Russia/America/Canada - Substitutes - 1a/??
anonymous
July 4 2011, 00:44:49 UTC
Request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/3274.html?thread=3418314#t3418314 Insane!Russia sees the brothers as Toris and Raivis, and proceeds to deal very harsh punishments on them for "rebelling" against him. Bonus points if he forces them to call themselves by the Baltics' names, maybe throw in some threats to kill both of them if they don't.
WARNINGS: LOTS of violence, torture. Future parts will contain: non-con, forced incest, violence, torture, etc. **
“Mattie!” The voice broke through the pulsing fog that had engulfed his mind. Distressed and hoarse, it called to Canada. “Wake up! Come on, little bro, you have to wake up.”
“'m older than you.” Canada retorted instinctively. Than he shook his head, trying to clear the cobwebs that wrapped his brain. When America didn't respond as he usually did (some variation of “No you're not.” or “But I was a country first!”), but instead let out a single choked sound, a blend of relief and
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Russia/America/Canada - Substitutes - 3a/??
anonymous
May 1 2012, 09:09:13 UTC
My apologies for the long delay, but I kept thinking I should go a different direction. I'm still not sure I like the way Al goes from broken to not-broken, but it kind of makes sense in my head, and even if I don't love it, I like it better than any of the other versions I've done.
WARNINGS: Abuse, broken!America, insane!Russia - if you've gotten this far, you're probably good. **
Russia had not been willing to let him rest after cleaning up his own mess, dragging him across the floor to clean up the semen Russia had spilled while watching them. He obeyed, fighting down the bile that rose in his throat. What else could he do?
When the floor was licked clean, his head was pulled up, Russia's hand dragging a torn piece of cloth (a piece of Can - no, Litva's discarded shirt, he noted) across his chin, wiping his chin and cheeks clean with a gentleness that seemed so foreign
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Russia/America/Canada - Substitutes - 3b/??
anonymous
May 1 2012, 09:11:02 UTC
Still, he waited, listening to the footsteps as Russia made his way up the stairs. He heard the voices at the top of the stairs, Russia and someone who spoke to quietly to hear properly, but he didn't try to make out the words, too busy watching his brother for any sign of life
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Russia/America/Canada - Substitutes - 3c/??
anonymous
May 1 2012, 09:13:07 UTC
“You left me.” Russia's eyes were wild, wide and desperate. “You left me, and you made Latvii leave me. I brought you back, but I had to make sure you didn't just leave again. And you were telling horrible lies, you and Latvii. . . I had to punish you. You understand, yes? I had to punish you, but you weren't supposed to die! I just wanted you to stay with me.”
Latvia? Latvia was at home, and Estonia hadn't called to say anything about him going missing in the hour since Lithuania had left them in Latvia's bedroom.
“Rossiya,” Lithuania began, a growing horror lining his words. “What's in the basement? Why were you down there?”
Russia held out his hands for Lithuania to see, and Lithuania realized that what he had thought was the shadows from the basement lights was a dark red stain across his palms and fingers; red like. . . Lithuania's mind nearly froze. Blood.“I had to punish you.” Russia repeated, as if to justify whatever he had done. “You had to be punished for leaving and lying to me
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Russia/America/Canada - Substitutes - 3d/??
anonymous
May 1 2012, 09:15:28 UTC
“Lit-?” Lithuania's gaze moved to where Litva laid unconscious behind him, eyes sharpening and then growing wide with horrified realization. “Canada? Oh. Oh, God.” Without warning, Lithuania fell to his knees, hands over his face as his stomach emptied onto the floor.
Latvii (he couldn't risk being himself again until Canada was safe) didn't move, torn between his friend and his brother, still waiting for an answer. He didn't really expect Lithuania to only take him, but a part of him, bitter and angry and so filled with hate it scared him, screamed into his mind.
Why isn't Lithuania the one bleeding out on the floor?!
Why would Lithuania risk himself for the one who took his place?!
Why hadn't he come sooner?
Then Lithuania looked up, distinctly more pale than earlier as he wiped his mouth with trembling hands, and Latvii shoved away the angry thoughts, hating himself all the more. This was Lithuania, one of the most gentle, most caring Nations he'd ever known, and Latvii knew without a doubt that Lithuania never
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Re: Russia/America/Canada - Substitutes - 3d/??
anonymous
May 9 2012, 05:25:24 UTC
Oh well done. I thought America's thought process was pitch perfect.
I didn't mind the sudden switch..It might be hard to believe if this went on for months, but it was a short timeframe. And it feels like America is putting on a front, like Hero!America is a mental mask as much as 'Latvii' was. Though I've found that some people really do get braver if they are concerned more with someone else than their own safety.
