I've been mulling this over for a while and finally got around to writing it. Hope it's "awkward" enough for you, OP!Anon~The door was locked. Prussia grimaced at it, glaring as if his eyes could melt the metal through thought alone. He tried it again
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April 27 2009, 08:41:21 UTC
“Shit, so you really were a girl?!” Prussia sputtered, realization dawning on him.
“Yes, you idiot.”
“So you’re not gonna grow a penis?” Prussia wheedled suspiciously.
“Of course not. What is this, wishful thinking?” Hungary smirked, drawing forward to nudge him with an elbow. An idea occurred to her, and her head tilted to the side in thought. “Ah, but if that’s the case... That would look quite nice...you and Austria-san...”
“Now hold on just a second!” he gasped, his eyes wide. “What kind of thoughts are those?!”
Hungary giggled maliciously. “Well, you always seemed so preoccupied with penises and whether or not I had one, so I just thought--”
“Shut up! That wasn’t the reason at all!”
“That’s an awful nice color for your face, Gilbo,” she went on gleefully as he continued to stammer. “Maybe if you try hard enough it’ll leak into that hair of yours too, huh? Should we find out? It could be fun--”
“Damnit, Eli, shut up!” Prussia snarled. Before he could think about what he was doing or why or anything at all, really
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anonymous
April 27 2009, 08:43:15 UTC
But her lips did, crashing down on his just slightly less painfully, but a little less centered, catching the edge of his mouth. She had dropped her weapon beside her and had his cheeks in both her hands, controlling the kiss, his movements, everything.
Except his hands, those were still free, and they tangled desperately in her hair--and it felt so much softer than he remembered, more like a girl’s...yes, exactly. Like spider’s silk, so soft, but so strong that even if he pulled on it, it wouldn’t break
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anonymous
April 27 2009, 08:44:37 UTC
“Does it hurt?” he asked, pausing.
Hungary shook her head. “No, it doesn’t hu--ahh!” Finally, an unhindered gasp of pleasure escaped from her lips. So that was what she was holding in, Prussia thought, intrigued. He leaned forward, slowly enough to not bite his lip this time, and let her leave her moans in his own mouth--which she did, with surprising ferocity. They vibrated against the tongue that invaded past her teeth, where her own did battle with his, though Prussia couldn’t tell if she were trying to keep him out or invite him further in. He never could
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anonymous
April 27 2009, 08:45:43 UTC
“G-Gilbert?!”
He was pushing her forward, positioning himself between her legs, and she fell shocked and unyielding against the roots below them, effectively pinned. He didn’t answer.
“Gilbert, stop, this isn’t funny. Come on,” she said, her voice still strong but beginning to crumble as he forced her legs wider apart, his features obscured with shadows. She tried to push him off but he held her arms down.
“Gilbert!”
“Will you stop fucking with me then and just admit you’re scared?” he demanded, fury and hurt pride stinging his features when he looked up at her again. They nearly completely dissolved when he saw how she looked, with her face all screwed up and tears forming at the corners of her eyes.
“Never,” she spat back, but her eyes said it for her.
“Fine. Don’t admit it.” He leaned forward to kiss her, relieve her of that twist in her mouth. “I’m not gonna hurt you,” he mumbled.
“You couldn’t even if you wanted t--ungPrussia paused, uncertain
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Re: OP here!
anonymous
April 27 2009, 20:27:19 UTC
Haha, this writer! anon is very relieved you approve, OP~! ::personally considers Hungary to not have been a virgin for a long, long time, considering her sordid past~:: Glad you enjoyed :D
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anonymous
April 27 2009, 22:27:44 UTC
I was absolutely loving it. Then I read the last line, and I loved it even more. These two have such an awesome dynamic. Seriously. Thanks for writing!
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anonymous
April 28 2009, 05:05:15 UTC
Oh, this was adorable! Augh, I love the way they were both desperately nervous, but definitely trying not to show it to the other, and aaaaaah. So much love!
I've been mulling this over for a while and finally got around to writing it. Hope it's "awkward" enough for you, OP!Anon~The door was locked. Prussia grimaced at it, glaring as if his eyes could melt the metal through thought alone. He tried it again ( ... )
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“Yes, you idiot.”
“So you’re not gonna grow a penis?” Prussia wheedled suspiciously.
“Of course not. What is this, wishful thinking?” Hungary smirked, drawing forward to nudge him with an elbow. An idea occurred to her, and her head tilted to the side in thought. “Ah, but if that’s the case... That would look quite nice...you and Austria-san...”
“Now hold on just a second!” he gasped, his eyes wide. “What kind of thoughts are those?!”
Hungary giggled maliciously. “Well, you always seemed so preoccupied with penises and whether or not I had one, so I just thought--”
“Shut up! That wasn’t the reason at all!”
“That’s an awful nice color for your face, Gilbo,” she went on gleefully as he continued to stammer. “Maybe if you try hard enough it’ll leak into that hair of yours too, huh? Should we find out? It could be fun--”
“Damnit, Eli, shut up!” Prussia snarled. Before he could think about what he was doing or why or anything at all, really ( ... )
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Except his hands, those were still free, and they tangled desperately in her hair--and it felt so much softer than he remembered, more like a girl’s...yes, exactly. Like spider’s silk, so soft, but so strong that even if he pulled on it, it wouldn’t break ( ... )
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Hungary shook her head. “No, it doesn’t hu--ahh!” Finally, an unhindered gasp of pleasure escaped from her lips. So that was what she was holding in, Prussia thought, intrigued. He leaned forward, slowly enough to not bite his lip this time, and let her leave her moans in his own mouth--which she did, with surprising ferocity. They vibrated against the tongue that invaded past her teeth, where her own did battle with his, though Prussia couldn’t tell if she were trying to keep him out or invite him further in. He never could ( ... )
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He was pushing her forward, positioning himself between her legs, and she fell shocked and unyielding against the roots below them, effectively pinned. He didn’t answer.
“Gilbert, stop, this isn’t funny. Come on,” she said, her voice still strong but beginning to crumble as he forced her legs wider apart, his features obscured with shadows. She tried to push him off but he held her arms down.
“Gilbert!”
“Will you stop fucking with me then and just admit you’re scared?” he demanded, fury and hurt pride stinging his features when he looked up at her again. They nearly completely dissolved when he saw how she looked, with her face all screwed up and tears forming at the corners of her eyes.
“Never,” she spat back, but her eyes said it for her.
“Fine. Don’t admit it.” He leaned forward to kiss her, relieve her of that twist in her mouth. “I’m not gonna hurt you,” he mumbled.
“You couldn’t even if you wanted t--ungPrussia paused, uncertain ( ... )
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Glad anon liked, though? :D
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“Are they all that short?” Oh Hungary. *snickers* I'm amazed Gilbert didn't lose his... confidence... right there.
And the “Ow! No, I just meant--ah--isn’t it supposed to hurt--haa--when it’s a girl’s first time?”
“Fuck you,” Hungary snapped, her face reddening again.
“...Oh.” part...
Oh~ indeed.
*claps* Awesome job anon! OP is very pleased!
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And also just realized anon's own inability to count the number of parts in this story u________u;;;
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