USUK Sticky Tape Bondage
anonymous
July 24 2011, 07:44:56 UTC
America hasn't seen England in weeks. So he flies to London and tracks him down, finding him at Buckingham Palace/Number 10/some parliament building. England is stressed and irritable and refuses to give him time of day. So America gets a roll of sticky/masking tape and binds him with it, and then proceeds to ravish him senseless.
Bonus 1. Afterwards, when England is all groggy and sated, America comments on how all of England's body hair must be concentrated in one place, since it didn't hurt to take the tape off. 2. England really needed a good, hard shagging. 3. Multiple rounds, rough and hard until the final, gentle, loving round.
A Sticky Situation 1/?
anonymous
August 15 2011, 00:02:08 UTC
“But Iggy~...” America pleaded, bringing out his last, most potent weapon - the puppy eyes. “We haven’t seen each other for weeeeeks, and I even sneaked out to come see you, and you’ve been working too hard lately, we both need a break.” He draped himself over the frazzled England’s back, nearly causing the wheeled chair to roll into the desk. “Do you know how hard it is to get into the palace anymore? Or how long it took me to find you here, I mean, I checked everywhere before I looked here, you hardly ever use this office.”
He leaned down and nuzzled England’s neck, usually a quick and easy bet for getting the island nation flustered and into his way of thinking. Today, though, England simply high-fived America’s face until he backed off.
“And I’m telling you I need to get this done. Now go play or something until later, when I’ve finished,” England demanded, pointing toward the door in his best Imperial manner
( ... )
Re: A Sticky Situation 1/?
anonymous
August 15 2011, 21:16:50 UTC
This seems really cute so far~ I'm excited for when it starts getting sexy. ;) Also, loved this line: England simply high-fived America’s face until he backed off. Pffft, high-fived his face. XD
The beginning is seriously cute and I love the paragraph where you talk about America learning to read the atmosphere just for England X3 Also, high-giving Alfred's face XD
Hmm, what I want to see? Well... Multiple positions would be wonderful and I'd really like to see doggy style and bent-over-the-desk... And I could really do with some really dirty dirty talk... But I don't really have many squicks so I'm sure whatever you have planned will be both hot and excellent!
Anon hope she's encouraging A!A to improve rather than discourage, honest!
anonymous
August 18 2011, 09:20:19 UTC
It's a good beginning, however, things seemed to be quite a rush already in the first part.
A!A could've told us more of England's behaviour so we slowly catching up before having America summing things up.
Fancy words (e.g. high-five and Imperial, why capital by the way?) aren't quite necessary and instead made the fic look quite ehh... Inexperienced.
Lastly, sentences like "This was bad." and '" America had an IDEA." (again, why capital? Shouldn't be necessary) can be refined so they don't sound "stiff" or like "commands".
Anon apologise she can't word things out better. Hopefully it would help A!A :) Most important part, please do not rush and let us readers immerse into the story as well, ehh.. Is my advice.
Re: Anon hope she's encouraging A!A to improve rather than discourage, honest!
anonymous
August 18 2011, 11:36:58 UTC
Passerby!anon here! :)
While I do respect your comments, I completely disagree. I think that this fill is written from America's point of view and, if this is indeed the case, he would certainly be using the words and phrases that you've mentioned. I'm completely 'immersed' in the story already because I feel like I'm watchig America's thought processes. The capitalisation is present because America tends to be portrayed as rather over-enthusiastic and childish by the fandom, so he'd be over-emphasising things even in his own mind.
Of course, this is just my own opinion :) I might be way off the mark, but I personally quite like this style of writing :)
This! I was going to say pretty much the same thing; I think A!A made a conscious choice to do those things. It really makes America's voice and personality come across, especially that overexcited puppy thing he's got going on. LOL
Either way, I'm definitely enjoying this story. <3
Re: Anon hope she's encouraging A!A to improve rather than discourage, honest!
anonymous
August 19 2011, 01:28:32 UTC
High-five and imperial aren't fancy words...
