USUK - America skullfucks Pirate!England under eyepatch
anonymous
June 10 2011, 05:48:04 UTC
An older teen (colonial) America manages to get pirate!England to show him what's under his eyepatch: an open hole where his eye has been hollowed out from some old wound. It turns America on, so he gives him a good hard skullfucking right in the eye socket. I'll leave it up to anon whether England likes it or not.
He's The One Eye Love! 1/?
anonymous
June 12 2011, 10:26:32 UTC
I know I said that it may take me awhile to do this, but I couldn’t sleep because I was thinking about it…so, I decided to forgo sleep and get it out of my system…it took longer than I thought it would to write it, but it was worth it. I’m not sure if this is what OP was hoping for, but even if it isn’t, I hope that you still enjoy it. :) I apologize for the title…I couldn’t resist…OTL Warnings: Skullfucking, teen-ish!America, text sometimes shifting between past and present tense in odd places when it’s not supposed to… Word Count: about 3867, plus a bonus scene (144). …This ended up being sillier and, oddly, sappier than what I had originally planned for it to be…I hope that OP doesn’t mind.Ah…the open ocean…the smell of the sea…nothing but clear skies and blue horizon stretching on for miles…surely this is heave- …wait, what the bloody fuck was that crash
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Re: He's The One Eye Love! 2/?
anonymous
June 12 2011, 10:34:29 UTC
The nation heaved a sigh as he roughly plopped down onto the hard cot. It had certainly been one of his more stressful days. Not only had he had to deal with America’s constant flub-ups, he also had to deal with those obvious glances that were cast his way and had to pretend that he didn’t notice them as much as what he did, honestly, what was that boy thinking? He stared at the ceiling a bit before allowing his eye to slide shut, willing all thoughts out of his mind and for his body to finally relax
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He's The One Eye Love! 3/?
anonymous
June 12 2011, 10:46:14 UTC
“It’s a bit difficult,” his gaze flickered back up to America’s face, “the eye would normally hold the lip up a bit, with it gone, it just stays shut on its own. The muscles are functioning, though
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He's The One Eye Love! 4/?
anonymous
June 12 2011, 10:49:43 UTC
England blinked once and sighed through his nose, he knew that America wouldn’t joke about something like this, but at the same time, he also realized that America is young and often fickle; he could and likely would change his mind later. Even so, if this is what the boy truly wanted right now, who was he to deny him? He’d be lying if he said that he didn’t hold those sorts of feelings for him. America was the only one he felt he’d ever truly loved (as reluctant as he was to admit it out loud). He pulled back a bit, away from those lips, and smirked, repeating the words that had spoken earlier, “well then, I won’t be blamed if you can’t sleep tonight...” he caught America’s smile against his lips and felt his face being pulled at, the American trying to get their faces impossibly closer as their mouths opened and their tongues began dancing along each other
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He's The One Eye Love! 5/6
anonymous
June 12 2011, 10:52:47 UTC
America’s body trembled as his cock was licked and sucked, this was also something that he had imagined, and again, reality beat fantasy. It beat his hand, hands down. His hips involuntarily jerked at a particularly hard suck and he could feel England gag, throat convulsing around his length. He couldn’t hold back the whimper that slipped past his closed lips
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He's The One Eye Love! 6/6
anonymous
June 12 2011, 11:06:00 UTC
As America’s vision blurred he glanced down at England’s face, the man’s mouth hung agape, his left eye half-lidded in pleasure, cheeks heavily flushed, a cock thrusting roughly in and out of where his right eye should be, as America watched England’s tongue flick out to lap over his upper lip, he felt his entire body stiffen and heard a garbled version of England’s name spilling out past his throat. Before he could even fully registered what had happened, he came in the socket, the thick liquid lining the muscles inside. He continued to pump into the hole, not wanting to come down from the high just yet
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Re: He's The One Eye Love! 6/6
anonymous
June 12 2011, 15:22:10 UTC
I clicked this out of morbid curiosity--and wow. This is nicely written!
