Poland's WWII scars
anonymous
March 7 2009, 23:11:02 UTC
This time Lithuania finds them and discover that his friend had his own problems too. ...becouse seriously, there are not many nations that suffered that much during war.
Long sleeves [1/?]
anonymous
March 12 2009, 18:53:29 UTC
Beware of angst and shonen ai. I’m really sorry for all grammar, spelling and punctuation errors, it’s my first serious fic in English. Hope OP likes it :< Lame title is lame
Long sleevesLithuania still hadn’t gotten used to his newly regained independence. Even now, on the walk with Poland, he couldn’t shake off the feeling of being watched. He kept glancing behind his shoulder just to check if there wasn’t anyone tall with scarf on his neck following them
( ... )
Long sleeves [2/3]
anonymous
March 12 2009, 18:57:32 UTC
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It went smoothly at first. Small talk, tense atmosphere and suddenly they were kissing.
Lithuania slowly lowered Poland on the bed and lied on top of him. His tongue was moving in Feliks’ mouth, massaging and discovering once familiar territory. Poland seemed to enjoy this as he happily hugged Toris and pulled him further down. Lithuania’s hands started wandering on Poland’s body, tugging on buttons and sliding underneath the shirt. His right hand brushed over Poland’s left breast.
The blonde immediately tensed. Toris broke the kiss.
‘Feliks?’ he questioned and looked at his friend’s face. His eyes widened. ‘Feliks? Feliks! What happened? Feliks!’
Poland didn’t seem to have heard him. His bright green eyes were wide open, his breath shallow, his expression panicked. His gaze landed on ceiling but his thoughts were far away from the current situation.
Shining blonde hair. Neat uniform. Crystal blue eyes. Oh God, those eyes looking at him with no mercy
( ... )
Long sleeves [3/3]
anonymous
March 12 2009, 18:59:12 UTC
Poland didn’t flinch when he finally pulled it off but winced at the sound if Lithuania’s gasp.
Toris didn’t know what to think. Feliks’ torso and arms were covered in so many scars he wasn’t sure he could count them. Small and big ones - all of them looked terrifying.
But the biggest and most scary was the one over his heart. It looked as if someone had been stabbing Poland repeatedly, causing more and more damage.
‘Is it… Is it Warsaw?’ Lithuania shyly gestured towards that blemish.
‘Yeah. It was after Warsaw Uprising.’ Poland closed his eyes ‘I totally thought that I have gotten over it. Like, I mean, it was bad with Russia, worse than when you touched it. He apparently enjoyed seeing me like that ‘coz he kept on touching it but…’
‘Wait.’ Toris interrupted him. ‘Ivan did something to you?’
‘Yeah. You didn’t know? I thought he had told everyone that I’m so oversensitive and have obsession…’ there was strong hatred in Poland’s voice as he spoke about his brother.
Yes, thought Lithuania, I didn’t know. Ivan never said a word
( ... )
Re: Long sleeves [3/3]
anonymous
March 12 2009, 22:36:35 UTC
dfljaSAS this is really freaking good, anon. D: ♥ The progression from happy hangings out to dfsaffsafasa srs definitely made it hit harder, and the atmosphere throughout the last scene was so quiet and Feliks was so sort of resigned )))): Owww. Very well-done.
But Not Forever [1/1]
anonymous
March 12 2009, 22:15:54 UTC
What I see snatches the breath from my lungs. Your wide-eyed stare shoots straight through me. You tell me to stay or go, but for the love of god shut the door
( ... )
Re: But Not Forever [1/1]
anonymous
March 12 2009, 22:48:44 UTC
Short but sweet, and vivid, and I love how well writers on this meme can manage to make first-person work. *not a fan of the POV usually* The progression in Lithuania's thoughts from shock to understanding how it happened--and Feliks dfkllsa such a tough little weed, seriously--I love that you got that across.
Re: But Not Forever [1/1]
anonymous
March 12 2009, 23:00:20 UTC
Ah, I am so glad you liked it~ Mm, to be honest, I do not often like first-person either, but it works best for the style I used here. I am slowly getting used to making it work well. So, thank you for your kind words!
