AU England/America/Russia raising kid
anonymous
April 9 2011, 22:48:34 UTC
An AU where During a big make out session at Alfred's house, Ivan and Arthur get a big surprise a 3-5 year old boy barges in, but Alfred never told them about his child. Cause ensues. After some arguing Alfred admits he's never told them about his child because he was scared that they would leave him. Arthur and Ivan stay with Alfred and try to connect with the child.
Bonus: .The kid is Mattie .Ivan teaches him hockey .Mathew adores Arthur since he thinks that Arthur is his Mom because he looks, acts, and talks almost exactly like her.
One Happy Family. Prologue
anonymous
April 20 2011, 10:35:23 UTC
This is my first time really posting anything in the kink meme (I really just lurked around only) so please forgive me if I do something wrong (like posting in the wrong place). Any advice would be amazing! Also not beta'd and written kinda spur of the moment (I am in the car on going on vacation and wanted something to do. Found this post and ideas just kinda filled my head getting me out of some serious writers block. It will get better I promise. Sorry in advance for my not the best grammar.
~Prologue~ This could not be happening. No it was a dream gone to a night mare and any second now he’d wake up.
Any second now.
ANY SECOND NOW.
“Daddy?”
Fuck! Not a dream but a nightmare. Someone out there hated him he just knew it. Only a few minutes ago his boyfriends, (Yes plural because he had two) had showed up at his door for a surprise visit. Next thing he knows is Ivan’s tongue is down his throat and Arthur is doing interesting things with his mouth to his exposed neck.
Happy Birthday to him~!Then that evil bitch that loved to
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OP gives a thousand hugs to the author:)
anonymous
April 21 2011, 23:11:52 UTC
Thank you!!!
I'm so happy that you decided to fill this out! It's o.k. if your slow at updating since it's more about the quality of the work than anything for me. I like how you started this out and I'm very interested to see where you'll be taking this story.Please keep up the good work:D
Re: One Happy Family. Prologue
anonymous
April 22 2011, 07:17:45 UTC
lol I wish I knew where the others found the cute. Everything I read made me sad. Don't get me wrong its a GREAT beginning but its also a really sad one. Poor Mattie probably has to deal with a lot and so does Alfred.
The other two are probably feeling really left out now too.
Re: One Happy Family. Prologue
anonymous
April 22 2011, 22:58:15 UTC
Yeah I agree that the beginning does have its sad part, i.e Alfred and Matthew's mother obviously do not get along and the whole custody issue. However, I thought it was nice how Alfred obviously still love his son and their interaction really was adorable. That's just my take on it.
One Happy Family. Chapter one
anonymous
April 23 2011, 19:26:30 UTC
To say the atmosphere in the living room was so thick you could cut it with a butter knife, was an understatement. Alfred sat nervously in the chair beside the couch with his head bowed low. The two on the couch sat closer together as they looked at Alfred with hurt filled eyes
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Annon-Author notes here.
anonymous
April 23 2011, 19:27:46 UTC
I am sorry if this is crap. I feel that it is, and this chapter was difficult to write. Alfred is a bit OOC, but that is just right now when he is under stress and his emotions are a bit whacked. I kinda rushed through the explanation for him hiding Matthew as well for a reason. (I want to write more of them bonding with Matthew as he grows up and the problems they face while becoming a family.) Chapters will become longer soon too. Also Ivan's broken English is my head cannon. Him stumbling with sentences and stuff when very emotional just seems so cute to me.
Sorry again if my grammar is crap. I am my own beta and reread my chapters at least three times, but have never been good at picking out mistakes.
OP gives the author a pat on the back
anonymous
April 26 2011, 00:38:53 UTC
Yes! Update:D
It's o.k. if the explanation was rushed since I wanted to see Mattew being raised by Alfred, Ivan, and Arther. Plus the OOC for Alfred is understandable since most people would have some sort of breakdown if a big secret like that got out.
Please don't freak out so much. You're doing fine and I know I can trust you to write a good story. Besides, the only way that anyone can really improve is if they try to do it. So please don't feel so discouraged about your work and just If you try to force a good story out of you and constantly think about your errors then it'll show in your work very easily.
One Happy Family. Chapter 2a
anonymous
April 28 2011, 23:27:03 UTC
Arthur watched as Ivan followed Alfred into the blondes kitchen. When Alfred said he had t get dinner ready Ivan had looked at Alfred in horror and asked how him or his son was not dead from Alfred’s cooking. They had once let Alfred cook when he stayed over at their house and well their nighttime plans had changed entirely as Alfred had to take care of his sick boyfriends
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One Happy Family. Chapter 2 notes
anonymous
April 28 2011, 23:39:26 UTC
author’s notesThank you so much OP for that awesome review of last chapter and also those Prussia level of awesome people who have reviewed. I want to thank you all for your support
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Bonus:
.The kid is Mattie
.Ivan teaches him hockey
.Mathew adores Arthur since he thinks that Arthur is his Mom because he looks, acts, and talks almost exactly like her.
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~Prologue~
This could not be happening. No it was a dream gone to a night mare and any second now he’d wake up.
Any second now.
ANY SECOND NOW.
“Daddy?”
Fuck!
Not a dream but a nightmare.
Someone out there hated him he just knew it.
Only a few minutes ago his boyfriends, (Yes plural because he had two) had showed up at his door for a surprise visit. Next thing he knows is Ivan’s tongue is down his throat and Arthur is doing interesting things with his mouth to his exposed neck.
Happy Birthday to him~!Then that evil bitch that loved to ( ... )
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But, dammit, now I don't feel right with beginning my fill for this on Alfred's birthday ... ah, no matter have to search for another date ..
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I'm so happy that you decided to fill this out! It's o.k. if your slow at updating since it's more about the quality of the work than anything for me. I like how you started this out and I'm very interested to see where you'll be taking this story.Please keep up the good work:D
Mattie-baby is such a cute nickname for the kid:3
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Yeah Mattie-baby just came to me while writing it, and it made me think of something Alfred really would call his own kid.
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The other two are probably feeling really left out now too.
So, ya no cute but a lot of great.
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Please do continue.
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Also Ivan's broken English is my head cannon. Him stumbling with sentences and stuff when very emotional just seems so cute to me.
Sorry again if my grammar is crap. I am my own beta and reread my chapters at least three times, but have never been good at picking out mistakes.
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It's o.k. if the explanation was rushed since I wanted to see Mattew being raised by Alfred, Ivan, and Arther. Plus the OOC for Alfred is understandable since most people would have some sort of breakdown if a big secret like that got out.
Please don't freak out so much. You're doing fine and I know I can trust you to write a good story. Besides, the only way that anyone can really improve is if they try to do it. So please don't feel so discouraged about your work and just If you try to force a good story out of you and constantly think about your errors then it'll show in your work very easily.
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