Canada walks in on America sucking England's dick, and gets invited to join in. Sexy things (like stealing Canada's pure as snow virginity perhaps?) ensue.
Re: the drift & flutter of a maple leaf on an early autumn breeze (6/6)
anonymous
May 5 2009, 07:03:11 UTC
Don't you worry, anon-writer! Matthew here is sot-on! Unsure, vulnerable and yet brave and willing to try everything.
And I re-read this again, and found myself to be liking the POV from Matt very, very much. Intoxicated Matt is always interesting xD
Shit, he's already top in my list of fav. characters, and now he won't budge for a long period of time, I believe. Plus, I don't think I haven't told you this, but I have a burning passion for the North American bros + Uk + France (haha, he's being left out this time 8P) OT4 xD and totally don't mind any combination between them, so yeah. SATISFYING MY KINK.
Re: the drift & flutter of a maple leaf on an early autumn breeze (6/6)
anonymous
May 6 2009, 18:18:51 UTC
Author!anon is delighted anew and thanks you again! If it's not strange to say, Matthew wasn't on my list of favorites until I started writing this--and now I've written two fills with him. So I guess he's growing on me. The dynamic between the North American brothers and their European caretakers is a big part of it, I think. ♥
Don't feel too badly for Francis, though; he's gotten his share of love with the boys elsewhere. ;)
Re: the drift & flutter of a maple leaf on an early autumn breeze (6/6)
anonymous
May 1 2009, 03:25:37 UTC
Ah, surrealism. Beautiful, beautiful. Or gorgeous, really.
I adore the mood of this one. You did such a good job at capturing it. The nervous tension, and the first-time awkwardness, and the grim seriousness of the whole thing. Love all of the repeated motifs - the tattoos, the tequila, the smiles, the sounds.
I really liked what you did with your characterization. Taking traits that each character is known for and bringing them to an extreme level, almost. It worked well, very well with the hazy feel of the writing.
Oh, I'd like to add that I'm stalking Star Light, Star Bright, and loving that too. Very eager to see what unfolds. I picked out your writing style right away, and not just from the TBC comments.
Thank you, man. Or woman, if you prefer. I feel so very inspired to write something eccentric right now.
Re: the drift & flutter of a maple leaf on an early autumn breeze (6/6)
anonymous
May 2 2009, 01:07:35 UTC
Oh, Anon--your comments left me aflutter the first time so that I couldn't respond right away. I apologize for taking so long to come back to them. "Gorgeous" is one of my favorite words, so I'm delighted that you would think to apply it to this. I'm also very happy you liked the characterizations, since I'm always nervous about that when starting in a new fandom.
Thank you for reading both this and Star Light, Star Bright. As for the fact that you picked me out from the style, well--that really, really makes me smile.
Re: the drift & flutter of a maple leaf on an early autumn breeze (6/6)
anonymous
May 2 2009, 02:42:27 UTC
One day isn't long at all! And I'm really glad you liked my review. Authors need honest praise, and your writing certainly deserved it.
I'm not going to lie, so I'll say that the father-son dynamic with Arthur and Matthew squicked me out a bit. But if anything, that added to my impression of the piece. It made empathize with Matthew's emotions, even.
Yes, characterization can be hard to get down properly. But no worries! You're doing amazing so far, and I really like how you're portraying them. It's nice to see serious things coming from a comedic canon. (Personally, I'm starting off with the comedy and hoping to turn out some decent serious stuff soon.)
*salutes* You're welcome again! I hope to see you continue writing! The kink meme needs more awesome writers like you!
Re: the drift & flutter of a maple leaf on an early autumn breeze (6/6)
anonymous
May 2 2009, 07:31:55 UTC
Re: the strikethrough--that actually made me smile, because I'd rather have someone appreciate the writing than just the kink itself, I think. So thank you.
It's nice to see serious things coming from a comedic canon.
I could not agree with this more! I've read some beautiful, provocative, and even profound fics on here. Of course, I've also read some hilarious stuff--and since I can't do comedy to save my life, I admire those greatly as well.
Would you feel like linking me to some of your fills? Absolutely fine if you'd rather not.
Re: the drift & flutter of a maple leaf on an early autumn breeze (6/6)
anonymous
May 3 2009, 18:56:58 UTC
Yep, I'll read just about anything as long as it's well-written enough. Even if it ends up scarring me for life. Which generally doesn't happen, and certainly didn't happen with this fic. Like one of the above anons said, you made the kink almost hot.
Agreed! There's a lot of potential for great things to come out of such a unique canon. Ideas can be translated into so many different genres.
Haha, I thought that I couldn't do comedy to save my life until I actually started writing it. You never know until you try, I guess.
Sure, I'll link you to some of my fills, but in all honesty I've just started here. Most of my ideas are still incubating up in my head. I'm hoping to get my second fill done by tonight, so would you mind waiting a bit?
Re: the drift & flutter of a maple leaf on an early autumn breeze (6/6)
anonymous
May 5 2009, 04:02:01 UTC
Oh, excellent--I had bookmarked that second request and have been hoping for a fill, so I'm really looking forward to reading that one. I'll be sure to check out the other one as well. Huzzah for having fun!
