Cloudy With a Chance of Annoyance [01/??]
anonymous
May 8 2011, 02:37:35 UTC
He could not find him. Spain had searched both in and outside his house for the last two hours and still no sign. It was a lazy Saturday and he usually saw the younger man at least once (usually being told to cook or being given some other command), but he had yet to see or even hear from him. Where could he have gotten to?Just as he was about to give up his search and head back inside he saw the Italian sitting beneath a tree looking up at the sky. The Spaniard gave a sigh of relief as he made his way over to his lover
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Re: Cloudy With a Chance of Annoyance [01/??]
anonymous
May 8 2011, 02:43:54 UTC
AN: This is the first fic I’ve written in a long time, and the first Hetalia one. So please go easy one me~ Also, if I got anything wrong when Veneziano was talking about clouds, sorry. I was going off my notes from Geo and a website about clouds. I should have the next part out in a few days because I've already started working on it.
Re: Cloudy With a Chance of Annoyance [01/??]
anonymous
May 8 2011, 07:06:17 UTC
I just filled this too, but I have to say that your fill looks like it's going to be a lot better than mine. I love Romano's interactions with Spain and Italy, and am interested as to what kind of plot this setup will lead to.
I like how you included Lovino both drawing and being insecure about it, and his annoyance about being there but he stays anyway, so cute! Also, the idea of Germany teaching Italy is so cool, I can imagine that happening - Germany naming them all and Italy being like 'It looks like a squirrel!' Thank you very much for filling, I'll look forward to the next part!
Re: Cloudy With a Chance of Annoyance [02/02]
anonymous
May 10 2011, 19:14:19 UTC
An hour later the three were still under the tree looking up at the sky. The sketchbook had been abandoned as the three lay in the grass. Actually, Spain had taken the sketchbook from him and pulled Romano into laying down between him and Veneziano
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Watching Changes [1/2]
anonymous
May 8 2011, 06:59:44 UTC
This was meant to be just a quick fill, but the other anon beat me to it with the start of a much better and more interesting fill than this. I'll probably need to edit this, but I hope it's not complete fail.
"I think that one looks like my head," Greece said, pointing to a large cloud with several wisps protruding from it.
Japan examined the cloud for several moments, turned to gaze at the actual Greece's face for some time, and then looked back at the cloud. It still looked more like a blob with questionably-shaped appendages than anything else to him. "I don't think your hair's that...curly."
Greece twisted one lock of his hair around his finger, drew it up where he could stare at it, and then let it fall back down. "Maybe it's raining over there then, which is why my hair looks so curly."
Was Greece still self-conscious about that? "I've told you before that your hair looks no different or worse in the rain," Japan said
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D'aww, this was so sweet! I loved how they made a situation paralell to a real situation in the clouds, and I loved the relaxed tone of it! It reminded me a bit of that cloud-watching bit from UP, actually! Really nice, I enjoyed it - ie, not a complete fail. I enjoy short fills as much as long ones~ thank you so much for filling!
Bonus: A bit of cloud knowledge. Perhaps someone teaching someone else about the clouds?
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Also, if I got anything wrong when Veneziano was talking about clouds, sorry. I was going off my notes from Geo and a website about clouds.
I should have the next part out in a few days because I've already started working on it.
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Also, the idea of Germany teaching Italy is so cool, I can imagine that happening - Germany naming them all and Italy being like 'It looks like a squirrel!'
Thank you very much for filling, I'll look forward to the next part!
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I had fun with this fill, it's kinda addicting!
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"I think that one looks like my head," Greece said, pointing to a large cloud with several wisps protruding from it.
Japan examined the cloud for several moments, turned to gaze at the actual Greece's face for some time, and then looked back at the cloud. It still looked more like a blob with questionably-shaped appendages than anything else to him. "I don't think your hair's that...curly."
Greece twisted one lock of his hair around his finger, drew it up where he could stare at it, and then let it fall back down. "Maybe it's raining over there then, which is why my hair looks so curly."
Was Greece still self-conscious about that? "I've told you before that your hair looks no different or worse in the rain," Japan said ( ... )
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Really nice, I enjoyed it - ie, not a complete fail. I enjoy short fills as much as long ones~ thank you so much for filling!
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