In order to celebrate HETALIA'S anime adaptation. AXIS POWERS HETALIA KINK MEME

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It's Really A Threesome [1/3?] anonymous January 31 2009, 20:45:39 UTC
Shy!anon is sorry for failtastic high school French. Also sorry if the characterization for Alfred comes off a bit weird; I wanted his behavior to make sense historically. I hope it is okay!He brought flowers, but France had tossed them carelessly on the sideboard to wilt, and America didn't care. They shut themselves up in France's private apartments, and America had no impression of the last several hours except for small talk that neither of them had enjoyed but both had pretended to, and a sour aftertaste from too much wine. But the first bottle was empty, now, and the second as well, and once Alfred finished what was in his glass, they would have no choice but to say what was on their minds ( ... )

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It's Really A Threesome [2/3?] anonymous January 31 2009, 20:49:37 UTC
No easy way to say it. "I want to buy it."

"Louisiana?"

"No, just New Orleans."

"Not Louisiana?" he cocked his head to a spill of golden hair.

"Uh…" America blinked.

Francis made a graceful gesture with one long-fingered hand. "The First Consul has had some, ah, difficulties in the New World lately--"

Alfred mentally translated that to brutal slave uprising--

"--Which resulted in my soldiers withdrawing from one of our little holdings--"

That one meant our single most profitable colony outside Europe--

"And he has decided he's fed up with the whole idea of an empire in the New World," he finished airily. "Actuellement, I'd be willing to let the whole territory go for a song." He reached across the table and caressed the underside of America's chin. "Only for you, of course, because I hold our love so dearly ( ... )

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It's Really A Threesome [3/3] anonymous January 31 2009, 20:53:22 UTC
Soon afterwards he was on his stomach, and both their hands were coated in oil--and a substantial portion of the rest of them, as well. Toned muscles gleamed and flexed in the candlelight as France thrust into him, and Alfred knotted his fingers in the pillowcase and groaned. Now and then Francis leaned forward, and Alfred could see the ends of ash blond hair dancing in the corner of his eye. The European applied his fingertips and mouth and tongue continuously, everywhere, and Alfred didn't even know what he was doing, anymore, he just knew he didn't want it to stop--

And then France leaned forward and, with the devil in his voice, whispered against his ear, "You can scream his name when you come, if you want. I don't mind."

America's eyes widened, and an insupportable flare of rage rose in his throat. He twisted at once and cracked his elbow into the Frenchman's face. Francis fell off to his side with a wet "Ghugh," and Alfred scrambled upright. He jerked the sheet into his lap. "You really know how to spoil a mood," he shouted ( ... )

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Re: It's Really A Threesome [3/3] anonymous January 31 2009, 22:39:05 UTC
I love your characterization of France here. He's such a bitch, it's fantastic.

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Re: It's Really A Threesome [3/3] anonymous February 1 2009, 01:37:55 UTC
Ahhhhhh, this was fantastic. I personally loved how you threw the USxUK twist in there, and Francis enjoying the effect that his relations with Alfred have (presumably) on UK. Wonderful job with this!!

recaptcha = "happy charging", what

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Re: It's Really A Threesome [3/3] anonymous February 1 2009, 17:23:00 UTC
This anon loves your characterization and the twist with England. One of anon's favourite fills on this meme <3

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Re: It's Really A Threesome [3/3] anonymous February 1 2009, 19:59:09 UTC
Clever, witty, snarky- seriously good plot and characterisations. Much win. :D

Teeny weeny bit of concrit, if you don't mind- I think some of the speech had a few to many exclamation marks. Read speech out loud and see if it sounds exclaimed. But the dialogue itself was really fantastic. :)

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writer here! anonymous February 2 2009, 02:56:58 UTC
Criticism is always welcome, and I take your point. Thank you. =D

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Re: It's Really A Threesome [3/3] anonymous February 2 2009, 08:12:59 UTC
I love you, anon. This was amazing and now I want more France/US. Dammit. Totally requesting that when requests are open again OTL

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Re: It's Really A Threesome [3/3] anonymous February 18 2009, 04:56:23 UTC
awesome XYZ affair reference is awesome.
(If I'm not embarissingly mistaken)
This meme needs more France, Thank you for delivering =D

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Re: It's Really A Threesome [3/3] anonymous February 23 2009, 17:50:25 UTC
writer!

XYZ indeed. *grins*

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Re: It's Really A Threesome [3/3] anonymous March 19 2009, 01:51:59 UTC
Awesomely bitchy France. I LOVE IT.

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Re: It's Really A Threesome [3/3] anonymous March 28 2009, 22:18:55 UTC
Overall? Love, love, love! I'm a whore for France/America.

However, two minor critiques:

It's pour toi, not pour tu. You did apologize ahead for your French, though, so no sweat! I'm just nit-picky. ^_^

My slightly bigger complaint (but still rather tiny!), is Alfred's glasses. *sigh* As a Texan, I can't let that go. We joined the Union in 1845. The Louisiana purchase took place in 1803, so Alfred really shouldn't have glasses at this point.

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Re: It's Really A Threesome [3/3] anonymous August 3 2012, 13:13:08 UTC
My critique is that the French were the ones who originally claimed Louisiana. They claimed the Mississippi River and all of its tributaries and named it after King Louis XIV.

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