Gilbert lay staring at the ceiling because it was all he could do. Russia had done him the “kindness” of leaving a radio on for him. Never a fan of Russian music, Gilbert still begrudgingly appreciated the gesture, because he didn’t think he could handle going mad from boredom, of all things. He was barely keeping himself sane as it is. At least, he thought, he’d finally stopped spontaneously bursting into tears when he woke and remembered his arms and legs were gone
( ... )
In his state, Gilbert felt so tiny. He was a little bird with clipped wings, between the paws of a cat. When he saw Ivan’s fingers hook into his shoulders he could see his claws extend. “Wait…” Gilbert said, and it made him sick to hear his voice quiver so
( ... )
Re: Toy [2/2]
anonymous
June 24 2009, 22:19:21 UTC
OH.MY.GOD!
I'd to literally pause and rethink what to type for this piece. Gilbert being reduced to just... that was so so crushing. It was depressing on his part, just sheer hopelessness and there's nothing he can do about it.
Ivan too, you wrote him chillingly well. Man, just... My mouth is just hanging open reading this continuation.
Brilliantly done, writer!anon... Not OP but, have more internetz? \o/
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anonymous
June 26 2009, 18:52:11 UTC
So~
So I've had an incredibly horrible week, but this made me happy. (Oh irony) Seriously, anon...? Points for you. I know this is a pretty out-there kink, but DAYUM, you write it well.
Prussia's humilation, and Prussia's helplessness, and Prussia's internal struggles... you write them well in such a short space. And trust me, I'm not going to say no to him suffering, which you've damn well supplied, ha ha. I also like that Russia is sort of a... side character. Even though he's the one who has done all of this to him, he seems to rest along the sidelines, as it is what Prussia himself that he's going through which is truly the story. Love for you, just... love.
...Any more? Pff, I just crave it, I thought I was the only other one who liked amputation. Hmm... That being said, do you, or did you just happen to take this fill? (LOL MAKING FRIENDS ON THE KINK MEME THROUGH FUCKED UP AMPUTATION FICS LOL)
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I'd to literally pause and rethink what to type for this piece. Gilbert being reduced to just... that was so so crushing. It was depressing on his part, just sheer hopelessness and there's nothing he can do about it.
Ivan too, you wrote him chillingly well. Man, just... My mouth is just hanging open reading this continuation.
Brilliantly done, writer!anon... Not OP but, have more internetz? \o/
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So I've had an incredibly horrible week, but this made me happy. (Oh irony) Seriously, anon...? Points for you. I know this is a pretty out-there kink, but DAYUM, you write it well.
Prussia's humilation, and Prussia's helplessness, and Prussia's internal struggles... you write them well in such a short space. And trust me, I'm not going to say no to him suffering, which you've damn well supplied, ha ha. I also like that Russia is sort of a... side character. Even though he's the one who has done all of this to him, he seems to rest along the sidelines, as it is what Prussia himself that he's going through which is truly the story. Love for you, just... love.
...Any more? Pff, I just crave it, I thought I was the only other one who liked amputation. Hmm... That being said, do you, or did you just happen to take this fill? (LOL MAKING FRIENDS ON THE KINK MEME THROUGH FUCKED UP AMPUTATION FICS LOL)
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