USxUK; Voyeur!France describing the view to Spain and Prussia
anonymous
March 1 2011, 10:41:00 UTC
France has a lovely view from his hotel room looking straight into England’s bedroom - whom of which happens to be in a secret relationship with America. I want France sitting by his window, lights off, a glass of wine in his hand as he watches England and America have sex, describing in great detail to Spain and Prussia over the phone.
The Notes of a Hotel Voyeur 1/?
anonymous
March 18 2011, 09:22:08 UTC
Not really what OP asked, but... Also, I think, I need to warn you that it's my first try and my English is pretty much limping on both legs. But I hope OP still enjoy my failed attempt in humor and crooked “smut” [It supposed to be some kind of funny]. Yeah, so I apologize in advance if your eyes bleed out after reading that.Playful summer wind gently stirred Francis' hair. The personification of France was comfortably sitting in a cane-chair, situated on a balcony of his posh room in a five-star hotel, and slowly sipping the montrachet wine
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Re: The Notes of a Hotel Voyeur 2/?
anonymous
March 18 2011, 12:43:42 UTC
Not!OP, but MAN this is fantastic XD And your English is fine! Only a few grammar skirmishes but other than that, this is a great story. I can't wait to see moooore
Re: The Notes of a Hotel Voyeur 2/?
anonymous
March 18 2011, 16:19:12 UTC
LMAO. I'm in class and trying not to burst out laughing. But it'd be kinda suspicious if I laughed hysterically at land marking. Francis is such a drama queen.
You're English is fine. You can get it beta'd if you're worried.
XD Omigwad, this is fantastic! France describing the sight like some cheesy romance novel is just so perfect. And Antonio’s comments are just so funny; he’s such an airhead. <3
Your English is fine, better than most, I can tell you ;) And this fill is looking amazing so far, just what I had in mind, so I’m more than ecstatic by this. Seriously can’t wait for more updates from you. This has been a naughty pleasure for me to read :3
The Notes of a Hotel Voyeur 3/4
anonymous
March 20 2011, 11:31:33 UTC
Thank you all guys for such a great comments. You're awesome. I so happy you've enjoyed this story and hope the other part won't disappoint you.Ignoring Prussia's obnoxious voice too, France carried on: “As if possible, the blond clenches his lover tighter, rolling and twisting in ever escalating spirals of the explosive love. Cradling his head, the sandy blond is scrambling kisses over his lips, and cheeks, and chin, and nose, and forehead, and ears, and neck in frantic outpourings of rampant passions
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Humorous and hot, if you would, Anons.
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“Kick-ass porn?”
“Mi dulce chico?” Prussia and Spain asked almost at the same time ( ... )
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You're English is fine. You can get it beta'd if you're worried.
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Your English is fine, better than most, I can tell you ;) And this fill is looking amazing so far, just what I had in mind, so I’m more than ecstatic by this. Seriously can’t wait for more updates from you. This has been a naughty pleasure for me to read :3
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i simply cannot wait for more!
France would write good smutfic
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I loved it. I will cherish this fill always <3 <3
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