Alfred's Little Secret (1/?)
anonymous
July 14 2011, 01:36:46 UTC
original request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/19013.html?thread=70064197#t70064197 Arthur gets off to making Alfred insecure about his weight while continuously knocking him up with children. He loves to suckle America's lactating breasts and secretly sabotage his weight loss plans to make him heavier. Alfred has no clue, but Arthur loves it.
So, um, I posted it on the wrong place but I already let a mod know, so it'll be deleted, and I'm resposting here, hopefully on the right place this time (if it's not, I think I'll just give up). Oh god, I'm so ashamed haha. I'm sorry and please try to enjoy this piece of shit. Wanted to apologize to OP (and encourage multiple fills!), this is not exactly what you want so expect a big fail. Also wanted to say that english isn't my first language, so forgive my awful grammar.
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He didn’t know why this was happening. But it was starting to get painful. He knew he was a bit overweight, yes, he
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Alfred's Little Secret (15/?)
anonymous
July 14 2011, 18:07:35 UTC
dasiodasd i almost forgot about this oh god.“Ah, ah, ah.” He heard and turned his head, to where England was coming out his bathroom. “No touching yourself.” He climbed on the bed again, throwing the lube on the side they weren’t using
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Alfred's Little Secret (16/?)
anonymous
July 14 2011, 18:15:36 UTC
“Wah, look at how hard you are already, love.” He said, pulling away, to America immense relief (and somehow disappoint, too). His finger traced a line from his wet asshole to his balls, then slapping his heavy erection between his legs lightly. “But that’s okay, I’m not far behind
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Alfred's Little Secret (17/?)
anonymous
July 14 2011, 18:25:57 UTC
America’s ass was flush against England’s hips, the pain obviously almost overwhelming, but he could take it. It was amazing, to feel something fill him up so well as that cock did, making him feel complete, happy for having the man he loved inside him, so close, so close to him. He wished he could get closer. He noticed England didn’t say a word, didn’t tell him to just move already, git. And he felt relieved, as he waited for his muscles to stretch around and adjust to the considerable extra bulk there, even if it was actually screaming at America to just get rid of it. Because even if he thought that that was where England’s cock belonged, deep within him, his trembling, sore body didn’t think so, and was doing all it could to remove the invader: twitching, clenching. All effort for nothing, but he earned some noises from England, so it was worth it. Finally, when he gathered all the strength he needed on his legs and hips, he moved up, making the cock almost slip out from his abused hole, then impaling himself back again,
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Alfred's Little Secret (17/?)
anonymous
July 14 2011, 18:32:24 UTC
With a unison, loud, strangled cry, they were coming hard; America letting it shot on his body, his body spasming and jerking and clenching around England, who, unable to keep moving through his orgasm, buried himself deeply into that warm body, leaving his seed there, deep within America, his head spinning as he grunted
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And England Has a Secret, too (19a/19)
anonymous
July 14 2011, 19:57:59 UTC
oh, above was supposed to be (18/?). and here is it. If you don't like OOCness, England being an extreme asshole, America being completely hopeless and way too oblivious like a teenager in love, and possibly dark-ish themes, do ignore this. o_oHe was walking out of the commercial building, walking towards America’s car, both his hands with something he bought especially for his lover
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And England Has a Secret, too (19b/19)
anonymous
July 14 2011, 20:06:42 UTC
He kissed his face one more time, over his closed eyelids, and then concentrated on starting and driving the car, so he wouldn’t start to drive on the wrong side of the road. America opened the box, and he really didn’t expect what he saw.
It was a dress. Not a simple dress. A white, short, depraved wedding dress. With gloves and a long veil and all. Also a pair of white fishnets. He was quite speechless, while England was driving as if nothing was wrong
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Re: And England Has a Secret, too (19b/19)
anonymous
July 14 2011, 23:34:45 UTC
I don't have a lactation kink. I don't have a chub kink. I was just bored and hadn't read any USUK in ages. But anon, this is the most sexy thing I've read on the 'meme in awhile and it will be a horrible crime against porn if you never wrote again. This was so hot and I want there to be more pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease. Go find more porn to write so I can fawn over you. ;-;
Re: Alfred's Little Secret (17/?)
anonymous
July 14 2011, 23:43:57 UTC
I cannot tell you how hot this fill is. You hit so many of the lesser used kinks that I can't even tell you how many you hit perfectly. The strangulation during the blowjob. Turkey slapping. Humiliation. Asshole!England. Asshole!England topping. lkjgfdsaaaaaa
You had several typos here and there that sitting back for a day or so and reading over again would have caught, but they were few enough that they didn't detract from the story.
