Induction (5/6) (Whoops, above was 4/6)
anonymous
March 22 2009, 16:39:42 UTC
Lithuania runs his hands restlessly along Prussia’s spread thighs-he can feel the muscles there shaking - unable to keep his hips still, needing to move, to
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Re: Induction (6/6)
anonymous
March 22 2009, 17:36:28 UTC
THIS.
WINS.
EVERYTHING.
EVER.
fffffffffffffuck anon. You made it hot and hurting and burning and sad and sexy and goddamn I could drop adjectives forever and it wouldn't express the utter dominating WIN of this fill appropriately.
anon is authoranon of the first fill
anonymous
March 22 2009, 18:05:22 UTC
And I fucking loved this.
I loved Liet's POV, the way he doesn't like rough sex but takes strength from Prussia's stoic hedonism (fuck the paradox, he's awesome enough), the subtle hints that gentleness now would break him, the description of Prussia as irrepressibly bold, oh yes, yes that exactly.
This whole thing flirts perfectly on the dubcon line of capitulation=/=consent, which is a fascinating and fucked-up psychological place to write about, and I love how well you pulled it off.
And then, fuck, Russia calling Prussia East, and Prussia shifting between defiance and begging, just ow, oh Prussia.
And the sensations from the point of view of one of the DPers instead of Prussia were fucking hot. unf.
And Russia was huge and inscrutable and scary and hot, so well done.
I think the end was my favorite though, where you just keep hammering home at the damaged-not-broken coping of Prussia and Lithuania both, with Russia looming callously around, the description of the cold and the floor and the warmth at the end, and the ache-
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WINS.
EVERYTHING.
EVER.
fffffffffffffuck anon. You made it hot and hurting and burning and sad and sexy and goddamn I could drop adjectives forever and it wouldn't express the utter dominating WIN of this fill appropriately.
I am your slave and student for life.
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I loved Liet's POV, the way he doesn't like rough sex but takes strength from Prussia's stoic hedonism (fuck the paradox, he's awesome enough), the subtle hints that gentleness now would break him, the description of Prussia as irrepressibly bold, oh yes, yes that exactly.
This whole thing flirts perfectly on the dubcon line of capitulation=/=consent, which is a fascinating and fucked-up psychological place to write about, and I love how well you pulled it off.
And then, fuck, Russia calling Prussia East, and Prussia shifting between defiance and begging, just ow, oh Prussia.
And the sensations from the point of view of one of the DPers instead of Prussia were fucking hot. unf.
And Russia was huge and inscrutable and scary and hot, so well done.
I think the end was my favorite though, where you just keep hammering home at the damaged-not-broken coping of Prussia and Lithuania both, with Russia looming callously around, the description of the cold and the floor and the warmth at the end, and the ache- ( ... )
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Thank you author!anon, this was awesome
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