Playful Day In Bed [1/2]
anonymous
February 24 2011, 13:18:07 UTC
Aw it seems someone else filled it already.. Well, you said multiple fills are good so I decided after long struggle to post it... Though I’m embarrassed at the way it turned out. It’s my first ever kink-fill so please go easy on me…
Warming: sex scene but very light, not much mentioned… ^^” , and my bad English, sorry…
It was just another evening, one just like many others there were. Day without any obligations, without any reason to even take one step from the warmth of the covers. It was just another day that England found himself lying on America’s laps while he was sitting and slowly, almost you could say unconsciously, running his fingers though the man’s soft hair. This small gesture that was as normal as eating and even breathing
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Re: Playful Day In Bed [2/2]
anonymous
February 24 2011, 13:19:13 UTC
Slowly England freed his hands from America’s grip who wasn’t fighting it that much and started tracing his fingers down his chest till he finally came to belt of the trousers. Without breaking the eye-contact he kept his hand there, he could see the lust in America’s eyes and saw him opening his mouth. Bringing his other hand up he placed one finger on the other’s lips keeping him silent. “Shh…” But that made it even harder for America to be still and wait till England started doing something, anything. The finger slowly began tracing the lower lip, then the upper. Not being able to control it he caught the finger between his teeth and started sucking on it. He couldn’t help a smile at the look of pleasure that appeared on England’s face, he loved it when he was the one to make the older nation feel good. Then he took the hand in both of his and planted many kisses on it
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Re: Playful Day In Bed [2/2]
anonymous
February 24 2011, 22:13:34 UTC
Aww. That was sweet and I did like the light/not in great detail sex scene, it was hot. And I love Texas play and yes I got the 'in America' reference.
And the last line captured it perfectly.
Just a little thing, with sex scenes between two people of the same sex especially, you need to watch the pronouns. Don't overuse their names or epithets too much but using 'he' all the time can be confusing about which 'he' you mean. I got confused a couple of times but it didn't detract from my enjoyment of this fill.
Warming: sex scene but very light, not much mentioned… ^^” , and my bad English, sorry…
It was just another evening, one just like many others there were. Day without any obligations, without any reason to even take one step from the warmth of the covers. It was just another day that England found himself lying on America’s laps while he was sitting and slowly, almost you could say unconsciously, running his fingers though the man’s soft hair. This small gesture that was as normal as eating and even breathing ( ... )
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And the last line captured it perfectly.
Just a little thing, with sex scenes between two people of the same sex especially, you need to watch the pronouns. Don't overuse their names or epithets too much but using 'he' all the time can be confusing about which 'he' you mean. I got confused a couple of times but it didn't detract from my enjoyment of this fill.
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This thing is so sweet <3 Thank you so much for writing it! Thank you <3 Love both fills OP had gotten so far, no lie, absolutely adore both <3
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