Oh yeah, all the way from Part 1. Little bit scattered and the personifications are a bit less human than usual but… yeah. Anyway, yeah, I have not read Marx in full, so I may have made a few mistakes in how he views the social classes and how he expects the revolution to come about, so many apologiesIvan’s large form loomed over the body. He would almost think it was dead, the way it seemed to crumble and cave in on itself. But the violent shivers told otherwise. Ivan looked around the camp, at the dismal condition of the working class. The poor proletariats didn’t look much better than Matthew. Abused, hungry, shackled and enslaved by the bourgeoisie, they were finding no hope within their government
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[Part 1] RusCan, On-To-Ottawa Trek, "Dancing Red" 2/3
anonymous
October 12 2011, 16:22:19 UTC
Ivan stood up, looking around at the condition. His people didn’t want to finally escape the trap they have been in since the very moment society was formed? Ivan’s body was strong, powerful, lithe as he jumped unto a crate. His voice was booming, echoing out and filling the camp as a testament to his power, the power of communism.
“Who here wants what they have worked so hard to earn?”, Canadians all around stopped and stared. Matthew even sat up from his spot against a wall. “The proletariats have been abused and taken advantage of. You work infinitely harder than the bourgeoisie, and yet they are the ones who get the fruits of your labor”, the crowd seemed to form instantly. Much to Ivan’s pleasure, Matthew looked in awe and shock at the positive reactions Ivan was getting
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[Part 1] RusCan, On-To-Ottawa Trek, "Dancing Red" 3/3
anonymous
October 12 2011, 16:22:54 UTC
“We will be great”, Ivan mutters into Matthew’s hair. He hadn’t brought it up, he didn’t want to push Matthew when he already was on track, but Ivan was sure once the revolution was complete, Canada would surely become one with the Mother Land. They would be together then, and the rest of the world may join if they like. But Canada would always be known as the first.
Matthew wiggled around and looked curiously at him. No words were said, and interest returned to the union meeting. It was a baby step, but Canada was making enough baby steps to get real progress. Soon. It was the only word Ivan could muster at the time. Soon. His grip tightened on Canada’s side
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Re: [Part 1] RusCan, On-To-Ottawa Trek, "Dancing Red" 3/3
anonymous
October 12 2011, 17:57:46 UTC
OMGS YES BRILLIANT. Hooray for filling very old requests - this is one of the ones I was hoping would be filled when that list was put up!!
This is great, I loved it. Loved the politics, loved revolutionarily-inspiring!Ivan, and I thought your Canada was fantastic. ultimately I think you're right, Canada wouldn't become that left of centre til the Trudeau years, so it almost looks like he's leading Ivan on when it's probably more that he's horribly indecisive. It makes the bittersweet-ness of this all the more poignant. Fantastic job anon <333
Oh yeah, all the way from Part 1. Little bit scattered and the personifications are a bit less human than usual but… yeah. Anyway, yeah, I have not read Marx in full, so I may have made a few mistakes in how he views the social classes and how he expects the revolution to come about, so many apologiesIvan’s large form loomed over the body. He would almost think it was dead, the way it seemed to crumble and cave in on itself. But the violent shivers told otherwise. Ivan looked around the camp, at the dismal condition of the working class. The poor proletariats didn’t look much better than Matthew. Abused, hungry, shackled and enslaved by the bourgeoisie, they were finding no hope within their government ( ... )
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“Who here wants what they have worked so hard to earn?”, Canadians all around stopped and stared. Matthew even sat up from his spot against a wall. “The proletariats have been abused and taken advantage of. You work infinitely harder than the bourgeoisie, and yet they are the ones who get the fruits of your labor”, the crowd seemed to form instantly. Much to Ivan’s pleasure, Matthew looked in awe and shock at the positive reactions Ivan was getting ( ... )
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Matthew wiggled around and looked curiously at him. No words were said, and interest returned to the union meeting. It was a baby step, but Canada was making enough baby steps to get real progress. Soon. It was the only word Ivan could muster at the time. Soon. His grip tightened on Canada’s side ( ... )
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This is great, I loved it. Loved the politics, loved revolutionarily-inspiring!Ivan, and I thought your Canada was fantastic. ultimately I think you're right, Canada wouldn't become that left of centre til the Trudeau years, so it almost looks like he's leading Ivan on when it's probably more that he's horribly indecisive. It makes the bittersweet-ness of this all the more poignant. Fantastic job anon <333
-not the OP of this request but loved it anyway
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