Smile for me, babe (1/2)
anonymous
June 10 2011, 14:48:03 UTC
I was hit with a random burst of inspiration and finished much quicker than what I thought I would. I'm not sure if this what you were hoping for, but even if it isn't, I hope that you still enjoy it. :) Pairing: UK/US Warnings: AU, Incest, Young!Alfred, Character death, Necrophilia He never would have guessed that this is the way that it would end
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Smile for me, babe (2/2)
anonymous
June 10 2011, 14:50:04 UTC
In his mind’s eye, the flesh wasn’t as cold as it was in reality. It was warm and twitched under his tongue; the boy beneath him would moan, bright blue eyes begging him for more. And so, he gave the body more. He sank further down, lapping at the head of Alfred’s limp length before taking it all in, his nose brushing against the thin bush of blond pubic hair. Imaginary nails dug against the back of his skull and a recreation of the energetic voice whimpered at the feeling of being completely engulfed in the heat of the older man’s mouth
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Re: Smile for me, babe (2/2) Not!OP
anonymous
June 10 2011, 16:44:36 UTC
Author!Anon here. I'm glad that you liked it!
I intend to write more for Hetalia at some point, I'm not sure when, though. I have the unfortunate problem of being unable to write anything unless I'm feeling really inspired (which happens only on rare occasions and, for some unknown reason, only when I'm trying to sleep), so I don't write much.
I'll be sure to write more Hetalia stories when inspiration hits again. :)
Honestly, author!anon, all I was hoping for was England, a corpse, and England fucking said corpse. Man, oh man. Did you exceed my expectations! This fill is absolutely wonderful, in that it was every bit as dark and creepy as I liked it to be. (And expected with a request like that.
Best thing I liked was that you not only had the physical actions but England's emotions and desires were really what made this fic great. The contrast between what England imagines and what's really going on is fantastic! Gah, it's like the above anon said, that ending! OMG!
Thank you, anon. Just, thank you. Yo made me very happy. I'm honored my request was your first fill and hope that you get inspired soon!
I'm delighted that you enjoyed it! I was worried that it might be too much (or not enough...really, I just worry in general).
I have a few other things that I'm working on, finishing is tough (I'm sure I'll get around to it). I doubt there will be any related requests on the kink meme that I could use them for, though.
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Pairing: UK/US
Warnings: AU, Incest, Young!Alfred, Character death, Necrophilia He never would have guessed that this is the way that it would end ( ... )
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I love you, authornon! That was amazing. @__@ A-and the end, it was...it was... *anon is incoherent right now*
Please keep writing for Hetalia, we need more creepy!fluffsmut on this meme. :D
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I'm glad that you liked it!
I intend to write more for Hetalia at some point, I'm not sure when, though. I have the unfortunate problem of being unable to write anything unless I'm feeling really inspired (which happens only on rare occasions and, for some unknown reason, only when I'm trying to sleep), so I don't write much.
I'll be sure to write more Hetalia stories when inspiration hits again. :)
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Best thing I liked was that you not only had the physical actions but England's emotions and desires were really what made this fic great. The contrast between what England imagines and what's really going on is fantastic! Gah, it's like the above anon said, that ending! OMG!
Thank you, anon. Just, thank you. Yo made me very happy. I'm honored my request was your first fill and hope that you get inspired soon!
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I have a few other things that I'm working on, finishing is tough (I'm sure I'll get around to it). I doubt there will be any related requests on the kink meme that I could use them for, though.
I hope that OP has a wonderful night! :)
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oAo
I had a feeling from the start that he didn't die of natural causes. ;A;
This was... erotic, and so very wrong, but I loved it. >_
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. :)
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