A Game of Chase (1/?)
anonymous
December 27 2011, 23:04:07 UTC
The sun hung lazily, low in the sky, casting a golden glow on everything. The burnished, languid, light seemed to flawlessly mix with its azure backdrop; listlessly hanging clouds absorbing any and all color reflected at them. The late afternoon radiance was dulling down as twilight quickly approached, birds finding perch on the branches of a large, lofty oak which stood proudly and alone on the grassy hill. The tree was surrounded by seemingly endless tall grasses and wild flowers, whose stalks swayed slowly in the soft breeze. A winding stream gleamed in the sun, waves of reflected light flashing onto any surface they could touch, stretching throughout the vast flat land before vanishing off into the looming forest on the meadow’s edge
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A Game of Chase (17/17) Complete
anonymous
December 27 2011, 23:37:01 UTC
"So, so good." It was quiet and Arthur was still tense until the other yawned, practically encasing him against his body. "And look, you're alive. Looks like somebody was... being a silly paranoid bunny
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Re: A Game of Chase (17/17) Complete
anonymous
December 28 2011, 00:24:46 UTC
I don't normally like this sort of thing. I do love power play, but furries have never been my thing and neither has dubcon.
But dear God, this is amazing. It's dripping with sex appeal and if my dad wasn't in the next room I would have been fapping to this like there was no tomorrow.
Re: A Game of Chase (17/17) Complete
anonymous
December 28 2011, 07:53:27 UTC
Oh my. You did a great job for your first fill, anon. I liked the Greater Animal Spirit sort of relationship you gave the animal people to normal animals. Grouchy, stern Arthur holding court over a bunch of furry rabbits, while floppy, lazy Alfred probably gets mobbed regularly by wolf pups (I've had this happen once; you almost die of the puppy slobber while their tired but slightly frightening wolf mother gives you a look that means "*Thank you*"). XD
Lovely descriptions, and wonderful relationship dynamics. I quite liked Alfred's way of speaking and his prejudice about rabbits ("They're all sluts!") was funny.
Re: A Game of Chase (17/17) Complete
anonymous
January 20 2012, 18:45:18 UTC
I never even realized that I like dark!Alfred. Why hello there, new kink! Nice to meet you! :D
In all seriousness though, this fic has been a pleasure to read. I love your writing (the style, characterizations, descriptions, and the fairy tale, nostalgia-like ambiance)...it's just a solid piece of writing overall. If you ever decide to de-anon and write more fanfics, I for one would be looking forward to reading them. <3
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But dear God, this is amazing. It's dripping with sex appeal and if my dad wasn't in the next room I would have been fapping to this like there was no tomorrow.
Hope to see you around, Anon!
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Lovely descriptions, and wonderful relationship dynamics. I quite liked Alfred's way of speaking and his prejudice about rabbits ("They're all sluts!") was funny.
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In all seriousness though, this fic has been a pleasure to read. I love your writing (the style, characterizations, descriptions, and the fairy tale, nostalgia-like ambiance)...it's just a solid piece of writing overall. If you ever decide to de-anon and write more fanfics, I for one would be looking forward to reading them. <3
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