The First Page [1/5]
anonymous
August 12 2011, 06:28:23 UTC
USUK is a side pairing in this (and also France/Spain if you want to read it that way), but the main pairing is Giripan. It's also a human AU. Hope all of that's okay with you, OP.
When Alfred had texted Kiku about them going out for drinks together with Arthur, Kiku had wanted to politely decline his offer. The inclusion of Arthur's name indicated that this outing would consist mainly of Arthur getting progressively drunker and flirtier towards Alfred who would initially laugh at him before flirting right back, all while Kiku quietly sat off to one side and tried his best to focus on something other than Alfred's delighted laughs or the forget-me-too allure of alcohol. He had, in fact, sent Alfred an initial reply apologizing about how he didn't think he had the time for such an outing.
Alfred, however, had promptly sent Kiku a second text insisting that he needed him because they all knew how drunk off his ass Arthur became without proper supervision and how Alfred himself wasn't above the occasional chug of beer, so they needed
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The First Page [2/5]
anonymous
August 12 2011, 06:29:59 UTC
Kiku felt the corners of his mouth tug up unconsciously, which took him by surprise as his earlier smiles had all been put on for Alfred's benefit. He forced his lips back into a blank expression and looked away from this stranger who didn't even know his name and yet was acting as if he already knew him from some place, but it didn't take long for his restless mind to point out that said stranger was still far more interesting to look at than the unchanging bottles at the back of the bar and wasn't it a mystery how this stranger had apparently singled him out from the tall, handsome men in this bar for attention
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The First Page [3/5]
anonymous
August 12 2011, 06:31:09 UTC
Kiku was momentarily flustered because this introduction felt so casual and yet so earnest, but even in that flustered moment he knew he was indeed going to reply to this Heracles who was smiling gently at him and the words soon came easily to him -- surprisingly easy, in fact. He told Heracles his name and official designation as sober driver and timekeeper of Alfred and Arthur, which caused Heracles to glance over at the intimate duo for a second before turning back to Kiku with a wry smile and saying that he was also obliged to remain as sober as Kiku even as people got spectacularly drunk all around them. It made Heracles wish that he had the foresight to bring something here to occupy him
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The First Page [4/5]
anonymous
August 12 2011, 06:32:35 UTC
Kiku felt his face heat up, but also a strange thrill course through him, and he began talking about himself. He had meant to keep his end of the conversation short and simple as he normally did, but found his sentences becoming longer and more detailed as Heracles gazed at him and even rested his cheek against his hand in a disconcertingly attractive way, because the more Kiku talked about himself, the more Heracles would talk about himself in return in that deep voice of his. Heracles wasn't just a massive cat lover, but also a devout memorizer of myths and folktales from all over the world, a Grecian who hoped that his homeland was still as beautiful as he remembered it to be in spite of the current riots, an amateur sculptor who was trying to make his noses look less like wedges of cheese
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The First Page [5/5]
anonymous
August 12 2011, 06:37:28 UTC
His tongue faltered on these words that couldn't be all conveyed clearly in a single night, and he ended up giving Heracles a simple thank you and goodbye instead
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Re: The First Page [5/5]
anonymous
August 12 2011, 11:20:09 UTC
That was an incredibly adorable fill!!! And you made Greece so so sexy I wanted to steal him... and then made the whole thing so cute I'd have to give him right back to Japan if I did. Well-written! :D
Thanks! That's exactly what I wanted the writing to feel like, as if Kiku and Heracles were in their own little world apart from the rest of the bar, so I'm happy to read your comments. :]
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anonymous
August 14 2011, 07:49:53 UTC
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OP IS IN LOVE. SO BAD. THANK YOU SO DESPERATELY.
This is the first time a request of mine has ever been filled, so OP is very, very, very grateful!
I actually hadn't been able to check anything hetalia-kink related thanks to school, and checked this thread not expecting anything but was extremely excited when I saw it had been filled!
I thought this was brilliant. I listened to the song as I read and I hit every single part as TS sang and it was perfect. I especially loved the last part, where he's worrying just like in the chorus of the song.
I'm ecstatic that you loved my fill so much! I was a bit nervous about how well I pulled off the parallels with the song, so thank you so much for leaving a comment when you got the time! (Yep, school will do that to your free time. I speak this from experience.)
You're welcome! ♥ I hope you get more of your requests filled in the future.
(Although, OP would like if it wasn't USUK, but it's fine if you end up doing it anyway.)
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When Alfred had texted Kiku about them going out for drinks together with Arthur, Kiku had wanted to politely decline his offer. The inclusion of Arthur's name indicated that this outing would consist mainly of Arthur getting progressively drunker and flirtier towards Alfred who would initially laugh at him before flirting right back, all while Kiku quietly sat off to one side and tried his best to focus on something other than Alfred's delighted laughs or the forget-me-too allure of alcohol. He had, in fact, sent Alfred an initial reply apologizing about how he didn't think he had the time for such an outing.
Alfred, however, had promptly sent Kiku a second text insisting that he needed him because they all knew how drunk off his ass Arthur became without proper supervision and how Alfred himself wasn't above the occasional chug of beer, so they needed ( ... )
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And the cameos with France, Spain, England and America were much LULZ and awesome too. Good job!
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OP IS IN LOVE. SO BAD. THANK YOU SO DESPERATELY.
This is the first time a request of mine has ever been filled, so OP is very, very, very grateful!
I actually hadn't been able to check anything hetalia-kink related thanks to school, and checked this thread not expecting anything but was extremely excited when I saw it had been filled!
I thought this was brilliant. I listened to the song as I read and I hit every single part as TS sang and it was perfect. I especially loved the last part, where he's worrying just like in the chorus of the song.
Oh, and the cat stories. That was hilarious!
Thank you so much A!A!
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You're welcome! ♥ I hope you get more of your requests filled in the future.
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