FrSp – keeping it secret from Prussia
anonymous
March 13 2011, 15:21:16 UTC
France and Spain have been together for a while. But they are also capable of having fun like friends and go crazy with Prussia, flirt with others, get drunk and behave like bros… Not wanting to make Prussia feel left out or weird him, they’ve kept it a secret.
One day, Prussia sees them kissing on the street. Go from there.
Bonus if Prussia has had a crush on one of them (or both!) for a long time but pushed it back to keep it all bros. But no threesome in the end, please; Spain and France are committed to each other.
Re: Cyanide-Laced Demarera [2/2]
anonymous
March 14 2011, 08:10:14 UTC
Poor Prussia! Being the third wheel sucks ass. I love how you wrote this though. Prussia's view and melancholy of the entire situation was more interesting to me than if he'd just kept up a happy-go-lucky charm right through til the end. Great work!
Re: Cyanide-Laced Demarera [2/2]
anonymous
March 14 2011, 11:52:53 UTC
Bawww, author anon, I loved it! I didn't even consider the betrayal angle without love feelings, but it makes so much sense...after all, wouldn't we feel betrayed if our best friend had a boyfriend and didn't tell us, never mind both best friends with each other? Poor Prussia. It was painful but very good to see him with so much bitterness and anger over his strange existance nowadays, and the vague jealousy over his friends (he seems jealous of their mutual companionship but also their looks and purpose and personality -passionate and warm-, and less about the relationship itself, which was a surprise and nice). Nice little touch with Romano, btw, he'd be the one to recognize the purposelessness, the loneliness and the jealousy (it's weird, but you convinced me just now of the compatibility of a pairing that your fic didn't even feature!). Thank you for filling!
Not wanting to make Prussia feel left out or weird him, they’ve kept it a secret.
One day, Prussia sees them kissing on the street.
Go from there.
Bonus if Prussia has had a crush on one of them (or both!) for a long time but pushed it back to keep it all bros.
But no threesome in the end, please; Spain and France are committed to each other.
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Sequel? Happy ending mebbe? ;o;
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