Five More (1/3)
anonymous
January 15 2009, 15:07:42 UTC
Sorry for the wait! This one got a little longer than the other, and I ended up rewriting about half because I wasn't happy with it. I'm still not, entirely, but! I hope this will suffice, OP. <3
I. It was there the very first time the boy had stumbled from the wilderness, wide-eyed and bewildered: the golden stalks of rye, the neatly tended garden, the little pond surrounded with glossy red flowers. He had come to the top of the grassy rise, stood stock-still and stared, captivated with the vision. It was a peaceful thing, this little house, a thing that he later would think should be a painting; but he was still new, and his people had not yet painted anything, and so Lithuania did nothing more than trace the lines of it with his eyes, drink in the novelty of it all
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Five More (2/4)
anonymous
January 15 2009, 15:30:23 UTC
II. Lithuania did not know yet where the spices were kept in the pantry- or perhaps it was simply that Poland had no set place for anything at all
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Five More (3/4)
anonymous
January 15 2009, 15:34:59 UTC
III.They did not make it as far as the bedroom; the last of the armor came off when fumbling fingers loosened straps far too difficult for the occasion, fell to the floor before the hearth with a clang
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Five More (4/4)
anonymous
January 15 2009, 15:55:32 UTC
V.
It had been put off for as long as Lithuania dared; already, he imagined that there was something like rebuke in Poland’s eyes each time he shied away, each time another excuse joined the increasingly implausible collection of them. And he had promised himself this, promised himself today, for if not now, on the anniversary of his independence, he was afraid he might never gather the courage at all
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Re: Five More (4/4)
anonymous
January 15 2009, 18:52:53 UTC
Aaaah, anon loves you for this. I've been looking forward for these since I read the Poland one. I love how they mirror each other and you sum up what I love about the pairing perfectly and hhjkhwqk &hearts &hearts &hearts &hearts
Re: Five More (4/4)
anonymous
January 16 2009, 03:27:44 UTC
;_____;............... ..................... .........*___________* requesting this was my best decision in this year :D <333333333333333333333333333333
Re: Five More (4/4)
anonymous
January 16 2009, 03:37:35 UTC
One of the best fics on this meme. I don't know what else to say since I'm as speechless as some of the above. I loved how you handled the Russia part, very creative. And the last part...simply beautiful. Anon, who has a thing for Liet, loves you.
five times Lithuania realized he was in love with Poland
becouse I'm fangirl of Poland's five times one
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I. It was there the very first time the boy had stumbled from the wilderness, wide-eyed and bewildered: the golden stalks of rye, the neatly tended garden, the little pond surrounded with glossy red flowers. He had come to the top of the grassy rise, stood stock-still and stared, captivated with the vision. It was a peaceful thing, this little house, a thing that he later would think should be a painting; but he was still new, and his people had not yet painted anything, and so Lithuania did nothing more than trace the lines of it with his eyes, drink in the novelty of it all ( ... )
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It had been put off for as long as Lithuania dared; already, he imagined that there was something like rebuke in Poland’s eyes each time he shied away, each time another excuse joined the increasingly implausible collection of them. And he had promised himself this, promised himself today, for if not now, on the anniversary of his independence, he was afraid he might never gather the courage at all ( ... )
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I love you so hard. ;___;
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Thanks anon ♥ I'm a big fan now, of them and you.
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requesting this was my best decision in this year :D
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I r very very jealous of your skills author-anon :D
this makes me want to give up writing and just fangirl yours..
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