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"Louisiana?"
"No, just New Orleans."
"Not Louisiana?" he cocked his head to a spill of golden hair.
"Uh…" America blinked.
Francis made a graceful gesture with one long-fingered hand. "The First Consul has had some, ah, difficulties in the New World lately--"
Alfred mentally translated that to brutal slave uprising--
"--Which resulted in my soldiers withdrawing from one of our little holdings--"
That one meant our single most profitable colony outside Europe--
"And he has decided he's fed up with the whole idea of an empire in the New World," he finished airily. "Actuellement, I'd be willing to let the whole territory go for a song." He reached across the table and caressed the underside of America's chin. "Only for you, of course, because I hold our love so dearly ( ... )
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And then France leaned forward and, with the devil in his voice, whispered against his ear, "You can scream his name when you come, if you want. I don't mind."
America's eyes widened, and an insupportable flare of rage rose in his throat. He twisted at once and cracked his elbow into the Frenchman's face. Francis fell off to his side with a wet "Ghugh," and Alfred scrambled upright. He jerked the sheet into his lap. "You really know how to spoil a mood," he shouted ( ... )
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recaptcha = "happy charging", what
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Teeny weeny bit of concrit, if you don't mind- I think some of the speech had a few to many exclamation marks. Read speech out loud and see if it sounds exclaimed. But the dialogue itself was really fantastic. :)
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(If I'm not embarissingly mistaken)
This meme needs more France, Thank you for delivering =D
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XYZ indeed. *grins*
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However, two minor critiques:
It's pour toi, not pour tu. You did apologize ahead for your French, though, so no sweat! I'm just nit-picky. ^_^
My slightly bigger complaint (but still rather tiny!), is Alfred's glasses. *sigh* As a Texan, I can't let that go. We joined the Union in 1845. The Louisiana purchase took place in 1803, so Alfred really shouldn't have glasses at this point.
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