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hetalia_pen

WIP CRIT POST

Nov 02, 2010 10:22

Give a little crit, take a little crit.

Comments 6

anonymous December 7 2010, 09:10:21 UTC

Could you take a once-over for this fic, just to catch any glaring errors I made?

Pairing is Japan/fem!China.
Warnings are smut, genderbending, and incest if you consider Japan part of the East Asia family.

http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/17465.html?thread=61079609#t61079609

Thank you!

WWI & II Era Fic hadamega_ne February 18 2011, 00:29:32 UTC

Would be doubly grateful if someone could check out this little bit of writing I've done for a immense fic I've started planning. It's the first piece of formal prose for this AU so I'd like to gauge it's quality to see how I'm starting off so far. It's not much but there will be more coming.

Please and thank you for the concrit.

Link to my writing journal:
http://hadamega-ne.livejournal.com/6733.html

Re: WWI & II Era Fic hadamega_ne March 4 2011, 11:18:35 UTC

Is it friend-locked or deleted? It says "access denied" when I try to get to that page.

Re: WWI & II Era Fic hadamega_ne March 7 2011, 06:58:03 UTC

Oh! I'm sorry, it's probably locked. I'll unlock it so you can look at it. Thanks for letting me know!

Re: WWI & II Era Fic hadamega_ne March 7 2011, 22:40:15 UTC

Okay I unlocked it and logged out to see if anyone can view it and success. Go ahead whenever you have time. :D

idraax September 6 2011, 02:20:13 UTC

Could one of you critique my fic Pain's Universe? I could really use the help. Thanks!

http://idraax.livejournal.com/18494.html