Russia/America/Canada Part 1/?
anonymous
March 29 2009, 03:59:49 UTC
Alfred had been the first to move, blinded by false heroism as he stomped with the intention of a 6 year old towards the largest nation. One couldn't blame Matthew for interfering once he saw that fierce goading smile the Russian was giving America. All kinds of hurt and dark promises and wrong, just wrong. The man gave a chuckle as the Canadian blocked his brothers path as if the idea of America hurting him was laughable. Matthew had heard about Russia (who hadn't) but he was also nation who had seen far too many of his brothers fights. And a battle between two of the strongest nations on earth would end in loss. For all of them. And while the world may not have noticed his existence quite yet, he would not allow a third world war to start. Not now. Not this soon
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Russia/America/Canada Part 2/?
anonymous
March 30 2009, 03:41:00 UTC
This thought brought back Canada's voice so that he coughed and broke into quick sobs as he started calling for England, France, anybody and God, why was no one here to help! The feel of a cold hand snaking around his neck seized his pleas from his throat although the sobs continued and he could even feel his brother quiet down as the Russian muffled him, although the heated insanity never left his eyes. This close he could see his pulse racing through his neck and the sweat sticking to his upper forehead.
Russia was whispering coo's and nothings in attempt to quiet the Canadian down. Leaning forward to hush in his ear while a free hand came to pet down his hair. Intermingled within the words were unconscious threats (Russia will make feel better, help make better so quiet down little country. Shh, all will be better.) Canada turned away from the ministrations, hiccupping on tears seeing Ivan's other hand over America's mouth, the cause of his brothers muffled silence. Sobs broke from his body heavier at the sight, loud and gasping
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Russia/America/Canada Part 3/3
anonymous
March 30 2009, 20:56:52 UTC
Dry lips placed themselves by his ear, slowly dragging themselves along his jaw line and Canada's face was soon being tickled by blonde hair, too fair to be his own. He closed his eyes, too afraid to chance seeing a purple gaze inches from his own when the kisses moved towards his cheek. He squeezed them shut hoping to block out the ministrations until he heard the whisper of leather against leather and felt the sudden twisting of America next to him, the muffled snarls and yells from his mouth. And his eyes opened to see his brothers head stretched back trying to get away from the foreign hand searching through pants. The lips on his cheek had also ceased their movement as the southern blonde bucked in attempt to rid himself of the invasion, hysterics muffled through layers of fleece cloth. Matthew forgot how to live the moment a deep shuddering inhallation came through his brothers nose, his body stretched at full length, eyes screwed up in what Matthew was terrified to find was fear
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Re: Russia/America/Canada Part 3/3
anonymous
March 30 2009, 22:13:26 UTC
I am in the middle of homework, so I cannot give this the review that it deserves, but I liked this fic so much that when I procrastinated by checking out fanfics, yours was one of the first that I checked to see it was updated!
Anyways, this story is really really really great. Especially for a first fanfiction. I loved the way you detailed everything, the symbolization of what everything that was happening to them meant in the bigger world (Which most Hetalia fanfic writers rarely do) and how you characterized all three of them. I thought you kept them perfectly in character! Good job!
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Ohhhh, writer!anon!<33 Please continue?
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Russia was whispering coo's and nothings in attempt to quiet the Canadian down. Leaning forward to hush in his ear while a free hand came to pet down his hair. Intermingled within the words were unconscious threats (Russia will make feel better, help make better so quiet down little country. Shh, all will be better.) Canada turned away from the ministrations, hiccupping on tears seeing Ivan's other hand over America's mouth, the cause of his brothers muffled silence. Sobs broke from his body heavier at the sight, loud and gasping ( ... )
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The writing is lovely and amazing and just, god, I love this so much it's not even funny. Please update soon!
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Can't wait to see what happens next. ;;;
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Anyways, this story is really really really great. Especially for a first fanfiction.
I loved the way you detailed everything, the symbolization of what everything that was happening to them meant in the bigger world (Which most Hetalia fanfic writers rarely do) and how you characterized all three of them. I thought you kept them perfectly in character!
Good job!
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