Feliks = ♥. I like the phoenix image for him, which people use often enough, but to me he seems more like a hardy plant. A plant is only a weed to those who do not want it to grow, after all; and other people, well, they set those same seeds in the ground deliberately, and let them thrive. And some are so beautiful, ah - lupins, fireweed, and of course, poppies.
Re: But Not Forever [1/1]
anonymous
March 12 2009, 23:13:44 UTC
I have written other Poland stories, but a much different type of story than this one; more cutesy subject matter and prosaic style and less like poetry. The ones in the same style as this fic were posted on the main comm a while back. Perhaps you have read them before. *teases*
...becouse seriously, there are not many nations that suffered that much during war.
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Hope OP likes it :<
Lame title is lame
Long sleevesLithuania still hadn’t gotten used to his newly regained independence. Even now, on the walk with Poland, he couldn’t shake off the feeling of being watched. He kept glancing behind his shoulder just to check if there wasn’t anyone tall with scarf on his neck following them ( ... )
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It went smoothly at first. Small talk, tense atmosphere and suddenly they were kissing.
Lithuania slowly lowered Poland on the bed and lied on top of him. His tongue was moving in Feliks’ mouth, massaging and discovering once familiar territory. Poland seemed to enjoy this as he happily hugged Toris and pulled him further down. Lithuania’s hands started wandering on Poland’s body, tugging on buttons and sliding underneath the shirt. His right hand brushed over Poland’s left breast.
The blonde immediately tensed. Toris broke the kiss.
‘Feliks?’ he questioned and looked at his friend’s face. His eyes widened. ‘Feliks? Feliks! What happened? Feliks!’
Poland didn’t seem to have heard him. His bright green eyes were wide open, his breath shallow, his expression panicked. His gaze landed on ceiling but his thoughts were far away from the current situation.
Shining blonde hair. Neat uniform. Crystal blue eyes. Oh God, those eyes looking at him with no mercy ( ... )
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Toris didn’t know what to think. Feliks’ torso and arms were covered in so many scars he wasn’t sure he could count them. Small and big ones - all of them looked terrifying.
But the biggest and most scary was the one over his heart. It looked as if someone had been stabbing Poland repeatedly, causing more and more damage.
‘Is it… Is it Warsaw?’ Lithuania shyly gestured towards that blemish.
‘Yeah. It was after Warsaw Uprising.’ Poland closed his eyes ‘I totally thought that I have gotten over it. Like, I mean, it was bad with Russia, worse than when you touched it. He apparently enjoyed seeing me like that ‘coz he kept on touching it but…’
‘Wait.’ Toris interrupted him. ‘Ivan did something to you?’
‘Yeah. You didn’t know? I thought he had told everyone that I’m so oversensitive and have obsession…’ there was strong hatred in Poland’s voice as he spoke about his brother.
Yes, thought Lithuania, I didn’t know. Ivan never said a word ( ... )
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This is so sad! Poor Feliks. Some of these images are so painful. I want to hug him so much!
Good job, anon darling. ♥
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I like your story, it really moved me.
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Feliks = ♥. I like the phoenix image for him, which people use often enough, but to me he seems more like a hardy plant. A plant is only a weed to those who do not want it to grow, after all; and other people, well, they set those same seeds in the ground deliberately, and let them thrive. And some are so beautiful, ah - lupins, fireweed, and of course, poppies.
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I love how your mind works, anon. (: Write more Feliks, please! (And if you have, I demand links. XD)
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I have written the following for this meme-
1. Canada/Poland, "Friday Afternoon in D.C." http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/3274.html?thread=4184266
2. Poland/Estonia, "Small Hours" (I am working on part 2 of this) http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/3274.html?thread=4387786
3. Canada/Poland, "Apple Picking" http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/4567.html?thread=5198039
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This is beautiful. I'm impressed how you managed to put so many emotions in such a short story. I really like it.
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