the garden stroll [1/2]
anonymous
January 13 2012, 23:44:18 UTC
Another scene came to mind. Enjoy. _______
Spain gets caught between them one day, after the morning meetings.
It’s a meeting, and it’s nice out, and Spain wants to soak in the sun and warmth before taking his siesta. So he takes a walk in the garden, watches the goldenrod and black-eyed susan swaying in the breeze. He does not look up. He does not see France shove England against a wall, kisses violent and smearing and tasting blood.
He has to tell himself not to look up. Has to tell himself not to tear France away, throw him to the ground, and fuck him while England watches--
the garden stroll [2/2]
anonymous
January 13 2012, 23:45:11 UTC
France glares. His lips turn white with tightness and his eyes are narrowed, and Spain’s body goes cold. He falls to his own knees, wrapping his fingers around his upper arms.
“You forget, Gilbert,” France spits, “that you aren’t a Nation anymore. You are something that crumbled and died and turned to dust--not quite a human, but not important enough to warrant my attentions.
“Fuck you--”
“Would you like me to fuck you?” France asks, and Spain hears the intent behind the way he says fuck, not light and teasing but granite-heavy and so, so cold. “Right here? Raw and bleeding, just like then?”
No answer. Not even a whimper.
“Then Do not touch me again,” France says, and he speaks with the voice and the strength of a Nation. “Do not attempt to bother me with your whining and your temper. If you do--”
Spain winces when he hears Prussia’s arm crack, squeezes his eyes shut as Prussia’s shrills echo across the gardens
( ... )
The happiest ending would be the three of them existing, broken as they are now. The worst...well, we'll see if the draft I'm concocting in my head works out.
In all seriousness, they cannot be together--I cannot see a possible way for this to end happily. Spain is a coward, France is a monster, and Prussia...Prussia will be broken for a bit. And then he'll get angry. And then shit will hit the fan.
Re: the garden stroll [2/2]
anonymous
January 14 2012, 03:53:13 UTC
Ouchie. Never thought that France would get mean if you got in the way of his conquests. I assume you were implying looseness, by Spain being unsure if it was England before realizing it was Germany, and then France chasing Canada at the end?
For some reason, I find this France more interesting.
From what I've read in the comics, and what I've interpreted from it into headcanon, France is a bit of a slut as well as very selfish. He wants what he wants, he will get what he wants, and he will cut you and your soul into tiny little pieces if you get in the way of that.
There are far more interesting villains--I'm personally a fan of Jigsaw, for example--but there's enough room on this meme for all types of interpretations, and if you liked it, that's all that counts to me. Thank you.
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Spain gets caught between them one day, after the morning meetings.
It’s a meeting, and it’s nice out, and Spain wants to soak in the sun and warmth before taking his siesta. So he takes a walk in the garden, watches the goldenrod and black-eyed susan swaying in the breeze. He does not look up. He does not see France shove England against a wall, kisses violent and smearing and tasting blood.
He has to tell himself not to look up. Has to tell himself not to tear France away, throw him to the ground, and fuck him while England watches--
He tells himself not to look up--
“Oi! France ( ... )
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“You forget, Gilbert,” France spits, “that you aren’t a Nation anymore. You are something that crumbled and died and turned to dust--not quite a human, but not important enough to warrant my attentions.
“Fuck you--”
“Would you like me to fuck you?” France asks, and Spain hears the intent behind the way he says fuck, not light and teasing but granite-heavy and so, so cold. “Right here? Raw and bleeding, just like then?”
No answer. Not even a whimper.
“Then Do not touch me again,” France says, and he speaks with the voice and the strength of a Nation. “Do not attempt to bother me with your whining and your temper. If you do--”
Spain winces when he hears Prussia’s arm crack, squeezes his eyes shut as Prussia’s shrills echo across the gardens ( ... )
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And by which I mean, I loved it.
I would love to read more from you.
(And I can't help but hope you'll eventually wrap it all up with a lighter ending, because I'm a sap like that)
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In all seriousness, they cannot be together--I cannot see a possible way for this to end happily. Spain is a coward, France is a monster, and Prussia...Prussia will be broken for a bit. And then he'll get angry. And then shit will hit the fan.
Thank you for your review.
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For some reason, I find this France more interesting.
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There are far more interesting villains--I'm personally a fan of Jigsaw, for example--but there's enough room on this meme for all types of interpretations, and if you liked it, that's all that counts to me. Thank you.
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