Substitutes - 4a/??
anonymous
March 5 2013, 07:50:55 UTC
Apologies! Be warned, I'm not entirely sure where this bit came from, so it may be a little weird. I've been trying to write it for months, so I think it may be partially fueled by desperation.What was Russia thinking
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Substitutes - 4b/??
anonymous
March 5 2013, 07:52:24 UTC
"Why do you lie, Latvii?" Russia looked almost sad for a moment, before his expression went vicious. "I thought I had taught you better, but if I must make the lesson strong-er..." Russia's voice stuttered to a halt, his eyes wide as Lithuania stepped up behind America, with Canada cradled in his arms. "L-Litva... and Litva? What is going on?" Then, softer than a whisper, with his eyes fixed on Lithuania's face, he asked, "Did I... Are you really dead
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Re: Substitutes - 4c/??
anonymous
March 6 2013, 03:59:46 UTC
I just found this, and I must say I love your writing and I am very interested to see what happens next! I have a kink for torture and I think that it is ingeniously cruel to make America hurt his own brother. Also I am very curious what England will do. I liked the magic scene very much, very ominous!
I do have a small critique though. It seems a little inconsistent in the story about how strong America is. He was unable to break the chains earlier, when he was struggling his hardest, but then after going through all the trauma and with a dislocated shoulder he's able to break the chains and even corner Russia against the wall? That makes it seem strange that he felt he couldn't fight Russia before. If he is afraid of Russia trying to stop them, now that his hands aren't chained it seems like the best move would be to punch Russia or push Russia down the stairs to buy time, not talk to Russia. It also seems strange that he then goes weak again and Russia is able to drag him back down to the basement.
http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/3274.html?thread=3418314#t3418314
Insane!Russia sees the brothers as Toris and Raivis, and proceeds to deal very harsh punishments on them for "rebelling" against him.
Bonus points if he forces them to call themselves by the Baltics' names, maybe throw in some threats to kill both of them if they don't.
WARNINGS: LOTS of violence, torture.
Future parts will contain: non-con, forced incest, violence, torture, etc.
**
“Mattie!” The voice broke through the pulsing fog that had engulfed his mind. Distressed and hoarse, it called to Canada. “Wake up! Come on, little bro, you have to wake up.”
“'m older than you.” Canada retorted instinctively. Than he shook his head, trying to clear the cobwebs that wrapped his brain. When America didn't respond as he usually did (some variation of “No you're not.” or “But I was a country first!”), but instead let out a single choked sound, a blend of relief and ( ... )
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The chilling words make me want to read more, just because I want to know how it ends. Can't wait for the next update.
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WARNINGS: Abuse, broken!America, insane!Russia - if you've gotten this far, you're probably good.
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Russia had not been willing to let him rest after cleaning up his own mess, dragging him across the floor to clean up the semen Russia had spilled while watching them. He obeyed, fighting down the bile that rose in his throat. What else could he do?
When the floor was licked clean, his head was pulled up, Russia's hand dragging a torn piece of cloth (a piece of Can - no, Litva's discarded shirt, he noted) across his chin, wiping his chin and cheeks clean with a gentleness that seemed so foreign ( ... )
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Latvia? Latvia was at home, and Estonia hadn't called to say anything about him going missing in the hour since Lithuania had left them in Latvia's bedroom.
“Rossiya,” Lithuania began, a growing horror lining his words. “What's in the basement? Why were you down there?”
Russia held out his hands for Lithuania to see, and Lithuania realized that what he had thought was the shadows from the basement lights was a dark red stain across his palms and fingers; red like. . . Lithuania's mind nearly froze. Blood.“I had to punish you.” Russia repeated, as if to justify whatever he had done. “You had to be punished for leaving and lying to me ( ... )
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Latvii (he couldn't risk being himself again until Canada was safe) didn't move, torn between his friend and his brother, still waiting for an answer. He didn't really expect Lithuania to only take him, but a part of him, bitter and angry and so filled with hate it scared him, screamed into his mind.
Why isn't Lithuania the one bleeding out on the floor?!
Why would Lithuania risk himself for the one who took his place?!
Why hadn't he come sooner?
Then Lithuania looked up, distinctly more pale than earlier as he wiped his mouth with trembling hands, and Latvii shoved away the angry thoughts, hating himself all the more. This was Lithuania, one of the most gentle, most caring Nations he'd ever known, and Latvii knew without a doubt that Lithuania never ( ... )
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MY FEELINGS ARE SPEWING ALL OVER THE PLACE OH GOD
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I didn't mind the sudden switch..It might be hard to believe if this went on for months, but it was a short timeframe. And it feels like America is putting on a front, like Hero!America is a mental mask as much as 'Latvii' was. Though I've found that some people really do get braver if they are concerned more with someone else than their own safety.
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Did Russia almost have a lucid moment?
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I do have a small critique though. It seems a little inconsistent in the story about how strong America is. He was unable to break the chains earlier, when he was struggling his hardest, but then after going through all the trauma and with a dislocated shoulder he's able to break the chains and even corner Russia against the wall? That makes it seem strange that he felt he couldn't fight Russia before. If he is afraid of Russia trying to stop them, now that his hands aren't chained it seems like the best move would be to punch Russia or push Russia down the stairs to buy time, not talk to Russia. It also seems strange that he then goes weak again and Russia is able to drag him back down to the basement.
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