Like the other anons, I don't think this is rushed at all. In fact, it's simply presenting the context of the story. And I think using capitals is great for America. As someone else said, he's speech is usually child-like and over-enthusiastic.
Re: A Sticky Situation 2/?
anonymous
August 22 2011, 23:37:39 UTC
England snarled at the paper in front of him. He hadn’t lied to America, he needed to get this done…just like he’d needed to get the set before that, and the one before that, and bloody hell what were the buggering twats thinking, were they doing such a cock-up on their jobs that he need to do all their work too? Every single excuse they’d given him was a load of codswallop! Fucking tossers, all of them
( ... )
Re: A Sticky Situation 2/?
anonymous
August 23 2011, 00:08:36 UTC
Author!Anon here, with a couple notes that wouldn't fit with the fic - curse you character limits.
Thanks for all the comments! They make me do a very undignified happy dance. :D And for the commenter who wondered - yes, the first chapter of this fill was done in America's POV. This chapter is meant to be England's, primarily. America snuck in there at the very end.
Looking up the British slang for England's mini-rant was quite entertaining, though. XD So many ways to call someone an idiot...
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1. Afterwards, when England is all groggy and sated, America comments on how all of England's body hair must be concentrated in one place, since it didn't hurt to take the tape off.
2. England really needed a good, hard shagging.
3. Multiple rounds, rough and hard until the final, gentle, loving round.
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He leaned down and nuzzled England’s neck, usually a quick and easy bet for getting the island nation flustered and into his way of thinking. Today, though, England simply high-fived America’s face until he backed off.
“And I’m telling you I need to get this done. Now go play or something until later, when I’ve finished,” England demanded, pointing toward the door in his best Imperial manner ( ... )
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Also, loved this line: England simply high-fived America’s face until he backed off. Pffft, high-fived his face. XD
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(Another random reader who is greatly enjoying this, Authornon!)
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The beginning is seriously cute and I love the paragraph where you talk about America learning to read the atmosphere just for England X3 Also, high-giving Alfred's face XD
Hmm, what I want to see? Well... Multiple positions would be wonderful and I'd really like to see doggy style and bent-over-the-desk... And I could really do with some really dirty dirty talk... But I don't really have many squicks so I'm sure whatever you have planned will be both hot and excellent!
Oh, and the title is perfect <3
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A!A could've told us more of England's behaviour so we slowly catching up before having America summing things up.
Fancy words (e.g. high-five and Imperial, why capital by the way?) aren't quite necessary and instead made the fic look quite ehh... Inexperienced.
Lastly, sentences like "This was bad." and '" America had an IDEA." (again, why capital? Shouldn't be necessary) can be refined so they don't sound "stiff" or like "commands".
Anon apologise she can't word things out better. Hopefully it would help A!A :) Most important part, please do not rush and let us readers immerse into the story as well, ehh.. Is my advice.
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While I do respect your comments, I completely disagree. I think that this fill is written from America's point of view and, if this is indeed the case, he would certainly be using the words and phrases that you've mentioned. I'm completely 'immersed' in the story already because I feel like I'm watchig America's thought processes. The capitalisation is present because America tends to be portrayed as rather over-enthusiastic and childish by the fandom, so he'd be over-emphasising things even in his own mind.
Of course, this is just my own opinion :) I might be way off the mark, but I personally quite like this style of writing :)
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Either way, I'm definitely enjoying this story. <3
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Like the other anons, I don't think this is rushed at all. In fact, it's simply presenting the context of the story. And I think using capitals is great for America. As someone else said, he's speech is usually child-like and over-enthusiastic.
I think the A!A ha done a very nice job.
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Thanks for all the comments! They make me do a very undignified happy dance. :D And for the commenter who wondered - yes, the first chapter of this fill was done in America's POV. This chapter is meant to be England's, primarily. America snuck in there at the very end.
Looking up the British slang for England's mini-rant was quite entertaining, though. XD So many ways to call someone an idiot...
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Please update soon!
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America, go for it! I almost feel sorry for poor England, but he needs it. 8D
I'm still loving this and I can't wait until the next update!
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