Make You Beautiful [1/3]
anonymous
March 15 2009, 01:18:37 UTC
When America awoke to find himself in complete darkness, the first thing he noticed was that he was in pain.
It took a few seconds for his groggy brain to figure out where the pain was coming from. He still couldn't see - something over his eyes, he thought - but he could feel that he seemed to be partially suspended by something wrapped tightly (and painfully) around his wrists that seemed to be digging into his skin. His feet could just barely touch the floor if he stood on tip-toes, but his ankles seemed to be similarly painfully bound. There were other spots of intense pain on his body, but without the pressure of bindings.
His mind was racing. How the hell had he gotten in this situation?! Nobody could've trapped him, he was the hero! The hero didn't caught in things like this! But he couldn't remember what could've gotten him here -
And then there was the noise of a door opening, and a cheerful, heavily accented voice called out "Good morning!" and America remembered everything.
dots on the radar as the warheads sped toward
( ... )
Make You Beautiful [2/3]
anonymous
March 15 2009, 01:19:51 UTC
He was hanging between two full-length mirrors, allowing him to see every inch of his marred body. His arms and his feet both had blood running down them, thanks to the bindings, which America could finally see were barbed wire, the wire around his wrist wrapped around a large hook descending from the ceiling. Large portions of his torso and one of his cheeks were burned and bleeding. It made the pain worse just to look at himself
( ... )
Make You Beautiful [3/3]
anonymous
March 15 2009, 01:20:36 UTC
Finally, there were eighteen piercings (or maybe twenty, maybe sixteen, America wasn't able to keep count) in two long columns. Russia stopped the movements on his shaft, smiling as he touched one of the bars that he had left. "Look, look how even they are! You have been a very good boy, America. Very good indeed." He giggled a little as he gave America time to examine them in the mirror.
America wanted to yell in the other's face again and keep fighting, but his body felt too weak. The pain had only gotten worse, his wrists and ankles increasingly shredded. And now on top of that there was the slightest edge of arousal, the pulses from down below that reminded him again and again that he had enjoyed what Russia had done
( ... )
Re: Make You Beautiful [3/3]
anonymous
March 15 2009, 04:32:54 UTC
Wow. I don't know if this was intentional, but I found the corset piercings to be an extra bit of 'kind' cruelty on Russia's part. Corsets have one of the highest rates of rejection of any surface piercings (mostly due to morons who pierce with hoops, but occasionally because the skin of the back is too thin) and, if rejected, scar a lot as they work their way out of the body.
Anyway, kudos for writing this; it's just lovely and the body mod touches add such depth to this story. I look forward to reading the meme when I know that people with your talent are writing for it.
Oh, that was very much taken into account - while Russia is using bars rather than hoops, he also did some stupid things like lace them far too early and do it all while America's still injured. I think he'd find them just as beautiful if they were swollen and hurting, and use them against America like that. Also, he likes scars.
Ah, I'm so flattered! Thank you for the kind words.
Re: Make You Beautiful [3/3]
anonymous
March 15 2009, 21:35:46 UTC
I had never heard of corset piercings until now (When I saw it on the list, I thought this fic was about America forced into a corset while being given piercings!) but this fic was completely hot.
Also, the ending, GAH, I can't help but wonder how Ivan will take care of America in the morning.
Re: Make You Beautiful [3/3]
anonymous
June 5 2011, 22:53:15 UTC
THis is one of those things where I'm glad the Internet exists. And that I cant have people see my face. O////O
I'm so weird. I like fics where America is either with(consensual) or owned(non-con) by Russia, but I also know that in RL I'd go with the American Motto (Give me Freedom or Give me Death). *facepalm* Hetalia what have you done to me....
He can enjoy it if you'd like.
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It took a few seconds for his groggy brain to figure out where the pain was coming from. He still couldn't see - something over his eyes, he thought - but he could feel that he seemed to be partially suspended by something wrapped tightly (and painfully) around his wrists that seemed to be digging into his skin. His feet could just barely touch the floor if he stood on tip-toes, but his ankles seemed to be similarly painfully bound. There were other spots of intense pain on his body, but without the pressure of bindings.
His mind was racing. How the hell had he gotten in this situation?! Nobody could've trapped him, he was the hero! The hero didn't caught in things like this! But he couldn't remember what could've gotten him here -
And then there was the noise of a door opening, and a cheerful, heavily accented voice called out "Good morning!" and America remembered everything.
dots on the radar as the warheads sped toward ( ... )
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America wanted to yell in the other's face again and keep fighting, but his body felt too weak. The pain had only gotten worse, his wrists and ankles increasingly shredded. And now on top of that there was the slightest edge of arousal, the pulses from down below that reminded him again and again that he had enjoyed what Russia had done ( ... )
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Anyway, kudos for writing this; it's just lovely and the body mod touches add such depth to this story. I look forward to reading the meme when I know that people with your talent are writing for it.
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Ah, I'm so flattered! Thank you for the kind words.
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Also, the ending, GAH, I can't help but wonder how Ivan will take care of America in the morning.
I LOVED THIS <3
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let me count the ways i love you, author!anon
anon feels like the worst sort of american, but loves seeing her country being fucking owned by russia
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I'm so weird. I like fics where America is either with(consensual) or owned(non-con) by Russia, but I also know that in RL I'd go with the American Motto (Give me Freedom or Give me Death). *facepalm* Hetalia what have you done to me....
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