USUK - England dies
anonymous
February 24 2011, 20:04:24 UTC
England dies for whatever reason - some terrible event in the future that effets the country, or maybe he just dies in a car accident or whatever, I don't mind. America was dating him, and mourns.
God Particle - 1/5
anonymous
March 5 2011, 07:10:03 UTC
The house was in ruins. France’s breath hitched in his throat as he wandered down the snowy road, snow drifting lazily about them in the dusk, and he saw part of the glamorous front porch in cinders by the front door. His breath quickened and he felt the air stiffen between him and America, and suddenly America was off, stomping through the layer of snow that had fallen in his black combat boots, running as fast as he could up the remaining stairs and bursting into the house, the front door swinging lazily on only two hinges. France followed America inside, and settled his eyes on the parlor, where there were books thrown every which way, and the curtains were torn straight from the windows and the furniture looked as if it had been ransacked
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Re: God Particle - 2/5
anonymous
March 5 2011, 07:11:29 UTC
America faltered, and, his heart racing, practically leapt down the stairs, nearly toppling over the handrail in his haste. He ran through the parlor, the sitting room, and the dining room, the air frigid, small tufts of snow forming on the carpet and on the furniture where it drifted through the holes in the walls
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Re: God Particle - 3/5
anonymous
March 5 2011, 07:12:26 UTC
England was heavy, and absolutely freezing to the touch. His skin was as white as ice, and had a waxy thickness to it that frightened America. His olive green jacket was stained a very dark red, so dark it almost looked black, and he could see where the fabric had been ripped apart by bullets. America trailed his eyes over the broken skin, the ripped shirt beneath his lapel, the bits of shrapnel buried in his muscle. He could even see bits of a bone, in his collarbone and his neck, where he had been hit the worst, the muscle and the sinews all blasted away. The blood was dark, sticky syrup over his body
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Re: God Particle - 4/4, actually.
anonymous
March 5 2011, 07:14:26 UTC
America buried his nose in England’s hair, and he cried. He scrunched himself up into a ball, and at first the tears came slowly but a dam had cracked within him, and instead he had wracking sobs that tore daggers into France’s very soul. America’s shoulders heaved and he lost so much breath he hiccupped, but still he cried
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Oh, wow. This was amazing, just the kind of fill I was hoping for. It was so sad, it really twisted my stomach. I like how you used France's POV, too. I love this!
Yay I'm so glad you liked it! I'd been toying with this idea that Germany went on a murdering rampage during WWII and then I saw the prompt and I thought hey, opportunity! Btw if you're curious, the title comes from the song I was listening to while writing. It's from the Angels and Demons soundtrack and it's AMAZING.
A sad ending. Make me cry.
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Thank you so much for filling.
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=572CmMA6-Rk
You can listen there if you'd like!
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