Ribbons 2/?
anonymous
September 26 2011, 19:27:46 UTC
"Are you sure?" He asks. "I mean, you've been in chains and all, and it wasn't the sexy kind..."
"Ah...yes. These are not rough, and I trust you," she says. Her cheeks are flushed a rosy red, and it's adorable.
He didn't even ask for this, in fact, but it's not like he minds that she went all this way It's like Christmas or his birthday even though it's just a cold November time which isn't either holiday. He is totally okay with impromptu not-birthday and not-Christmas gifts
( ... )
Ribbons 3/4
anonymous
September 26 2011, 19:34:04 UTC
She's still on her side, and he ties her hands to the headboard like that, one on top of the other. It's different, feeling so in control of her. He realizes just how much trust it has to have taken for her to allow herself to be so vulnerable. He moves until he's behind her and pushes her legs apart just enough so he can slip inside her.
For a moment, he practically blanks out mentally because everything is so warm, soft, and amazing inside her. Which perfectly matches how utterly warm, soft, and jiggly and amazing she is outside. Because he's not expending so much energy trying to keep from accidentally breaking ribs, he has more time to just touch her as he begins to slowly thrust up inside her, and at this position he can reach so much more of her. He rubs over her breasts, the ribbons just as soft as her skin, until it's a pattern of soft and even softer. She lets out a sigh and the ribbon falls from her mouth. She looks startled, but if America wasn't so busy touching her, he'd have to do a thumbs up sign because victory. Now
( ... )
Ribbons 4/4
anonymous
September 26 2011, 19:38:51 UTC
She lets out a particularly loud cry and he feels the tightening all around him. He wraps his arms about her waist and spoons her as they rock together, enjoying the orgasm that runs through them.
For a few minutes they're just there, holding tight and doing nothing but existing and feeling. The only sound is their occasional breathing, and a few soft gasps of oh, oh, oh from Ukraine as she finishes off. But then she begins to stir, pulling at the bonds. She's been very good about this, and barely freaked out. He's tried to be as careful as possible with the gift of her, her trust
( ... )
Re: Ribbons 4/4
anonymous
September 28 2011, 01:34:46 UTC
AFSFSFDASDAFDSFADAS Ukraine is such an awesome girlfriend, bringing homemade food along like that!! Other things I like about this: It's hot XD (of course, how could it not be?), Ukraine is not perfect in English (she has an accent, doesn't get specific-to-English jokes,etc.), and the fluff. I really love fluff <3
It's also really nice that they didn't just fall asleep right after the sex. That happens way too often in fics and I'm starting to get tired of it, so this was a refreshing change!
Re: Ribbons 4/4
anonymous
October 7 2011, 07:41:08 UTC
WHY IS THIS NOT FLOODED WITH MORE COMMENTS, GOOD GOD ANON.
So damn hot. I don't usually read this pairing but OH MY GOD. It's so cute. And I love love loove America's voice here. This is so many levels of fantastic.
Re: Ribbons 4/4
anonymous
October 16 2011, 01:08:03 UTC
I ALSO DO NOT KNOW WHY NO MORE COMMENTS. This was amazing! Super hot sex and while your America narration (and dialogue) is so perfect it's uncanny, I just couldn't stop thinking, holy cute, Ukraine. This line:
She's always a bit shy, guarding her moans and pleasure as if he might think she was vulgar or something
just killed it for me. Ukraine is like that girl that covers her mouth when she laughs.
Anyway. hot damn. so good. Thank you, author!anon!
Re: Ribbons 4/4
anonymous
January 18 2012, 01:55:17 UTC
Dude. TOTALLY deserves more comments.
Your writing style is superb, the way you write these two just works, and all the little details you snuck in--their lives away from their clandestine affairs, that sort of thing--is just fabulous.
I don't comment often on fills, so consider this one of the highest compliments I can give. A job well done!
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"Ah...yes. These are not rough, and I trust you," she says. Her cheeks are flushed a rosy red, and it's adorable.
He didn't even ask for this, in fact, but it's not like he minds that she went all this way It's like Christmas or his birthday even though it's just a cold November time which isn't either holiday. He is totally okay with impromptu not-birthday and not-Christmas gifts ( ... )
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It's different, feeling so in control of her. He realizes just how much trust it has to have taken for her to allow herself to be so vulnerable. He moves until he's behind her and pushes her legs apart just enough so he can slip inside her.
For a moment, he practically blanks out mentally because everything is so warm, soft, and amazing inside her. Which perfectly matches how utterly warm, soft, and jiggly and amazing she is outside. Because he's not expending so much energy trying to keep from accidentally breaking ribs, he has more time to just touch her as he begins to slowly thrust up inside her, and at this position he can reach so much more of her. He rubs over her breasts, the ribbons just as soft as her skin, until it's a pattern of soft and even softer. She lets out a sigh and the ribbon falls from her mouth. She looks startled, but if America wasn't so busy touching her, he'd have to do a thumbs up sign because victory. Now ( ... )
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She lets out a particularly loud cry and he feels the tightening all around him. He wraps his arms about her waist and spoons her as they rock together, enjoying the orgasm that runs through them.
For a few minutes they're just there, holding tight and doing nothing but existing and feeling. The only sound is their occasional breathing, and a few soft gasps of oh, oh, oh from Ukraine as she finishes off. But then she begins to stir, pulling at the bonds. She's been very good about this, and barely freaked out. He's tried to be as careful as possible with the gift of her, her trust ( ... )
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It's also really nice that they didn't just fall asleep right after the sex. That happens way too often in fics and I'm starting to get tired of it, so this was a refreshing change!
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So damn hot. I don't usually read this pairing but OH MY GOD. It's so cute. And I love love loove America's voice here. This is so many levels of fantastic.
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She's always a bit shy, guarding her moans and pleasure as if he might think she was vulgar or something
just killed it for me. Ukraine is like that girl that covers her mouth when she laughs.
Anyway. hot damn. so good.
Thank you, author!anon!
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Your writing style is superb, the way you write these two just works, and all the little details you snuck in--their lives away from their clandestine affairs, that sort of thing--is just fabulous.
I don't comment often on fills, so consider this one of the highest compliments I can give. A job well done!
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