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In order to celebrate HETALIA'S anime adaptation. AXIS POWERS HETALIA KINK MEME

Jul 25, 2008 15:44

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anonymous July 24 2008, 14:46:23 UTC

OH GOD How do I do this without making myself totally TOTALLY transparent??

Russia/Lithuania, psychological abuse, almost Marathon Man-like?

Extremely rusty, but here goes! I is bad@writing anonymous July 25 2008, 13:42:52 UTC

1/2Pain and Toris were not strangers to each other, not by far. For the past nine-hundred odd years, Toris had seen his lands ravaged by war and invasion, and was there to fight it ( ... )

Re: Extremely rusty, but here goes! I is bad@writing anonymous July 25 2008, 13:43:33 UTC

2/2"Is it safe?" came the question again as arms wound around his neck, hands gripped his back. Toris struggled to see Ivan, see his face, try to even read what vast emptiness was behind those pupils. But feeling the man's cheek pressing against his proved to make this task impossible. Ivan sighed on top of him, heavy and disappointed. A turn of his head, and he rubbed the tip of his nose against Toris', not unlike an animal or a lover. A kiss followed that--no, rather--two kisses. The first one, chaste, a flicker of a kiss, like those seen in teen movies, then grew into something else. Something where Ivan first nibbled on Toris' bottom lip, then coaxed that small mouth open with a soft lick, slipping in, his weight shifting on the chair, causing it to titter and groan at the same time, an audience forced to laugh at a bad comedy. It threatened to topple over, but Ivan's foot scraped along the floor to keep it steady while Toris' bound wrists turned reflexively. Whether it was to try and flail for balance or to escape again ( ... )

Re: Extremely rusty, but here goes! I is bad@writing anonymous August 8 2008, 19:19:26 UTC

How on EARTH does this not have any reviews!?!?

Not OP, but that was...wow, really chilling. (Well, then again, one could argue anything with Russia is chilling, lol). No seriously, though, that was great. I particularly love the imagery you wove into there...the bleeding star, 'crying a trail of red'. AWEsome <3

You are most certainly NOT bad at writing!
Please, keep up the great work! You've got a fan here! :)

Re: Extremely rusty, but here goes! I is bad@writing anonymous August 12 2008, 16:44:32 UTC

Author here.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting on this, I thought no one read it, or if they did, thought it was an absolute waste of time and didn't want to waste anymore on writing a comment for it.

So it makes me extremely happy that you not only read it but also gave me such a long reply.

Thank you very much!

Re: Extremely rusty, but here goes! I is bad@writing anonymous September 2 2008, 21:47:20 UTC

Aah, I read this fanfic along time ago, but I'm guilty of not reviewing it.
Anyways, like the commenter above, the writing is amazing! This fanfic actually stuck in my mind awhile after reading it, I thought it was so interesting. I don't know why I didn't review (laziness, probably), but anyways, this fanfic totally does not deserve the lack of reviews! Its great!

Re: Extremely rusty, but here goes! you are NOT bad@writing anonymous August 29 2009, 13:51:25 UTC

;_;

this is amazing. you have done such a wonderful job on this. thanks a lot :D
it was really captivating, because one would like to find out what "it" is. although I'd like to know what "it" was, I think you don't know it either XD

lol. captcha. "1972 pleases" ROFL.

Re: Extremely rusty, but here goes! I is bad@writing anonymous November 3 2009, 11:56:37 UTC

you make my dies happier, writer!anon. this was... breathtaking. good job!

Re: Extremely rusty, but here goes! I is bad@writing anonymous October 15 2008, 13:06:17 UTC

Oh god, it's so good i actually felt Toris' pain and fear.

Great work, anon. You made my day... worse, in a good way.

anonymous November 3 2008, 04:42:58 UTC

agreeing at the small amount of reviews ;_;

Your writing style is gorgeous, and very well suited for the scene.

and--I want to cry nowwwww aughhhh

I'd love to see an aftermath to this @_@;

Re: Extremely rusty, but here goes! I is bad@writing anonymous November 6 2008, 23:11:20 UTC

Adding my review to the list because this story is really 'good.' Wow, poor Toris. I loved how you captured his selfless personality when his friends were mentioned. And aww, he still has a soft spot for Poland, poor baby. I wished there was some sex in this, and some crying. I like to see my favorite Lithuanian suffer.

Re: Extremely rusty, but here goes! I is bad@writing anonymous December 7 2008, 11:22:53 UTC

Loved this to pieces despite the fact that it made me uneasy- or maybe because of it. Russia is deliciously insane in this one, and I love how the threat to Poland prods Toris to action.

Re: Extremely rusty, but here goes! I is bad@writing anonymous January 3 2009, 09:17:12 UTC

Oh god, you are anything but bad at writing. You wrote such a creepy Russia that I now want to hide in a bomb shelter from him ._.

Re: Extremely rusty, but here goes! I is bad@writing anonymous April 20 2009, 01:19:10 UTC

this gave me the fuzzies :3

Re: Extremely rusty, but here goes! I is bad@writing anonymous June 16 2010, 03:39:04 UTC

Really good, gave me chills :)

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