Germany/S.Italy
anonymous
March 25 2009, 04:28:35 UTC
Germany/S.Italy (because there aren't a lot of this couple)
From the time Romano tried to attack Germany but then France showed up and Romano hid under the back of Germany's uniform.
Please continue from there only France left because he's scared of Germany too! Do anything to get Germany/S.Italy together and have some hot smexing please! Oh and human names please?
Bonus if Feliciano finds out!
(please, please, please Anons? I know this is long but I filled so many times and this is the only thing I have requested. Please? I'll go fill even more if this is done!)
Re: Germany/S.Italy - Protect me Potato head! 4/4
anonymous
October 11 2010, 02:40:27 UTC
When Ludwig woke up he felt a horrible pain coming from his head. The Iron pot. Sure enough there were Lovino and Felicano arguing.
"You don't understand Felicano! I owe him my life. " "WHAT?! " "Francis was going to violate me i just know it~" "Lovino...I don't think that Francis could..." N Italy trailed off remembering that photo on France's webpage.
'He's my slave. " Felicano looked at Ludwig with a serious look. "Germany.....I won't let you hurt Big brother!" he warned while handing Lovino some pants.
"You just upset because I haven't been paying attention to you." "I'm upset because You weren't going to tell me. " "Huh? " " I don't care what you do as long as your Honest , Ludwig."
Ludwig and Lovino met gazes as Felicano left to go find Franis.
"So...Are you going to try out any other positions?" Lovino asked as he strolled over and wrapped his arms seductively around Ludwigs strong shoulders. "um... I can think of a few off the top of my head. " he answered before pulling Romano back into the shower.
Re: Germany/S.Italy - Protect me Potato head! 4/4
anonymous
October 24 2010, 14:38:56 UTC
Yeah the spelling was way off, and things were capitalized that should not have been. Maybe get a beta reader? Also there was an interlude where you went on about "smexing" in the middle of the story, maybe put that at the very end instead of right in the middle?
From the time Romano tried to attack Germany but then France showed up and Romano hid under the back of Germany's uniform.
Please continue from there only France left because he's scared of Germany too!
Do anything to get Germany/S.Italy together and have some hot smexing please! Oh and human names please?
Bonus if Feliciano finds out!
(please, please, please Anons? I know this is long but I filled so many times and this is the only thing I have requested. Please? I'll go fill even more if this is done!)
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The Iron pot.
Sure enough there were Lovino and Felicano arguing.
"You don't understand Felicano! I owe him my life. "
"WHAT?! "
"Francis was going to violate me i just know it~"
"Lovino...I don't think that Francis could..." N Italy trailed off remembering that photo on France's webpage.
'He's my slave. "
Felicano looked at Ludwig with a serious look.
"Germany.....I won't let you hurt Big brother!" he warned while handing Lovino some pants.
"You just upset because I haven't been paying attention to you."
"I'm upset because You weren't going to tell me. "
"Huh? "
" I don't care what you do as long as your Honest , Ludwig."
Ludwig and Lovino met gazes as Felicano left to go find Franis.
"So...Are you going to try out any other positions?" Lovino asked as he strolled over and wrapped his arms seductively around Ludwigs strong shoulders.
"um... I can think of a few off the top of my head. " he answered before pulling Romano back into the shower.
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I'm not sure I wrote it the way you wanted it to turn out.
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Other then that, I liked it. Not bad.
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