Can't even begin to imagine [1/?]
anonymous
May 9 2009, 06:58:50 UTC
[A/N: Here's some fail!smut because. I-I don't know. Me + Writing smut = 1% success. ;A;'' ]America is on the bed, and it is big and blue with red and white on it. England mocks it a lot when he comes, but he's always the one who winds up sleeping in it for even longer then America
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Can't even begin to imagine [2/?]
anonymous
May 9 2009, 07:21:32 UTC
The night follows swiftly, and they sleep on the bed, or at the least, America sleeps. England sits, awake, and when he thinks, a wash of shame comes over him.
He looks at America; This is so wrong. He thinks. America is like his son; how could he fuck his own -okay, let's rephrase that -let himself get fucked by his own son? He remembers Sophocles' work and in his mind, runs Oedipal Complex. If that wasn't right, then at the very least, this would be enough to be called incest
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Re: Can't even begin to imagine [2/?]
anonymous
May 9 2009, 08:29:30 UTC
Writer-non here!
Thank you so much! I was really worried on the feedback since the prompt wasn't exactly easy (challenge is always great though!) to work with, though I wanted to when I read the lyrics.
And thank you so much again! I hope that by tomorrow, since it's only roughly 5 parts (unless I think of a new idea, orz.) it should be done, since I have no life and work pretty fast. OTL.
I LOVE where you've gone with the prompt. *o* Hot in the first part, and lovely nation self-reflection in the second part. The bit about nation sexuality is how I've always seen them as well. That you're running with the forbidden love thing in the song is awesome, I'm looking forward to the rest!
orz, thank god. That was my first time writing real smut, so I was at a bit of a loss if it was okay. -sob- Ahh, yes! I was actually a bit shocked I haven't seen anyone else poke at their sexuality, but it is a sensitive topic, so I see why people might not.
;A;'' I just hope I don't offend anyone. It's not what I'm trying to do, I swear! And thank you so much~~
Re: Can't even begin to imagine [2/?]
anonymous
May 9 2009, 15:35:16 UTC
Not meaning to poke, but if you are in love with your father, it is an Electra Complex, not an Oedipal...(Unless you want him to be mommy ^^) I LOVE this story so far! Keep going, anon! ILU!
Re: Can't even begin to imagine [2/?]
anonymous
May 9 2009, 16:06:57 UTC
ROFL CRAP ARE YOU SERIOUS? jfgkgjfkldjkl stupid lack of ability to edit in my own story. ;AAA;''' I always figured Oedpial Complex was just loving your parent in general. -sob- SHOWS WHAT I KNOW ABOUT ENGLISH. -shot- well. England was like America's mother too, SO I GUESS IT'S OKAY. -laugh- -denial fkldskds-
Re: Can't even begin to imagine [2/?]
anonymous
May 10 2009, 07:20:12 UTC
Not the anon from above, buuut...
Actually these days the Oedipus complex can refer to all the ideas and feelings that center around the desire to possess the parent of the opposite sex and eliminate the parent of the same sex.
It's when we get specific (a girl who has a sexual attachment to her father has an Electra complex and a boy who has a sexual attachment to his mother has an Oedipus complex) that we start to differentiate and these two different terms come into play.
But honestly the Oedipus complex is quite often used as a general term for having sexual thoughts about one's parents (especially in daily life/by the mass media/etc.), so you really don't have to feel bad. (Especially when you're writing about a male who has sexual feelings for his father figure. Haha, Freud didn't come up with a term for that.
Can't even begin to imagine [3/?]
anonymous
May 13 2009, 05:42:44 UTC
“A-America... Stop...” He manages to get the words out, but it's only followed by a tearing scream from England, and America continues moving inside of him and the sweet screams that England produce only seem to further his hormones.
“It doesn't matter.” He whispers into England's ear; his hands trace down to the older nation's cock and rubs his thumb against the tip of it, and England feels his fingers digging into his palms which are balled into fists, placed against the wall for leverage.
“Yes... it does...” He breathes out, and takes in a sharp gasp when America continues to fondle him and kiss his neck. His back is towards America as it all takes place. America doesn't reply, he just continues to lay sweet kisses against his neck and push him closer to the edge with his skilled hands against his cock, and God, it just felt so good
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US/UK based on the song "As Long As You're Mine" from Wicked.
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He looks at America; This is so wrong. He thinks. America is like his son; how could he fuck his own -okay, let's rephrase that -let himself get fucked by his own son? He remembers Sophocles' work and in his mind, runs Oedipal Complex. If that wasn't right, then at the very least, this would be enough to be called incest ( ... )
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Thank you so much! I was really worried on the feedback since the prompt wasn't exactly easy (challenge is always great though!) to work with, though I wanted to when I read the lyrics.
And thank you so much again! I hope that by tomorrow, since it's only roughly 5 parts (unless I think of a new idea, orz.) it should be done, since I have no life and work pretty fast. OTL.
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The lyrics really are very persuasive if I do say so myself.
I look forward to it! I'll check back often!
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orz, thank god. That was my first time writing real smut, so I was at a bit of a loss if it was okay. -sob- Ahh, yes! I was actually a bit shocked I haven't seen anyone else poke at their sexuality, but it is a sensitive topic, so I see why people might not.
;A;'' I just hope I don't offend anyone. It's not what I'm trying to do, I swear! And thank you so much~~
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Thank you so much!~ <3
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Actually these days the Oedipus complex can refer to all the ideas and feelings that center around the desire to possess the parent of the opposite sex and eliminate the parent of the same sex.
It's when we get specific (a girl who has a sexual attachment to her father has an Electra complex and a boy who has a sexual attachment to his mother has an Oedipus complex) that we start to differentiate and these two different terms come into play.
But honestly the Oedipus complex is quite often used as a general term for having sexual thoughts about one's parents (especially in daily life/by the mass media/etc.), so you really don't have to feel bad. (Especially when you're writing about a male who has sexual feelings for his father figure. Haha, Freud didn't come up with a term for that.
*is a psychology major*
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“It doesn't matter.” He whispers into England's ear; his hands trace down to the older nation's cock and rubs his thumb against the tip of it, and England feels his fingers digging into his palms which are balled into fists, placed against the wall for leverage.
“Yes... it does...” He breathes out, and takes in a sharp gasp when America continues to fondle him and kiss his neck. His back is towards America as it all takes place. America doesn't reply, he just continues to lay sweet kisses against his neck and push him closer to the edge with his skilled hands against his cock, and God, it just felt so good ( ... )
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-bawls-
Poor England....I felt more pity for him than America.
Urg...urg....-heartbreaking-
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more please,author anon?<3333
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