England/America. Arthur encourages/manipualtes Alfred's overeating because he likes a man with meat on his bones and he wants to fatten Alfred up. Anon prefers a general mood of creepy through the whole thing. Bonus points if Alfred remains completely oblivious most of the time... because he totally would.
McDonald's Sundae (1/?)
anonymous
March 24 2009, 11:24:10 UTC
(Not sure if this is creepy enough for anon's taste since it got kinda cute at the end... or well, as cute as it can get for the subject matter. But I hope this was sort of along the lines of what you wanted. :] Chubby!America is <3 )
McDonald's Sundae “Arthur! C’mere for a sec, will ya
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Re: McDonald's Sundae (2/?)
anonymous
March 24 2009, 11:25:00 UTC
“Damn Arthur! Really like being down there, huh?” So consumed by the task at hand, Arthur hadn’t had a moment to pay attention to the growing tightness at the front of his trousers. But before he even had the grace to flush with embarrassment, Alfred was already in the process of tugging the pants down his plump thighs. “I mean, if you really wanted it that badly, you know all you gotta do is ask,” he crooned with an obnoxious wink. At that, his underwear fell to his ankles along with the jeans and he sat down on the bed with that stupid chubby face full of guileless entitlement, the one that Arthur could never deny anything
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Re: McDonald's Sundae (3/?)
anonymous
March 24 2009, 11:25:55 UTC
“Nuh-uh, you’ve been waaaay hornier than me lately,” Alfred retorted before discarding the empty sundae container. Ice cream stained the corners of his mouth and Arthur had to refrain himself from cleaning that off, too. To shut him up, Arthur’s mouth made a welcome return to his partner’s erection, taking him deeper this time, which elicited several long moans from Alfred… as well as an invitation to join him on the bed
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Re: McDonald's Sundae (4/4)
anonymous
March 24 2009, 11:26:46 UTC
Only when it was over did he realize just how tightly he had clung to Alfred’s flabby sides. As pleasure faded and feeling came back, sticky warmth had settled over his flaccid cock, as well as over Alfred’s. Experimentally, he dabbed a finger in some of the liquid, bringing it to Alfred’s lips, It came as a pleasant surprise when he consented, grasping his wrist while he made a show of cleaning the semen from his hand with the utmost care.
For a moment, he let himself collapse against Alfred, soothed by the other nation’s heartbeat and the coolness of his drying skin. “Thank you, I’ve needed to get that out for, well, some time, I think,” he muttered. Alfred only chuckled.
“If you ever need to again, just give the word,” he laughed. His tummy jiggled when he laughed now, Arthur noticed with a swell of pride.
He paused before meeting his gaze once again. “And, uh, by the way,” Alfred added, “…even after that,” he went on, gesturing to the empty fast food bag. “I’m still hungry.”
Re: McDonald's Sundae (4/4)
anonymous
March 24 2009, 12:39:15 UTC
Anon, this disturbed me so much. And gave me a little frisson of wrong!hot.
D: You have me wanting a sequel where the USA is morbidly obese and only just then cluing in (or stopping the denial) as Arthur feeds him until he's bedridden...
Re: McDonald's Sundae (4/4)
anonymous
March 24 2009, 19:42:21 UTC
That's what I was going for. I tried to tone the creepy down just enough so that it wasn't enough to completely overwhelm the hot... which kinda makes it creepier for the reader. A sequel would be really cool, though I'd feel so bad writing that about poor Alfred. He's too much of a sweetheart to deserve that. <33
Re: McDonald's Sundae (4/4)
anonymous
March 24 2009, 14:04:35 UTC
OH MY GOD, ANON! THAT WAS UTTERLY PERFECT! THERE IS NEVER ENOUGH CHUBBY SEX! You described the sexiness to a T and ... geezus h. christ, you are amazing. This is one of the best fics in the entire meme.
Re: McDonald's Sundae (4/4)
anonymous
March 24 2009, 14:51:19 UTC
...Not as creepy as I thought it'd be, but it was AWESOME, nevertheless ♥ Great job, author!anon~ And I especially love how oblivious Alfred is :D /s-sequel? Haha.
The fattening prompt actually reminded me of Kuroshitsuji LOL
Re: McDonald's Sundae (4/4)
anonymous
March 24 2009, 19:45:51 UTC
I would have written it creepier, but for some reason I'm just incapable of doing anything too terrible to Alfred. He's such a lovable idiot. But I'm so glad you liked it. I had a lot of fun writing it. :D
Re: McDonald's Sundae (4/4)
anonymous
March 24 2009, 20:16:09 UTC
My gosh, anon. Creepy Arthur is creepy. I really appreciate you exploring the psychology behind Arthur's fattening fetish. Both the internal conflicts and the desire for power. Nice stuff. :3
Re: McDonald's Sundae (4/4)
anonymous
March 24 2009, 22:53:22 UTC
Aww, great job anon! I love creepy!Arthur, but am also glad you didn't torture Al too much. He really is such a sweet guy, and it's hard to read when people really abuse the hell out of him. I loved it!
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McDonald's Sundae “Arthur! C’mere for a sec, will ya ( ... )
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For a moment, he let himself collapse against Alfred, soothed by the other nation’s heartbeat and the coolness of his drying skin. “Thank you, I’ve needed to get that out for, well, some time, I think,” he muttered. Alfred only chuckled.
“If you ever need to again, just give the word,” he laughed. His tummy jiggled when he laughed now, Arthur noticed with a swell of pride.
He paused before meeting his gaze once again. “And, uh, by the way,” Alfred added, “…even after that,” he went on, gesturing to the empty fast food bag. “I’m still hungry.”
A shadow of a smile crossed Arthur’s face.
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D: You have me wanting a sequel where the USA is morbidly obese and only just then cluing in (or stopping the denial) as Arthur feeds him until he's bedridden...
D: WROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONG!hot
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The fattening prompt actually reminded me of Kuroshitsuji LOL
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I loved it!
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