it always hurts. (france/canada) 1/2
anonymous
February 28 2011, 13:46:02 UTC
This is the same anon from the England fill. Hope OP likes this one too...
When it comes to Francis, there are no furtive kisses nor feather-light touches. There is only the quick unbuttoning of jeans, boxers swiftly yanked aside and then Matthew is down on his knees, looking up at Francis for a brief moment - long enough to affirm that he wants it but not long enough to lock gazes - before it begins.
Lick, suck, swirl. Rinse and repeat, slide tongue along the underside, blow air against the tip. He knows exactly what to do, where to touch, where to apply pressure on and where to scrape his teeth against. His fingernails leave tiny red crescents on Francis' inner thighs as he teases the leaking slit with his tongue.
"Don't," Francis murmurs, hands reaching down idly to swat Matthew's fingers away. "They'll leave marks."
But you see, that's the reason why I'm doing it, Matthew stops himself from uttering those words just in time, doing as he is told and he is rewarded with a pleasured sigh from Francis
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it always hurts. (france/canada) 2/2
anonymous
February 28 2011, 13:47:51 UTC
But he knows that he is in too deep now, drowning in the depths with no chance of getting out. Francis merely looks past him in a crowd, every time they meet, they don't even talk, they just cut to the chase and it's just mindless fucking. So instead, Matthew tries to bury his feelings for him deep down inside because he thinks that maybe, just maybe, physical pleasure will be able to cancel out emotional pain
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Re: it always hurts. (france/canada) 2/2
anonymous
February 28 2011, 15:43:56 UTC
bawwwww the angsttt ;___;
A!A that was beautiful, I love you forever. Really, your Matthew, oh God, your Matthew... .__.
Would it be too much to ask for a sequel, maybe? I'm a real fan of angst, and man, this looks like something that can fulfill my angst desires ;-; + it has Francis in it. BONUS!
Re: it always hurts. (france/canada) 2/2
anonymous
February 28 2011, 17:06:12 UTC
OP here. Seriously, I'm B'awwing over here. This is so sad but really good too. I like how they're more human in this fill and you manage to put in a lot of emotion in just two parts. It was definitely up to scratch!
Re: it always hurts. (france/canada) 2/2
anonymous
March 2 2011, 16:01:51 UTC
But you see, that's the reason why I'm doing it
This line is just gorgeous. The entire thing is heartbreaking yet it's exactly what I want - to see Franada changed up into something less fluffy and more realistic (imo). Lovely fill ♥
My only nitpick is your use of "car park" rather than "parking lot" in the first section. It threw me out of the narrative, because car park isn't a term Canadians use (unless it's a regional thing, but I've only heard it used in British television). It's not a big problem though, just thought I'd point it out for future reference!
ahh thanks for pointing it out! err it's kinda like a silly mistake of mine, because where i'm from, we generally use the british way of saying things (car park, football etc) so, eep!
When it comes to Francis, there are no furtive kisses nor feather-light touches. There is only the quick unbuttoning of jeans, boxers swiftly yanked aside and then Matthew is down on his knees, looking up at Francis for a brief moment - long enough to affirm that he wants it but not long enough to lock gazes - before it begins.
Lick, suck, swirl. Rinse and repeat, slide tongue along the underside, blow air against the tip. He knows exactly what to do, where to touch, where to apply pressure on and where to scrape his teeth against. His fingernails leave tiny red crescents on Francis' inner thighs as he teases the leaking slit with his tongue.
"Don't," Francis murmurs, hands reaching down idly to swat Matthew's fingers away. "They'll leave marks."
But you see, that's the reason why I'm doing it, Matthew stops himself from uttering those words just in time, doing as he is told and he is rewarded with a pleasured sigh from Francis ( ... )
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A!A that was beautiful, I love you forever. Really, your Matthew, oh God, your Matthew... .__.
Would it be too much to ask for a sequel, maybe? I'm a real fan of angst, and man, this looks like something that can fulfill my angst desires ;-; + it has Francis in it. BONUS!
A-anyway.. awesome fill, really.
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This line is just gorgeous. The entire thing is heartbreaking yet it's exactly what I want - to see Franada changed up into something less fluffy and more realistic (imo). Lovely fill ♥
My only nitpick is your use of "car park" rather than "parking lot" in the first section. It threw me out of the narrative, because car park isn't a term Canadians use (unless it's a regional thing, but I've only heard it used in British television). It's not a big problem though, just thought I'd point it out for future reference!
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this is just too sad..i feel sooo sorry for poor mattrew!!! damm you France...
sad story!
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