Anon loves emotion!
anonymous
July 13 2009, 07:25:31 UTC
Anon would like to request Spain secretly wanting Romano while watching Romano pick up girls. It doesn't have to be emo but Anon would like to see some angst.
Here is my Heart [1/?]
anonymous
July 15 2009, 09:14:04 UTC
“Lovino~ I have something for you!” Antonio shouted cheerfully, bursting into the kitchen. Bracing himself with one hand on the doorway, he slid into the kitchen, and, with a grand flourish, presented a plump, shining tomato in his outstretched hand. The tomato was perfect and firm and ripe with a deep, rich red color-the color of love and passion and of the blood that rushed to Lovino’s cheeks when he was embarrassed or angry or trying to cover his pleasure. As soon as Antonio saw it, growing strong amongst its brother tomatoes and the lush greenery of the garden and stubbornly pushing itself through the artfully wild maze of vines, he wanted to present it to the stubborn young Italian who would, no doubt, scowl and grumble and fuss, saying how stupid the gift and Antonio are all while a barely-there glimmer of pleasure would flash in his vivid hazel eyes. And then, he would look away and mutter a soft thanks, hoping that he, Antonio, wouldn’t but knowing he would hear, while the faintest of blushes-the same dusting of red that
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Here is my Heart [2/?]
anonymous
July 15 2009, 09:17:04 UTC
And so, with a cheerful whistle and the grace of a warrior, Antonio departed, praying fervently that he met with a cheerful, or at the very least not an angry, Lovino
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Here is my Heart [3/3]
anonymous
July 15 2009, 09:20:40 UTC
And yet, as Antonio stood, warring with the beast and silently loving the foul-tempered, spoiled yet endearing child, Lovino carried on, leaning closer to the girls, eyes at half-mast, flashing that beautiful smile
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Re: Here is my Heart [3/3]
anonymous
July 16 2009, 01:39:25 UTC
Also not OP but.. ;A; Baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw~ Anon hurts and cries for his love too! Such beautiful descriptions, the choice of words, the sentences. It's already one of my top fav Spain/Romano fic.
Love how you put it into words, the comparisons of Antonio's emotions and feelings with that of his passion, the tomato, his empire, just everything. Gah~ Marvellous!
Anon here has no better word for praises! It is not enough! So just know that anon is in love with this piece, and your writing skills as well.
Re: Here is my Heart [3/3]
anonymous
July 16 2009, 03:22:12 UTC
Aww, don't cry! *hands tissue*
And, your words mean a lot. I was pretty worried about how it would be received, what with the major Antonio angst and how I wrote it, but I'm glad that it worked and it was enjoyed because I enjoyed writing it.
You flatter me too much anon. But, thank you for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Re: Here is my Heart [3/3]
anonymous
July 16 2009, 03:43:54 UTC
Thank you for the tissue. XD
As much as I love Spain/Romano fics, most of them are fluff and romance and just the sweet love and all, so angst is pretty rare. Darn, now anon has the urge to request an angsty one-sided Spain fic, with Romano actually being in love with someone else. '~' Anon'll probably do just that.
recaptcha: plaint suggesteding. D8 It has read anon's mind!!!
Re: Here is my Heart [3/3]
anonymous
July 16 2009, 03:57:45 UTC
More Antonio angst? With Lovino not just flirting with someone else but loving them and kissing and so on? D8 ...I would totally second that and totally attempt to fill it.
It is everything I wanted and more! I can not thank you enough! Seriously beautiful capturing Spain's need and love and culture all in one fic. Oh man, I...I love you. Seriously this was beautiful.
Por favor.
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But Damn, i loved it. Antonioo ;A;
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I could read this a thousand times because I am simply in love with your writing style. *___*
The imagery and the way you described Antonio's inner conflict was beautiful.
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Love how you put it into words, the comparisons of Antonio's emotions and feelings with that of his passion, the tomato, his empire, just everything. Gah~ Marvellous!
Anon here has no better word for praises! It is not enough! So just know that anon is in love with this piece, and your writing skills as well.
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And, your words mean a lot. I was pretty worried about how it would be received, what with the major Antonio angst and how I wrote it, but I'm glad that it worked and it was enjoyed because I enjoyed writing it.
You flatter me too much anon. But, thank you for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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As much as I love Spain/Romano fics, most of them are fluff and romance and just the sweet love and all, so angst is pretty rare. Darn, now anon has the urge to request an angsty one-sided Spain fic, with Romano actually being in love with someone else. '~' Anon'll probably do just that.
recaptcha: plaint suggesteding. D8 It has read anon's mind!!!
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Does that make me a bad person?
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Thank you so much!
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And thank you for this prompt. It was my pleasure to write it.
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