i`m not even sure why i want to see this so bad but ; america. being brutally raped. by anyone you want, really, i don`t care if it makes historical sense.
but when i say brutal i mean brutal. bonuses for physical violence, being extra-rough with our dear alfred, mindfuck, degradation, calling him names, just generally making him suffer. if you want to include post-experience trauma, i`d love you that much more. super extra special bonus for him being confused, and not understanding why this is happening to him, because he doesn't realize how anyone could hate him.
... uhh... yeah. wow, that ended up weird. didn`t it.
i`m sorry, please don`t hurt me, i love america i really do /sob
Blood and Vodka [1/?]
anonymous
July 5 2009, 06:57:48 UTC
OKAY I LIED, it's not England, it's Russia. I couldn't see Arthur actually doing this to Alfred. However, I don't think Ivan would have any such compunctions. Somehow, I'm not really satisfied with this. Oh well. I hope OP likes! <3
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Re: Blood and Vodka [2/?]
anonymous
July 5 2009, 06:59:25 UTC
Ivan laughed low in his throat. “That is right, my little toy.” Alfred heard what he assumed to be the tipping and sloshing of liquid in a bottle. The tone in Ivan's voice relieved Alfred slightly; he wasn't very far into the bottle by the sounds of it. Perhaps he could talk some sense into the Russian. “D'you know why you're here
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Re: Blood and Vodka [3/?]
anonymous
July 5 2009, 07:01:33 UTC
Alfred was panting and cringing against the throbbing pain in his extremities. He couldn't remember ever having felt such pain, except perhaps during the Civil War. He remembered that time... No one could have helped him, as much as some of them had wanted to. He would never admit it to anyone, but he knew there was a point where he had gone insane, locking himself away in his dark cellar, writhing and screaming, clawing at his skin just to draw blood, to feel it flow down his arms, to fight the pain that boiled deep within him. And it had been all his fault. He had caused that, but this... This wasn't his fault. He hadn't done anything wrong
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Re: Blood and Vodka [4/4]
anonymous
July 5 2009, 07:03:35 UTC
The Russian started to move, shoving his large length into Alfred again and again, faster and harder, all the while listening to the other beg and plead for him to stop because it hurt so much and he couldn't take it anymore. Ivan held himself back, even though the pleading was turning him on so fucking much. He wouldn't let himself finish until he was sure this imbecile knew the true meaning of the word pain. Alfred was crying freely, shaking and sobbing, every pore in his body screaming for this to stop, screaming for him to wake up in his own bed and forget all about this nightmare. But the nightmare didn't end. Not for Alfred
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Re: Blood and Vodka [4/4]
anonymous
July 5 2009, 22:41:33 UTC
Passing anon admits she hasn't got a fondness for insane!Ivan (but that's her problem), but the lovely way he torments Alfred is very clever. "Property of Russia" indeed. That and using vodka as a "disinfectant".
But what I really like is how Alfred just doesn't get why this is happening. In his eyes he's a hero and old wounds are just another thing of the past.
Anon also hopes for an aftermath fic. Great justice must be distributed! Preferably by twin brothers and British guys. "turer hexing" says captcha.
OP IS OMFGing ATM, LEAVE A MESSAGE
anonymous
July 6 2009, 03:55:02 UTC
... oh my god this was perfect. i think i love you. when`s the wedding. don`t hate yourself for writing it, it was just everything i hoped it would be && more -- the one line, where russia is telling him he`s just a toy, and the branding, and the vodka in the cuts oh my god how did you know that was one of my secret kinks --
ok i`m totally incoherent right now but just GUHHHHHHHHH brb rereading over & over and WOW.
OPPPPPPPPPPPPP
anonymous
July 7 2009, 05:30:16 UTC
"and his felt he heart wrench in his chest."
i - i literally felt that while reading this -- just - dfasdfjkl this was so HEARTWRENCHING for lack of a better word && aaahhhh those last few lines stomped my heart into tiny, tiny pieces homfg.
Re: Blood and Vodka [5/4; Epilogue]
anonymous
July 10 2009, 08:08:56 UTC
Thank you thank you thank you... I love gentle!Ivan too, but sometimes I just NEED to have a dose of non-con... and this is SOOOO wonderfully written! The whole time I was reading I was thinking "Ow ow ow that MUST hurt, oh this is wrong but why am I turned on?" The epilogue is beautiful too... at least I am glad Arthur found Alfred ;_;
america. being brutally raped. by anyone you want, really, i don`t care if it makes historical sense.
but when i say brutal i mean brutal. bonuses for physical violence, being extra-rough with our dear alfred, mindfuck, degradation, calling him names, just generally making him suffer. if you want to include post-experience trauma, i`d love you that much more.
super extra special bonus for him being confused, and not understanding why this is happening to him, because he doesn't realize how anyone could hate him.
... uhh... yeah. wow, that ended up weird. didn`t it.
i`m sorry, please don`t hurt me, i love america i really do /sob
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But what I really like is how Alfred just doesn't get why this is happening. In his eyes he's a hero and old wounds are just another thing of the past.
Anon also hopes for an aftermath fic. Great justice must be distributed! Preferably by twin brothers and British guys. "turer hexing" says captcha.
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I have a thing for insane!Ivan, but I like writing him more than reading him. Maybe I'm just a freak.
Epilogue is very, very possible.
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don`t hate yourself for writing it, it was just everything i hoped it would be && more --
the one line, where russia is telling him he`s just a toy, and the branding, and the vodka in the cuts oh my god how did you know that was one of my secret kinks --
ok i`m totally incoherent right now but just GUHHHHHHHHH brb rereading over & over and WOW.
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Yay~ I'm very glad you liked it. :D
I HAVE A THING FOR TORTURING ARTHUR NOW. *failsatlife*
I'll go write the epilogue now. *runs off*
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-sleep-
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i - i literally felt that while reading this --
just - dfasdfjkl this was so HEARTWRENCHING for lack of a better word && aaahhhh those last few lines stomped my heart into tiny, tiny pieces homfg.
thank you so, so much for this, writer-anon ♥
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I didn't think this was very good, I'm SO so so relieved that OP likes it so much. <3
And the wedding is next week, dear. ;D
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The epilogue is beautiful too... at least I am glad Arthur found Alfred ;_;
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