Fill Part 1
anonymous
September 14 2011, 00:15:03 UTC
The only thing on his mind, since their first lazy kiss on the second day of September in 1945, has been America.
And he’s not going to deny it. Maybe it’s the accent, but it’s probably the optimism. England has always taken great pleasure in crushing the cheerful disposition of people around him because he’s just that sort of person; he knows it’s not right to be so cruel, but he’s had so much taken from him over the centuries that something just snapped once he finally had his hands on an Empire- and he’s been that way ever since.
America is battered, tired, pained with the aftermath of war and plagued by the ghosts of his military. But he still continues to smile, apologetic for things he did and proud of things he didn’t.
“The war could have turned out so much worse,” America likes to say.
A part of England believes him.
“I love you,” America says far too often.
All of England believes him.“I propose a toast,” England says, raising his serving of cheap wine and shaking it gently. Waves of alcohol splash against the shores
( ... )
Fill Part 3
anonymous
September 14 2011, 00:18:14 UTC
The curtains are drawn but they’re still partly open, allowing a stream of light that illuminates the centre of the bed. It’s a made bed, with perfectly arranged sheets that are a comforting pale blue
( ... )
Fill Part 4/4
anonymous
September 14 2011, 00:21:56 UTC
It takes another good few minutes before England feels America is sufficiently prepared, the muscles thoroughly stretched to an acceptable width. With three fingers of one hand still inside America’s body, England unfastens his belt with his other hand, pulling out his cock and teasing it from base to tip with a few firm strokes, leaving trails of lubricant as he decides to engage the oil again
( ... )
Re: Fill Part 4/4
anonymous
September 14 2011, 04:20:57 UTC
Oh how I love it when my favourite kink and a prompt I really hoped would be filled gets a real quality author and an extremely satisfying fic.
Everything was perfect, England's ruthlessness and the guilt in the end, that you kept the actual descriptions of sex to the minimum but included delicious details like the tissue inside America's mouth, that it was realistic and hot and emotional.
Re: Fill Part 4/4
anonymous
September 14 2011, 08:08:55 UTC
This was so many times better than I expected it to be. Predator-England preying on a completely naive America? Holy shit why isn't the entire USUK subfandom like this?!
*bookmarks and then nosebleeds into unconsciousness*
Re: Fill Part 4/4
anonymous
September 14 2011, 15:42:58 UTC
OP here. Thank you so much for filling this! It was wonderfully written and you are really good when it comes to create a mood. You are right, this is darker than I was expecting -I see England and America as in love, even if I think that America fell for England first, like in this story- but this has been a great read. Thank you so much, anon!
Re: Fill Part 4/4
anonymous
September 14 2011, 19:58:42 UTC
OP
Don't worry! The best part of a meme like this is the different ways people get inspired by prompts :) You are really talented, so it's been a pleasure to read this story.
Re: Fill Part 4/4
anonymous
September 15 2011, 00:36:02 UTC
Great fill. If you don't mind me saying so, you really captured a raw emotion through England's unapologetic and honest perspective, and how the reality of the situation really hits him in the end. They both come across as incredibly vulnerable, which makes the story all the more bitter sweet.
Hope I'm doing this right orz
"America is a virgin when he and England finally become a couple, and England really gets off on the fact that he's America's first."
I've probably made it a lot darker than the OP intended, but I hope it's an effective read all the same.
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And he’s not going to deny it. Maybe it’s the accent, but it’s probably the optimism. England has always taken great pleasure in crushing the cheerful disposition of people around him because he’s just that sort of person; he knows it’s not right to be so cruel, but he’s had so much taken from him over the centuries that something just snapped once he finally had his hands on an Empire- and he’s been that way ever since.
America is battered, tired, pained with the aftermath of war and plagued by the ghosts of his military. But he still continues to smile, apologetic for things he did and proud of things he didn’t.
“The war could have turned out so much worse,” America likes to say.
A part of England believes him.
“I love you,” America says far too often.
All of England believes him.“I propose a toast,” England says, raising his serving of cheap wine and shaking it gently. Waves of alcohol splash against the shores ( ... )
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reCaptcha says "revel loudly?" Yes, I think that's accurate.
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Everything was perfect, England's ruthlessness and the guilt in the end, that you kept the actual descriptions of sex to the minimum but included delicious details like the tissue inside America's mouth, that it was realistic and hot and emotional.
Thank you very much, a!a.
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*bookmarks and then nosebleeds into unconsciousness*
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Maybe because not everyone sees their relationship that way, duh~
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But I'm glad you liked it regardless! <3
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Don't worry! The best part of a meme like this is the different ways people get inspired by prompts :) You are really talented, so it's been a pleasure to read this story.
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Amazing work!
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