Original request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/4567.html?thread=7162839#t7162839 America’s finally conquered, and is forced to live with Russia. Sorry OP, I made you wait so long...America is young in this dream, but not so very young. He’s wearing glasses, and looks pretty put-together. He sits forward in his seat so he can look over the balcony at all the seats below, at all the people in their finery chatting in low voices before the ballet begins. There’s a soft tug on the tail of his evening jacket and Russia says, “It is very distracting when you lean out so far
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The dream. The one where ice cuts his palms when he tries to rise and the night sky’s lit up with dancing red.
Russia calmly watches him struggle. “Even I did not expect to be the one to have you went it was over.”
It can’t end like this, America thinks. The only consolation-that he hasn’t lost to Russia-is overshadowed by the more terrible truth, he’s lost to everyone. How can I be giving up?“How can you still fight?” Russia says in a whisper, genuinely curious. “You can’t endure like this. Let it be over, America. You can put a stop to it with a word and we will begin negotiations
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anonymous
May 13 2009, 12:25:11 UTC
Please do continue. I love America in this (I don't know, the joke part and the lie and everything) and can't wait til we see some Russia outside the dream.
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anonymous
May 13 2009, 22:17:27 UTC
Author!anon. I am not a religious anon, but all sorts of blasphemy ran through my head when I realized I've read all you've written so far. This. This is, I don't know, I can't find the superlatives for it; all my words of praise are far too cliche for this.
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anonymous
May 14 2009, 02:17:23 UTC
author!anon, here: thank you! EVERYONE thank you, you're all so kind Really, everything? :DD I'm flattered, but I think I may have deceived you! If you're going by style alone, that is, haha... (insert furious blush). I could just have some writing/formatting habit I'm not aware of, but almost all of my previous fills have been crack/comedy... I would be blown away if you have picked them out from reading this of all things.
Still, considering all the more talented author!anons here, I'm honestly tickled to have been probably? mistaken for one of them ♥
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anonymous
May 14 2009, 03:21:02 UTC
Oh God, Lithuania and America under Russia's roof is one of my long time kinks. I luv luv luv them. They're my favorite non-yaoi pair and this fic is awesome for having Liet in it to share and help with America's dilemma. I'm so curious to know what caused America to be at Russia's house, and how they will react when they come face to face. The last line left me wanting. What will Russia do? Will he be angry at Lithuania for comforting his long time enemy and rival, or at America for becoming intimate with his favorite Baltic? Please continue.
OP CANNOT BREATHE
anonymous
May 14 2009, 03:49:10 UTC
You make OP happy ;A; I'm loving this so much!! God, don't mind making me wait! Take your time cause this is gorgeous. The way your write Lithuania all caring and sweet tickles my heart. I have to admit, I giggled at the 'ten feet of snow' part. That's a shitload of snow.
America’s finally conquered, and is forced to live with Russia.
Sorry OP, I made you wait so long...America is young in this dream, but not so very young. He’s wearing glasses, and looks pretty put-together. He sits forward in his seat so he can look over the balcony at all the seats below, at all the people in their finery chatting in low voices before the ballet begins. There’s a soft tug on the tail of his evening jacket and Russia says, “It is very distracting when you lean out so far ( ... )
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Russia calmly watches him struggle. “Even I did not expect to be the one to have you went it was over.”
It can’t end like this, America thinks. The only consolation-that he hasn’t lost to Russia-is overshadowed by the more terrible truth, he’s lost to everyone. How can I be giving up?“How can you still fight?” Russia says in a whisper, genuinely curious. “You can’t endure like this. Let it be over, America. You can put a stop to it with a word and we will begin negotiations ( ... )
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please continue anon? ^^
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I love America in this (I don't know, the joke part and the lie and everything) and can't wait til we see some Russia outside the dream.
Gotta go read again.
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Please keep being brilliant, Anon.
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Really, everything? :DD I'm flattered, but I think I may have deceived you! If you're going by style alone, that is, haha... (insert furious blush). I could just have some writing/formatting habit I'm not aware of, but almost all of my previous fills have been crack/comedy... I would be blown away if you have picked them out from reading this of all things.
Still, considering all the more talented author!anons here, I'm honestly tickled to have been probably? mistaken for one of them ♥
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(godnowIwanttorpthis)
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I'm loving this so much!!
God, don't mind making me wait! Take your time cause this is gorgeous. The way your write Lithuania all caring and sweet tickles my heart. I have to admit, I giggled at the 'ten feet of snow' part. That's a shitload of snow.
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That is a shitload of snow indeed. And leaves you a little sore after shoveling the driveway, let me tell you...
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You're doing an overly awesome job so far anon. Please, just PLEASE continue!!!
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