US/UK: UK is fail!vampire, US is normal person who helps him out
anonymous
February 11 2011, 15:37:26 UTC
US is a normal person who is cheerfully really into the pop culture of vampires. UK is a fail vampire who is rather srs bznz (but collects unicorn plushies and does embroidery!), but still fail. So fail, he can't find the right veins to get blood from Alfred, who has to do research in the library and draws little circles in his skin so that Arthur would know where to bite.
Bonuses: Smut Arthur isn't...quite as fail as he seems Happy ending
Acting responsible with your vampire 1/?
anonymous
February 21 2011, 22:36:14 UTC
Arthur Kirkland, 4th in line successor of his father James Kirkland, a descendant of great count Dracula, opened his eyes to complete silence and darkness of his bedroom. He had learnt to savour this special feeling of peace throughout his long existence. His 23 years long existence, and especially since he moved out 4 years ago from his home and family to another haunted mansion
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Re: Acting responsible with your vampire 1/?
anonymous
February 22 2011, 16:30:36 UTC
Fffff the title, it's win xDDD
And like the anon above said, this looks promising, anon! I love vampire!Arthur and human!Alfred, and in my headcanon, yes, Arthur fails a bit as a vampire.
Re: Acting responsible with your vampire 1/?
anonymous
February 22 2011, 20:33:47 UTC
I like where this is going, but might I suggest getting a beta? Even a friend who is good at grammar would be good. You've got some easy-to-fix errors in your structure that could easily be fixed, and keep grammar snobs from glancing past your story.
It's just a thought - I'll probably keep reading anyway - but if you want others who are more picky to still follow your story, it'd be a fabulous idea.
Acting responsible with your vampire 1b/?
anonymous
February 22 2011, 22:18:15 UTC
Alfred thought it was the best day of his life. It wouldn't be better, if he had a winning lottery ticket. Excitement was a mild description of what he felt. Obviously, not because he nearly run over a stranger when he was going back home from a party, however it did concerned the said person
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Acting responsible with your vampire 1c/?
anonymous
February 22 2011, 22:19:43 UTC
After looking on the t-shirt for couple of minutes, Alfred decided that it was absolutely necessary to look underneath. Just to check if his new friend was not injured by something. A silver object embed into the flesh, a cross cut onto the skin or wood staked through the heart could inflict great damage. Vampires were such delicate creatures. Trying not to tremble, he lifted the fabric with his hand. Underneath Alfred didn't see anything out of ordinary. A bit of disappointment
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Re: Acting responsible with your vampire 1c/?
anonymous
February 23 2011, 04:32:18 UTC
This seems really interesting so far!
Ohoo Alfred already knows he's a vampire! Reading the author's comment, I think I get why Arthur's pale now and rather ashamed I didn't notice the connection earlier.
Not that this is the same anon, or that I have good grammar or anything but definitely no eyeburning. ♥
Acting responsible with your vampire 4a/?
anonymous
April 16 2011, 13:15:55 UTC
Arthur gazed at the setting sun. It was a warm evening. He didn't have to be bothered to shield himself from the rays at this hour. He was sitting on the veranda, doing the crucial maintenance of his collection. He was currently brushing thought the mane of an unicorn, set to give all of his plushies a bath. He was a serious collector of toys, very special toys connected to his favorite movies. Passion from his childhood
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Acting responsible with your vampire 2a/?
anonymous
February 26 2011, 23:02:16 UTC
Arthur compelled with the request and slowly lied down on the bed. In this position he felt less dizzy but more threatened. He was alert, eyes intently watching the other's move. It's not easy to relax in a stranger's home
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Bonuses:
Smut
Arthur isn't...quite as fail as he seems
Happy ending
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hoping to see you writing more of this soon!
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And like the anon above said, this looks promising, anon! I love vampire!Arthur and human!Alfred, and in my headcanon, yes, Arthur fails a bit as a vampire.
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It's just a thought - I'll probably keep reading anyway - but if you want others who are more picky to still follow your story, it'd be a fabulous idea.
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Marvellously funny, I can't wait for more!! ^o^
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Ohoo Alfred already knows he's a vampire! Reading the author's comment, I think I get why Arthur's pale now and rather ashamed I didn't notice the connection earlier.
Not that this is the same anon, or that I have good grammar or anything but definitely no eyeburning. ♥
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