Re: Alfred's Little Secret (16/?)
anonymous
July 14 2011, 18:40:38 UTC
Most fans believe that America has no gag reflex XDD Actually its strange not to run into a story where there is oral and that isn't mentioned...
"...then slapping his heavy erection between his legs lightly..." AND he slapped his cock on America's face? Woah very VERY nice. I love cock slapping. You win internetz for that.
I CAN NOT believe you called this shit. This was not was well written it was hot as heck <3 you should mention how many updates it has in the fill list o=o Its rare to see that many updates.
Though despite how hot it is I can't help but feel sorry for America. . .Actually this reminds me of a dounji about how England was dreaming of America being all weepy and wanting to make him cry so he pinched his cheeks once he woke up....lol XDD
aaah, so I think i'm just not lucky enough to run into these stories. T_T it's one of my biggest kinks.
and ah, I... should? I don't know, i don't feel too comfortable doing things here on the kink meme because i'll probably do it wrong, so I think I just won't, if it's okay. ;_;' and i know this doujin i think, i love it. <3
Re: author!anon
anonymous
July 15 2011, 01:56:03 UTC
Lol you don't have to. Its not a big deal or anything XDD
Just look at the smut fics ...eventually youll find it. If I find some again Ill link you <3 Its okay if you do it wrong btw! Pretty much everyone screws up one way or another in the beginning so its not like anyone will point it out. Most aren't that jerky. :)
Arthur gets off to making Alfred insecure about his weight while continuously knocking him up with children. He loves to suckle America's lactating breasts and secretly sabotage his weight loss plans to make him heavier. Alfred has no clue, but Arthur loves it.
So, um, I posted it on the wrong place but I already let a mod know, so it'll be deleted, and I'm resposting here, hopefully on the right place this time (if it's not, I think I'll just give up). Oh god, I'm so ashamed haha. I'm sorry and please try to enjoy this piece of shit. Wanted to apologize to OP (and encourage multiple fills!), this is not exactly what you want so expect a big fail. Also wanted to say that english isn't my first language, so forgive my awful grammar.
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hope you're using your account that i made for you with all my love!
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and here is it. If you don't like OOCness, England being an extreme asshole, America being completely hopeless and way too oblivious like a teenager in love, and possibly dark-ish themes, do ignore this. o_oHe was walking out of the commercial building, walking towards America’s car, both his hands with something he bought especially for his lover ( ... )
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It was a dress. Not a simple dress. A white, short, depraved wedding dress. With gloves and a long veil and all. Also a pair of white fishnets. He was quite speechless, while England was driving as if nothing was wrong ( ... )
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Having said that, I fapped to this twice. :I
I might as well buy my train ticket to Hell in advance.
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You had several typos here and there that sitting back for a day or so and reading over again would have caught, but they were few enough that they didn't detract from the story.
Anon, never stop writing <3
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"...then slapping his heavy erection between his legs lightly..." AND he slapped his cock on America's face? Woah very VERY nice. I love cock slapping. You win internetz for that.
I CAN NOT believe you called this shit. This was not was well written it was hot as heck <3 you should mention how many updates it has in the fill list o=o Its rare to see that many updates.
Though despite how hot it is I can't help but feel sorry for America. . .Actually this reminds me of a dounji about how England was dreaming of America being all weepy and wanting to make him cry so he pinched his cheeks once he woke up....lol XDD
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and ah, I... should? I don't know, i don't feel too comfortable doing things here on the kink meme because i'll probably do it wrong, so I think I just won't, if it's okay. ;_;' and i know this doujin i think, i love it. <3
and thank you!
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Just look at the smut fics ...eventually youll find it. If I find some again Ill link you <3 Its okay if you do it wrong btw! Pretty much everyone screws up one way or another in the beginning so its not like anyone will point it out. Most aren't that jerky. :)
I can't wait to see more of your work!
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Also, can't wait for the epilogue.
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