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anonymous
July 8 2009, 19:29:32 UTC
There were two requests that were so similar (practically the same word for word) that I decided to write this as a fill for both of them. Hope that's okay
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anonymous
July 8 2009, 20:00:01 UTC
"No Eduard, do not try to talk your way out of this," said Ivan sternly. "I know you and Raivis. I see the bad thoughts running around in your heads. Bad thoughts, like those that got ahold of Toris. He will be back, you know. He will come back to me. And when he does, I am going to have to make sure to beat those bad thoughts out of him once and for all. Bad thoughts...dangerous thoughts...you understand, don't you Eduard? Bad thoughts like those give people strange, dangerous ideas. Ideas of inequality, ideas of decadent, bourgeoisie lifestyles, like Alfred," he said scathingly. "I will not allow those types of ideas in my household, do you understand me, Eduard
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anonymous
July 8 2009, 23:31:26 UTC
Ivan smiled a bright, creepy smile at the Baltics.
"I'll be right back," he told them happily, before slipping out of the room. They knew this meant they were to stay and wait for his return. Stay. Like always.
As soon as Ivan's footsteps faded, Raivis broke down and finally allowed the tears that had been threatening to escape throughout the Russian's whole talk slip down his cheeks unheeded.
Eduard sighed and, once he was absolutely sure Ivan was gone, for this moment at least, wrapped his arms around his younger brother and held him close, allowing him to cry into the front of his shirt
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anonymous
July 9 2009, 01:14:22 UTC
'No...' thought Eduard, a sick feeling in his stomach as he realized where they were being led. 'He wouldn't...he wouldn't do that...not to us...it's not our fault Toris left. Hurting us won't bring him back. Does he not see that
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anonymous
July 9 2009, 02:33:04 UTC
Ivan crossed the room, boots making an ominous and strangely authoritive sound against the cement floor. There was a strong leather whip on the wall, and he went and, before grabbing it, took his gloves off, slowly, finger by finger, just to prolong the waiting, and therefore the mental anguish, of the Baltic boys. When he grabbed it, he held it in his hand, enjoying the feeling of the cool leather beneath his fingers. Yes, this would do good. This would do just fine
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anonymous
July 9 2009, 02:46:24 UTC
When he finally circled all the way around the boy, coming back behind him, he brought the whip forward with no preamble, and it lashed against the Latvian's back, a red welt appearing instantly across the scarred, but still nice and smooth in certain parts, skin. Raivis screamed out in surprise and pain. No matter how many times you went through something like this, you never properly remembered the pain until it happened again
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Re: Untitled - (4.5/?)
anonymous
July 9 2009, 04:36:33 UTC
I feel terrible for F5ing right now, But I've wanted to see this one filled for a long time, since Eduard and Raivis are kind of forgotten most of the time, thanks anon~ I'll be waiting for more. And I think your crazy!Russia is great.
Why thank you! :D I'm glad you like him. I wasn't so sure I was making the crazy apparent enough, as opposed to an almost...sanebutsadistic!Russia. I'm glad the crazy is getting through. :)
I'm glad you like it. : ) I'm still not too confident in my characterization of him yet. I've always seen him as the calmest, most collected one of the Baltics, though. But I will keep that in mind.
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anonymous
July 10 2009, 07:04:25 UTC
I disagree with previous anon; I'm enjoying your voice for him. The only time he seems shakey is when freaking out about a dead/dying Latvia. Otherwise the IT & tourist friendly Estonia is pretty level headed & smart; he'd try to find a way to minimize impending doom. Liet would take on the doom like a total martyr & Latvia would shake himself into a coma, managing to avoid it in his own special way ^^;.
Loving this fic even though its gonna be a painful one- hang in there forgotten Baltics ;_;v
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anonymous
July 10 2009, 08:41:03 UTC
I guess Eduard is somewhere in the middle between Raivis and Toris, as far as shaking is concerned. At the one hand, he's not constantly shaking, but... well, all brothers tend to shake around Russia in most of the strips, and Eduard shakes more than Toris.
... but except for that, I love this characterization very much, and yes. Latvia often got worse conditions when he got occupied than Estonia, although they were in the same situation, just because they were a little late or early or just didn't handle the diplomatic stuff as well as their neighbours. [Although it's always hard to speak of lat and est before 1918, but those parts of the region that I assume to be them.]
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"I'll be right back," he told them happily, before slipping out of the room. They knew this meant they were to stay and wait for his return. Stay. Like always.
As soon as Ivan's footsteps faded, Raivis broke down and finally allowed the tears that had been threatening to escape throughout the Russian's whole talk slip down his cheeks unheeded.
Eduard sighed and, once he was absolutely sure Ivan was gone, for this moment at least, wrapped his arms around his younger brother and held him close, allowing him to cry into the front of his shirt ( ... )
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MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE.
(Yes. This anon knows she can just IM this author!anon... However...)
F5!!!!!!!!! D:
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More should be up tonight, if I finish the next part.
And just so everyone knows, I know the request called for sex. It's gonna happen. Maybe not in the next part. But it will, be assured. :)
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...Although he always seems a bit more shaky to me oO
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Loving this fic even though its gonna be a painful one- hang in there forgotten Baltics ;_;v
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... but except for that, I love this characterization very much, and yes. Latvia often got worse conditions when he got occupied than Estonia, although they were in the same situation, just because they were a little late or early or just didn't handle the diplomatic stuff as well as their neighbours. [Although it's always hard to speak of lat and est before 1918, but those parts of the region that I assume to be them.]
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