[Part 10] Intentional Badfic - filled with US/UK - "Steal My Booty"
anonymous
October 5 2011, 16:48:21 UTC
A/N: Request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/13125.html?thread=33378629#t33378629 . I tried to make this as genuinely awful as possible without actually resorting to bad grammar, spelling, etc. I wanted it to fail based purely on content, not necessarily on style, which was... an interesting experiment, to say the least. Now, on to the fic.
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STEAL MY BOOTY a.k.a. the best USUK fic I ever wrote. The boat in which the two pirates were sailing was rocking much harder than the motion of the waves should have allowed. Indeed, there was quite a bit of action occurring on the vessel, though it wasn’t typical swashbuckling, though labored panting and loud voices could be overheard echoing across the waves
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Re: [Part 10] Intentional Badfic - filled with US/UK - "Steal My Booty"
anonymous
October 5 2011, 17:23:17 UTC
xD Oh god that was painful. Wow, talk about mood swings. I'd say you succeeded rather well at the content based sucking thing. I love how it goes from porn to angsty and then back to porn and then just silly. And I love the last line. :DD♥
Re: [Part 10] Intentional Badfic - filled with US/UK - "Steal My Booty"
anonymous
October 5 2011, 19:40:44 UTC
But the metric system wasn't invented until the French Revolution!
I think you hit all the major points of a fail USUK fic here, especially the out of nowhere Revolution angst and the blatant disregard for history that makes me want to weep.
Re: [Part 10] Intentional Badfic - filled with US/UK - "Steal My Booty"
anonymous
October 5 2011, 20:43:32 UTC
Indeed, the horrific anachronisms were quite intentional. What is any bad Hetalia fic without some sort of history!fail? A!A couldn't give a legitimate time-period for this piece even if asked.
I only hope that I managed to visually capture the burning lust in motion that you tore from the high seas and confined to print so that, we too, could experince an epic love that will last the ages.
A!A can't even breathe
anonymous
October 7 2011, 13:49:50 UTC
Anon, your A!A is dying over here. I mean. Your art truly managed to convey all the beauty and turbulence of this heart-wrenchingly tragicomedic relationship, all with a few skillful lines. I could not have asked for a more appropriate and deeply-felt illustration of my, if I may say so myself, small masterpiece.
First time ever getting fanart for a fill, actually, so in all honesty I'm quite tickled. READ: I fuckin' love your art!!! Thank you so much! :'D
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STEAL MY BOOTY a.k.a. the best USUK fic I ever wrote. The boat in which the two pirates were sailing was rocking much harder than the motion of the waves should have allowed. Indeed, there was quite a bit of action occurring on the vessel, though it wasn’t typical swashbuckling, though labored panting and loud voices could be overheard echoing across the waves ( ... )
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I think you hit all the major points of a fail USUK fic here, especially the out of nowhere Revolution angst and the blatant disregard for history that makes me want to weep.
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Also, I think I nearly broke a rib laughing, A!A. XD I mean, seriously, all the horrific pirate reference were love. <3
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A bloody good job America, nobody needs a numeric system based on twelves when you can have one based on tens
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And you know what, this one is my favorite.
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This had me in tears
Great job anon!!
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This finely crafted piece of literary magnificence simply called to the passionate artist within
http://i1213.photobucket.com/albums/cc469/StealMahBootay/Youhadmeatthetitle.png
I only hope that I managed to visually capture the burning lust in motion that you tore from the high seas and confined to print so that, we too, could experince an epic love that will last the ages.
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First time ever getting fanart for a fill, actually, so in all honesty I'm quite tickled. READ: I fuckin' love your art!!! Thank you so much! :'D
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