Established USUK - Roleplaying as strangers
anonymous
April 23 2011, 22:26:07 UTC
America and England are in a established, happy relationship and decide to play the "meet a stranger" game. Basically, each other act as strangers in a bar (pub, disco or any other location) and have to pick each other up and act like this is a one-night stand with some unknown person. Smut is very appreciated.
Bonus One: They tease each other by flirting with other people too. Bonus Two: England is really popular with guys, much to America's dismay Bonus Three: Dirty sex in a back alley/car/hotel
British!anon raises hand...
anonymous
April 29 2011, 09:41:10 UTC
Actually 'ello, love' sounds quite common - the sort of thing a cockney or a dinner lady might say (though in all fairness, you did say 'what Americans think a British accent should sound like'). Try 'darling' (pronounced daaaaaaaaahhhhhhling) for poshness. However, on the whole you have MADE MY FRICKIN' NIGHT!!!! You're one of those authors, aren't you. The ones who have reached escape velocity. The ones who have crossed the sound barrier. The ones who've got past the stage where the spelling is there and the grammar is there and the narrative basically holds water, to the point where it actually becomes good writing. This, anon, was pure class. I read it the way one eats icecream: 'om-nom-MORE-nom. And then afterwards I went trailing disconsolately up and down the meme that ten minutes ago had been keeping me perfectly happy, trying to find anything else that was half as stylish. This fic was scattered with bits of win (like chocolate chips). First of all, thanks for making England so awesome and making him top. I love the idea of
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Re: British!anon raises hand...
anonymous
April 29 2011, 22:09:58 UTC
I kind of knew that bit about the “’Ello, Love”, but it was the most stereotypically British greeting that England wouldn’t kill himself before saying. I’ll remember “Darling” if I ever write something like this again, tho
I may have made your night, but you totally made my afternoon <3 I think that that is some of the most wonderful praise that I have ever received. Thank you very much for enjoying this in spite of all the mistakes I notice as I reread it again
Thank God you liked the smut. You have no idea how scared I can get writing it and hoping that it’ll be good enough for people who have been reading this stuff for a while (A!A is kind of a n00b to the whole erotic fiction thing)
Bonus One: They tease each other by flirting with other people too.
Bonus Two: England is really popular with guys, much to America's dismay
Bonus Three: Dirty sex in a back alley/car/hotel
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However, on the whole you have MADE MY FRICKIN' NIGHT!!!!
You're one of those authors, aren't you. The ones who have reached escape velocity. The ones who have crossed the sound barrier. The ones who've got past the stage where the spelling is there and the grammar is there and the narrative basically holds water, to the point where it actually becomes good writing. This, anon, was pure class. I read it the way one eats icecream: 'om-nom-MORE-nom. And then afterwards I went trailing disconsolately up and down the meme that ten minutes ago had been keeping me perfectly happy, trying to find anything else that was half as stylish. This fic was scattered with bits of win (like chocolate chips).
First of all, thanks for making England so awesome and making him top. I love the idea of ( ... )
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I may have made your night, but you totally made my afternoon <3 I think that that is some of the most wonderful praise that I have ever received. Thank you very much for enjoying this in spite of all the mistakes I notice as I reread it again
Thank God you liked the smut. You have no idea how scared I can get writing it and hoping that it’ll be good enough for people who have been reading this stuff for a while (A!A is kind of a n00b to the whole erotic fiction thing)
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