Re: the drift & flutter of a maple leaf on an early autumn breeze (6/6)
anonymous
May 1 2009, 03:57:54 UTC
I...
I have no words. I barely remembered to push the anon button thing.
I. I don't know how to describe it. This is one of the most fantastic things I've read in the history of fanfiction, ever. And I've been around for a while.
Re: the drift & flutter of a maple leaf on an early autumn breeze (6/6)
anonymous
May 1 2009, 16:51:10 UTC
Here's to hoping I don't accidentally de-anonize myself while swooning over this.
Dude, you just... stuffed tattoos, drunk!sex (well, at least alcohol usage ;D), spanking, daddy-son-kink (which I totally didn't like until I got into Hetalia) and of course - last but not least - delicious threesome into one fic. I bow to you. And do tell if you have any boots that need licking. ;D
Re: the drift & flutter of a maple leaf on an early autumn breeze (6/6)
anonymous
May 2 2009, 00:58:54 UTC
*author!anon blushes and grins madly* Thank you for reading and for your wonderful comments! I'm so happy you enjoyed this; I was a little worried it might be too kinkerrific (though, really, could there be such a thing?).
Bootlicking! *goes off to prowl through unfilled, unclaimed requests*
Canada walks in on America sucking England's dick, and gets invited to join in. Sexy things (like stealing Canada's pure as snow virginity perhaps?) ensue.
I need this like I need air, ok.
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And I re-read this again, and found myself to be liking the POV from Matt very, very much. Intoxicated Matt is always interesting xD
Shit, he's already top in my list of fav. characters, and now he won't budge for a long period of time, I believe. Plus, I don't think I haven't told you this, but I have a burning passion for the North American bros + Uk + France (haha, he's being left out this time 8P) OT4 xD and totally don't mind any combination between them, so yeah. SATISFYING MY KINK.
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Don't feel too badly for Francis, though; he's gotten his share of love with the boys elsewhere. ;)
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I adore the mood of this one. You did such a good job at capturing it. The nervous tension, and the first-time awkwardness, and the grim seriousness of the whole thing. Love all of the repeated motifs - the tattoos, the tequila, the smiles, the sounds.
I really liked what you did with your characterization. Taking traits that each character is known for and bringing them to an extreme level, almost. It worked well, very well with the hazy feel of the writing.
Oh, I'd like to add that I'm stalking Star Light, Star Bright, and loving that too. Very eager to see what unfolds. I picked out your writing style right away, and not just from the TBC comments.
Thank you, man. Or woman, if you prefer. I feel so very inspired to write something eccentric right now.
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Thank you for reading both this and Star Light, Star Bright. As for the fact that you picked me out from the style, well--that really, really makes me smile.
Thank you, man. Or woman, if you prefer.
This anon is down with either. Thank you again!
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I'm not going to lie, so I'll say that the father-son dynamic with Arthur and Matthew squicked me out a bit. But if anything, that added to my impression of the piece. It made empathize with Matthew's emotions, even.
Yes, characterization can be hard to get down properly. But no worries! You're doing amazing so far, and I really like how you're portraying them. It's nice to see serious things coming from a comedic canon. (Personally, I'm starting off with the comedy and hoping to turn out some decent serious stuff soon.)
*salutes* You're welcome again! I hope to see you continue writing! The kink meme needs more awesome writers like you!
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It's nice to see serious things coming from a comedic canon.
I could not agree with this more! I've read some beautiful, provocative, and even profound fics on here. Of course, I've also read some hilarious stuff--and since I can't do comedy to save my life, I admire those greatly as well.
Would you feel like linking me to some of your fills? Absolutely fine if you'd rather not.
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Agreed! There's a lot of potential for great things to come out of such a unique canon. Ideas can be translated into so many different genres.
Haha, I thought that I couldn't do comedy to save my life until I actually started writing it. You never know until you try, I guess.
Sure, I'll link you to some of my fills, but in all honesty I've just started here. Most of my ideas are still incubating up in my head. I'm hoping to get my second fill done by tonight, so would you mind waiting a bit?
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Do a Barrel Roll! (http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/6850.html?thread=8596674#t8596674)
It's pretty cracky and ridiculous. But it's proving fun as hell to write.
Definitely Not Hockey (http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/6850.html?thread=9219010#t9219010)
I feel no shame for Rule 34-ing my own country. The characterization of everyone is too entertaining for me even think about stopping.
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I have no words. I barely remembered to push the anon button thing.
I. I don't know how to describe it. This is one of the most fantastic things I've read in the history of fanfiction, ever. And I've been around for a while.
Thank you.
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Dude, you just... stuffed tattoos, drunk!sex (well, at least alcohol usage ;D), spanking, daddy-son-kink (which I totally didn't like until I got into Hetalia) and of course - last but not least - delicious threesome into one fic. I bow to you. And do tell if you have any boots that need licking. ;D
♥
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Bootlicking! *goes off to prowl through unfilled, unclaimed requests*
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