I love the seasoned piratesailor terms you throw in the story at the beginning--they were fun to read and nicely anchored us (lol sorry pun) in this maritime story.
well, I have to say...skullfucking is still not my thing XDDD BUT YOU DID SUCH AN AMAZING JOB setting it up and making it believable it was enjoyable to read because you're a great writer 8DDDD
AWESOME, well-written fill. I love pirate!England and you've done a wonderful job here with an interesting dynamic between the two--England's less of a bawdy pirate here and still a parental figure, while America's mischievous and confident but also young and naive--so much fun to read.
Re: He's The One Eye Love! 6/6
anonymous
June 12 2011, 21:09:14 UTC
Seconding anon here......ahh...I had something to say here, I swear.
Um...uh, trying to say something that isn't keyboard smash here. Give me a minute.
Ohkay, THAT WAS FREAKIN' AMAZING! Oh my god, I have the strangest kinks, but that was just so delicious and so hot. Hnnnng. I wasn't expecting you to actually have Alfred cum in the socket, but that was really well done (I now have an image of Artie with cum dripping out of where his right eye should be, thanks)
Andandandand that was superb. I would quote the best parts, but that would be pretty much the whole damn story. If you ever need a soul/baby mama/ body/slave/maid/whatever, you've got one. Dayum.
Re: He's The One Eye Love! 6/6
anonymous
June 12 2011, 21:29:04 UTC
I'm glad that you liked it! :)
When I was writing that part (cumming in the eye), I couldn't help wondering if having jizz in your eye socket could be damaging/painful (because I'm incapable of not trying to sort everything out logically) and started feeling bad for England...but then I figured...his eye is missing and the hole just got fucked (roughly), I doubt a little cum is going to do much worse.
Re: He's The One Eye Love! 6/6
anonymous
June 13 2011, 01:45:37 UTC
(OP here. Sorry, I read your first message yesterday but couldn't reply because LJ wouldn't let me see comments unless signed in ... and we have to be anon so that was no help ... sorry
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Re: He's The One Eye Love! 6/6
anonymous
June 13 2011, 01:59:32 UTC
Thank you for the praise! I'm delighted that you enjoyed it. :)
I always worry that when someone requests odd kinks like this one, that they may not be looking for any fluff, so I'm glad that you were alright with it.
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I apologize for the title…I couldn’t resist…OTL
Warnings: Skullfucking, teen-ish!America, text sometimes shifting between past and present tense in odd places when it’s not supposed to…
Word Count: about 3867, plus a bonus scene (144).
…This ended up being sillier and, oddly, sappier than what I had originally planned for it to be…I hope that OP doesn’t mind.Ah…the open ocean…the smell of the sea…nothing but clear skies and blue horizon stretching on for miles…surely this is heave- …wait, what the bloody fuck was that crash ( ... )
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I love the seasoned piratesailor terms you throw in the story at the beginning--they were fun to read and nicely anchored us (lol sorry pun) in this maritime story.
well, I have to say...skullfucking is still not my thing XDDD BUT YOU DID SUCH AN AMAZING JOB setting it up and making it believable it was enjoyable to read because you're a great writer 8DDDD
AWESOME, well-written fill. I love pirate!England and you've done a wonderful job here with an interesting dynamic between the two--England's less of a bawdy pirate here and still a parental figure, while America's mischievous and confident but also young and naive--so much fun to read.
hope to see more from you :D
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Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it even though you don't care for the kink. :)
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Um...uh, trying to say something that isn't keyboard smash here. Give me a minute.
Ohkay, THAT WAS FREAKIN' AMAZING! Oh my god, I have the strangest kinks, but that was just so delicious and so hot. Hnnnng. I wasn't expecting you to actually have Alfred cum in the socket, but that was really well done (I now have an image of Artie with cum dripping out of where his right eye should be, thanks)
Andandandand that was superb. I would quote the best parts, but that would be pretty much the whole damn story. If you ever need a soul/baby mama/ body/slave/maid/whatever, you've got one. Dayum.
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When I was writing that part (cumming in the eye), I couldn't help wondering if having jizz in your eye socket could be damaging/painful (because I'm incapable of not trying to sort everything out logically) and started feeling bad for England...but then I figured...his eye is missing and the hole just got fucked (roughly), I doubt a little cum is going to do much worse.
I appreciate that, can never have too many souls.
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I always worry that when someone requests odd kinks like this one, that they may not be looking for any fluff, so I'm glad that you were alright with it.
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