Never that simple.
anonymous
March 26 2009, 06:37:40 UTC
After the movie ended - so awe-inspiring, so profound - the theater-goers filed out, stunned by the impact of the performance that shook their psyches. Some snapped back instantly, babbling nothings at each other concerning the everyday. Some spoke in simple fawning, about how certain actors were attractive, or certain explosions adrenaline pumping
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Re: Never that simple.
anonymous
March 26 2009, 15:39:03 UTC
Ffffff--that last line had me hook, line, and sinker. I really enjoyed your take on this prompt, and it was nice seeing Alfred being written with some level of depth.
And such lovely writing too, with just the right amount of description, lovely lovely lovely. :)
While I liked this drabblet, I would love to see you write another fill for this prompt, if only just to read more of your writing. But regardless, thanks for the fill!
Re: Never that simple.
anonymous
March 27 2009, 03:20:33 UTC
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Oh, so good! Thank you! I was totally surprised that you went the 'see the movie route' but it worked out really neat. I loved that you gave us a more thoughtful and contemplative America, and how he was thinking about the line so seriously. Really nice!
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Thanks for this anon
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And such lovely writing too, with just the right amount of description, lovely lovely lovely. :)
While I liked this drabblet, I would love to see you write another fill for this prompt, if only just to read more of your writing. But regardless, thanks for the fill!
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Oh, so good! Thank you! I was totally surprised that you went the 'see the movie route' but it worked out really neat. I loved that you gave us a more thoughtful and contemplative America, and how he was thinking about the line so seriously. Really nice!
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