he spoke, mounting him and staring down with a feigned glare as he delivered those lines so easily, so perfectly, it was as if he had been created just to speak them to her, to seduce her, to make love to her. So smug, but - irresistible. When she silenced him with a firm kiss she could feel his grin and nipped him for it.
“May I?” he asked softly as he toyed with the hem of her camisole, after they broke. Could she deny him? Never. Every last bit of her ached for him. She nodded and he pulled it up over her head, removing it with a little of her help and quickly sending her bra the same way. She watched the way his muscles moved, his ways, his hows -
He made a poet of her, it seemed. A slut, too. Perhaps it was sad how quickly she let go of her ideals once sex and literature were involved, but it didn’t matter one bit once he rested his hand on her back, the other on her hip. She smiled lightly and kissed him again, again, again. The thrill of shot sparks in her stomach, made her feel aliveAnd again - but
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Re: gentleman caller (p4/4)
anonymous
February 11 2011, 17:22:45 UTC
I made gurgling noises while reading this because gaaaauuuuh, this was just too perfect. I especially loved fem!Japan's voice; you somehow managed to make her sound very female (if that makes any sense) while at the same time keeping her very Japan:
In the ideal situation, any number of things would have happened. The bed might have been sucked into a huge, endless void, taking her (but not him) with it to be punished forever in the so-professed fires of Hell. There would have been a knife placed conveniently near the bed, perfect for an ‘honorable’ death via the spilling of entrails. She would have woken up from this dream, he wouldn’t have woken up at all, she wouldn’t have been doing any of this in the first place.
None of those happened. Of course not. Kiku was not, in general, a lucky girl.
Love it!
Also loved Greece managing to be smug yet still adorable. Love them both together, really. ♥
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Good, some lonely part of her encouraged. Good.
“Heracles.” She tried next, exhaling his name on a soft, hesitant breath. He stirred and she froze, but when he went back to being still she melted and grinned impishly. She was about to move in closer when she realized -
with a too-loud squeak, what she was doing -
what was she even doing?Kiku, blushing petal red, rolled over to the other side of the bed and tried not to let herself unravel into a mess of raw horny panic. She pressed her hands over her mouth and stared at the sterile white wall. It was pleasantly nonthreatening and also quite unsexy ( ... )
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“May I?” he asked softly as he toyed with the hem of her camisole, after they broke. Could she deny him? Never. Every last bit of her ached for him. She nodded and he pulled it up over her head, removing it with a little of her help and quickly sending her bra the same way. She watched the way his muscles moved, his ways, his hows -
He made a poet of her, it seemed. A slut, too. Perhaps it was sad how quickly she let go of her ideals once sex and literature were involved, but it didn’t matter one bit once he rested his hand on her back, the other on her hip. She smiled lightly and kissed him again, again, again. The thrill of shot sparks in her stomach, made her feel aliveAnd again - but ( ... )
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In the ideal situation, any number of things would have happened. The bed might have been sucked into a huge, endless void, taking her (but not him) with it to be punished forever in the so-professed fires of Hell. There would have been a knife placed conveniently near the bed, perfect for an ‘honorable’ death via the spilling of entrails. She would have woken up from this dream, he wouldn’t have woken up at all, she wouldn’t have been doing any of this in the first place.
None of those happened. Of course not. Kiku was not, in general, a lucky girl.
Love it!
Also loved Greece managing to be smug yet still adorable. Love them both together, really. ♥
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most of this was based off of this image:
http://fuckyeahsexypanties.tumblr.com/post/3191801773
if that ~enhances~ anything
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