In order to celebrate HETALIA'S anime adaptation. AXIS POWERS HETALIA KINK MEME

[hetalia_kink]

axis powers
hetalia kink meme

VIEW THIS PART ON DREAMWIDTH

Masterlist of kink memes | Masterlist of Kinks
Okay, let's make history and be more epic than these people, shall we?

STOP! DO NOT REQUEST HERE!
NEW REQUESTS GO IN THE MOST RECENT PART!

New fills for this part go HERE .
Get information at the News Post HERE.

Comments

[anonymous]

bad!sex? It can't always go well...

Any pairing is fine, except no America or Russia please.

[anonymous]

Badsex (part 1/2)

[anonymous]

France was a trooper dammit. But even HE felt the need to give up this conquest

Badsex (part 2/2)

[anonymous]

The third night, another failure. None of the problems from before…. A new problem arose. In fact it arose and REFUSED TO GO THE HELL DOWN

OH GOD I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING

[anonymous]

YOUR CANADA IS MADE OF LAWL AND WIN.

LAWL AND WIN, I SAY.

Re: Badsex (part 2/2)

[anonymous]

BEST FAILED SEX EVER HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH OMFG OMFG WIN ANON. Win.

Re: Badsex (part 2/2)

[anonymous]

Damn you, Ego Anon *shakes a fist* You won't make LOL next time. NEXT TIIIIMEEEEE!

Re: Badsex (part 2/2)

[anonymous]

-twirls devious evil-guy mustache-

Bohahahahaha. Ego-anon strikes again!

-twirls evil cape and ties canada down on railroad track then runs off. Deviously.-

Re: Badsex (part 2/2)

[anonymous]

You know what. This is by far the funniest thing I've read on the meme--especially with the vomiting and the giant bear costume.

Re: Badsex (part 2/2)

[anonymous]

EGO ANON

this was super

write more canada.

Re: Badsex (part 2/2)

[anonymous]

Hi Ego anon. I just have one small crit. You tend to use ... too much. Many times . or , or even -- would work better. If one does use ... they sould probably only number three. Three is the number thou shalt count, not four and not two unless thou continues to three.

You see large amounts of ... do not normally occur in prose. Thus it can be distracting. Especially when ... occurs muliple time in a single sentence, or if it occurs in over 50% of sentences.

If you need to express that some on is trailing in their speech it is okay to say so in the discription. "His words were slow" ""He trailed off at this yada yada. "Hesitently he said" Sometime more can be gained creating the mood for the words in ways like this than by use of ...

Anyways I like your stories it's just I keep getting nitpicky while reading them because of this. Sorry ._.

Re: Badsex (part 2/2)

[anonymous]

YOU HAVE FOUND EGO ANONS FLAWS. GASP.

I know my overuse of the elipse, it is one of my grand weaknesses. xD You see, I am a theatre junkie (gunna be a theatre major in college soon) So I write how I think. And when I think I think with a lot of pauses, and have to write my words the way I would say em out in real life. Hence I feel the need to add those overused elipses, WAY to many "....." at a time, etc. etc. bollocks and jazz. THE THEATE MAJOR. OVERDOING EVERYTHING AND RUINING THE NAME OF GOOD WRITING. (suprised that's all ya nitpicked on actually. My word choice also happens to be suckish a lot of the time. xP)

A FATAL FLAW. (I also over use commas. Dx) Nitpick all ye please (I have been getting too much good critism lately, after all. MY EGO SHOULD BE KNOCKED DOWN A NOTCH OR I WILL BEGIN TO THINK I AM INVINCIBLE)

Thanks for the constructive critism! I will try to keep that in mind when continuing my adventures in this kink meme! <333

Re: Badsex (part 2/2)

[anonymous]

Four for you, Anon!