Just Say Yes 2/?
anonymous
July 3 2009, 07:22:40 UTC
Sleep-deprived-author!anon almost wasn't anon last time. orz ---------------------------------------------------------------------- "What?" Ivan asked himself, tears falling freely to gather in the darkness beneathe his feet.
"If your body suffers like their bodies suffer," he told himself, striding ever nearer to brush against his chest, "it will lessen the ache in here."
Ivan supposed that made sense.
"Okay."
A black blindfold, blacker even than the room in which he stood, took his sight from him.
"Must you?" he asked.
He nodded to eyes that didn't see it.
"Take off your clothes," he told himself, stripping at the same time. A length of rope wound itself around his hands, and was tied loosely about his neck.
"Where are you?" he asked suddenly, when he fell forward and smacked his chin.
"Right here," the voice answered, because at that moment it was just a voice again.
A warm weight was dropped onto his back, and he grunted. "I'm always here."
Just Say Yes 4/?
anonymous
July 3 2009, 08:05:11 UTC
Author!Anon is scaring herself again. Um, smut warning. ( Was that asked for? < Ivan lay on his side on the floor, naked and bleeding and suffocating. He didn't want this. Not for himself, and not for his children
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Re: Just Say Yes 5/5
anonymous
July 7 2009, 21:50:13 UTC
Words cannot describe how awesome I thought this fic was. I liked how short, specific and psychological-based(? I don't know how to word it) this fic was. Anon does not fail. I really enjoyed this fic!
Re: Just Say Yes 5/5
anonymous
July 7 2009, 22:08:59 UTC
Words cannot describe how awesome I thought this fic was. I liked how short, specific and psychological-based(? I don't know how to word it) this fic was. Anon does not fail. I really enjoyed this fic!
Re: Just Say Yes 5/5
anonymous
July 12 2009, 05:59:16 UTC
;A; I usually don't read self-cest but self-cest with ANGST! The description, the conflict, the emotions and everything just pouring out, clashing with himself, his other half. Wanting and not wanting.
This is no fail at all!!! Wonderful job capturing both sides of the coin. ^^
Re: OP IS DEAD FROM THE AWESOME
anonymous
July 4 2009, 09:08:53 UTC
Anon is close to tears OP-san. And blushing profusely. Actually, it was nothing so cool or specific. "Children" simply referred to Russia's people. So glad you enjoyed it. x3
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"What?" Ivan asked himself, tears falling freely to gather in the darkness beneathe his feet.
"If your body suffers like their bodies suffer," he told himself, striding ever nearer to brush against his chest, "it will lessen the ache in here."
Ivan supposed that made sense.
"Okay."
A black blindfold, blacker even than the room in which he stood, took his sight from him.
"Must you?" he asked.
He nodded to eyes that didn't see it.
"Take off your clothes," he told himself, stripping at the same time. A length of rope wound itself around his hands, and was tied loosely about his neck.
"Where are you?" he asked suddenly, when he fell forward and smacked his chin.
"Right here," the voice answered, because at that moment it was just a voice again.
A warm weight was dropped onto his back, and he grunted. "I'm always here."
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Um, smut warning. ( Was that asked for? < Ivan lay on his side on the floor, naked and bleeding and suffocating. He didn't want this. Not for himself, and not for his children ( ... )
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Thanks for the kind words! x3
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This is no fail at all!!! Wonderful job capturing both sides of the coin. ^^
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Thanks so much! I'm very glad you enjoyed it. ^ ^
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I do hope it is at least somewhat like what OP-san wanted.
Author!Anon is going to bed now, kthxbai. x__x
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The references to the children (Romanovs, am I wrong?) and how Ivan was guilty and how damned persuasive his other self was and GUH.
Thank you for fulfilling my twisted dreams anon <3
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And blushing profusely.
Actually, it was nothing so cool or specific. "Children" simply referred to Russia's people.
So glad you enjoyed it. x3
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