Crazy For You 1/1
anonymous
February 9 2011, 15:01:50 UTC
Onii-chan always thinks he's the one taking care of me, but I'm really the one taking care of him.
Even now, as he backs away from him with the fear written all over his face, mouth covered with a trembling hand.
"FELICIANO, WHAT DID YOU DO?!"
"Ve~ Nothing much, Onii-chan! You said Spain-nii-chan was bothering you, right? I just made it so that he will never ever bother you again."
Lovino looks sick. His gaze is directed at the bloody kitchen knife Feliciano had dropped on the floor. Even from a distance, he could smell the coppery scent.
He's insane! Lovino's mind screamed. Feliciano's gone mad!
He turns and runs out the room, to the kitchen. The backdoor was five, four feet away. He needed to get out, and escape, tell someoneFeliciano's movements were a blur as he raced ahead, faster than Lovino. The lock clicking shut sent chills down his spine
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Re: Crazy For You 1/1
anonymous
February 9 2011, 16:46:35 UTC
...I didn't realize how much I like the idea of having Yandere!Italy till I read the fill. Poor Lovi D: Good job there authornon!
Just a small suggestion - try to avoid using japanese for characters who don't speak it. The whole "oni-chan" and "Spain-ni-chan" coming from Italy was a bit jarring to read. ^^;;
...I know. I'm a sick anon. D:
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Even now, as he backs away from him with the fear written all over his face, mouth covered with a trembling hand.
"FELICIANO, WHAT DID YOU DO?!"
"Ve~ Nothing much, Onii-chan! You said Spain-nii-chan was bothering you, right? I just made it so that he will never ever bother you again."
Lovino looks sick. His gaze is directed at the bloody kitchen knife Feliciano had dropped on the floor. Even from a distance, he could smell the coppery scent.
He's insane! Lovino's mind screamed. Feliciano's gone mad!
He turns and runs out the room, to the kitchen. The backdoor was five, four feet away. He needed to get out, and escape, tell someoneFeliciano's movements were a blur as he raced ahead, faster than Lovino. The lock clicking shut sent chills down his spine ( ... )
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Just a small suggestion - try to avoid using japanese for characters who don't speak it. The whole "oni-chan" and "Spain-ni-chan" coming from Italy was a bit jarring to read. ^^;;
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