Eto... I really wanna see aristocratic/noble birth Arthur being sold off as a pet/slave by his brothers to a new rich/peasant Alfred ^^ to pay off their debts ^^
Smutty times with Arthur being all uptight despite of his new role, and Alfred enjoying his feisty character. The kink of course is submission!!!
Bonus points if Alfred is to blame for Arthur's family bankrupt (I was thinking of poker, but I'm not picky), whether Arthur gets to know the truth or not is up to writer!anon ^^ don't really care about names so that is also up to you writer!!!
Anon will give all the love in the world to the person who fills this!!! Thanks!!!!
Pride goeth before destruction [1/?]
anonymous
May 4 2009, 08:58:13 UTC
He was woken by someone throwing a bucket of water over his head, freezing cold water like a hard slap to the face. Blearily, Arthur forced his eyes open and almost shut them immediately as blinding white light invaded his pupils.
Spotlights shone directly on his face; he winced and squinted through half-opened eyes, trying to discern where he was. He could vaguely make out the shadowy shapes of men and women sitting in rows before him like the audience at a play. Where was he? What was happening?
Arthur, I’m sorry.His memory returned like a crash of thunder, along with the realisation that he was completely naked. He was on his knees with a collar around his neck, his arms held back by two shadowy figures behind him
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Re: Pride goeth before destruction [2/?]
anonymous
May 4 2009, 09:00:36 UTC
He wanted to snort as a gloved hand ran through his hair. Flaxen hair? What kind of bad romantic novel would ever describe his sandy hair as flaxen? Even in such an embarrassing situation, restrained and naked for crowds of strangers to view him like a piece of meat, he could not repress a bitter smirk
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Re: Pride goeth before destruction [2/?]
anonymous
May 5 2009, 00:46:05 UTC
GAH. This is so awesome.
And this anon doesn't mind the lack of hist. references at all. :3 She actually thinks it would be a little hard to picture it if it was 'historically accurate', and finds this just, just...disturbingly and sinfully delicious good.
Oh my !"#$#$$% God!!!! Such a great beginning!!! it's amazing, Awesome as would say Prussia or America!!!!!! I love you writer!anon with the force of thousands suns and one more!!! I love the way in which you can perceive Arthur's character throughout the whole ordeal!! I'm just so glad right now!!!
And there's nothing to forgive writer!anon!! you're doing an incredible job, and such things are not that necessary to be honest :P, but I truly appreciate your concern with the context, you are making me feel really happy with such a small detail!!!! Please keep going writer!anon!! From anywhere with love... OP
Re: Pride goeth before destruction [3/?]
anonymous
May 5 2009, 13:46:08 UTC
I was a bit hesitant at first because I wasn't sure how Arthur would fit the role of a slave...
... But this. This. Is brilliant, anon. They're both so wickedly IC I'm grinning like a dork over here.
And how do you come up with sentences like, "A pillow found itself kissing the face of Alfred Jones, sliding off in ecstasy onto the floor with a small whump sound." Honestly. ♥
Re: Pride goeth before destruction [3/?]
anonymous
May 5 2009, 17:23:06 UTC
This anon is so completely in love with your writing!<33 And the way you write both Alfred and Arthur, really. They're so in character it's actually rather EASY to picture the scenes, when this anon believes it would be pretty, um...awkward, let's say, to imagine Arthur in that kind of role.
Re: Pride goeth before destruction [4/?]
anonymous
May 6 2009, 19:46:08 UTC
Arthur was a little perturbed by this but, nevertheless, he continued to rant on. “It takes three generations to make a gentleman!” - He remembered his father telling him that - “Don’t get arrogant just because you have a nice house and money! I should
( ... )
Re: Pride goeth before destruction [4/?]
anonymous
May 7 2009, 01:35:49 UTC
F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5 -SPASM OH GOD ;AAA;-
P-PLEASE UPDATE SOON. <3 This is. this is so amazingly hot. -is the person who prayed you'd give it a go and is immensely happy you did- I really love how you portray aristocrat!Alfie. <3 Then again, I love when he's acting horny with Arthur. idk. it's hot. -shot-
... I feel horrible for hoping the sex scene will be very, very soon. oh my. ;A; US/UK WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME.
Smutty times with Arthur being all uptight despite of his new role, and Alfred enjoying his feisty character. The kink of course is submission!!!
Bonus points if Alfred is to blame for Arthur's family bankrupt (I was thinking of poker, but I'm not picky), whether Arthur gets to know the truth or not is up to writer!anon ^^
don't really care about names so that is also up to you writer!!!
Anon will give all the love in the world to the person who fills this!!!
Thanks!!!!
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Spotlights shone directly on his face; he winced and squinted through half-opened eyes, trying to discern where he was. He could vaguely make out the shadowy shapes of men and women sitting in rows before him like the audience at a play. Where was he? What was happening?
Arthur, I’m sorry.His memory returned like a crash of thunder, along with the realisation that he was completely naked. He was on his knees with a collar around his neck, his arms held back by two shadowy figures behind him ( ... )
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And this anon doesn't mind the lack of hist. references at all. :3 She actually thinks it would be a little hard to picture it if it was 'historically accurate', and finds this just, just...disturbingly and sinfully delicious good.
/brb f5ing forever
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I love you writer!anon with the force of thousands suns and one more!!! I love the way in which you can perceive Arthur's character throughout the whole ordeal!! I'm just so glad right now!!!
And there's nothing to forgive writer!anon!! you're doing an incredible job, and such things are not that necessary to be honest :P, but I truly appreciate your concern with the context, you are making me feel really happy with such a small detail!!!!
Please keep going writer!anon!!
From anywhere with love...
OP
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ILU. ILU this. Oh Arthur. So feisty!
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... But this. This. Is brilliant, anon. They're both so wickedly IC I'm grinning like a dork over here.
And how do you come up with sentences like, "A pillow found itself kissing the face of Alfred Jones, sliding off in ecstasy onto the floor with a small whump sound." Honestly. ♥
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And the way you write both Alfred and Arthur, really. They're so in character it's actually rather EASY to picture the scenes, when this anon believes it would be pretty, um...awkward, let's say, to imagine Arthur in that kind of role.
*waits eagerly for more*
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/incoherence
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F5F5F5F5F5
Look, you almost made me de-anon myself in my haste. D<
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P-PLEASE UPDATE SOON. <3 This is. this is so amazingly hot. -is the person who prayed you'd give it a go and is immensely happy you did- I really love how you portray aristocrat!Alfie. <3 Then again, I love when he's acting horny with Arthur. idk. it's hot. -shot-
... I feel horrible for hoping the sex scene will be very, very soon. oh my. ;A; US/UK WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME.
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