Minus the callow youth (Cordelia/Giles) for noelia_g

Mar 30, 2008 11:35

Title: Minus The Callow Youth
For: noelia_g
Pairing: Cordelia/Giles
Rating: slight PG
Word count: 739

Thanks to musesfool and oxoniensis for awesome beta help.

It had been super embarrassing, followed instantly by super scary. The typical Sunnydale date. )

fic, round 3, cordelia/giles

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novin_ha March 30 2008, 18:47:05 UTC
someone who had a really bad tattoo and, worse, rented.

To zdanie podobało mi się STRASZNIE.

W ogóle bardzo Cordeliowe to, i bardzo fajne. Takie... trafne. I urocze.

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noelia_g March 31 2008, 07:22:20 UTC
*pokes*

English, sweetie. As much as I agree Polish should be the universal language (okay, I DON'T, because writing porn in Polish is awful), feedback would be better in English.

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novin_ha March 31 2008, 07:23:25 UTC
I answer the way I think at the moment ;P

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noelia_g March 31 2008, 07:24:51 UTC
Wajda, eh?

But I'm sure the author would appreciate it if she could understand the feedback. Just saying :D

*butts out*

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damnskippytoo March 31 2008, 02:48:11 UTC
"Yeah, well, we're done with making out. I can't take the smell of this place.

Really not much of a change from when she dated Xander, huh? LOL! I loved it and loved how in character CC is in this. Usually when I read a C/Giles set in BtVS fic, she's much more mature which, of course, she so wasn't at that time. Great job!

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callmesandy March 31 2008, 21:43:18 UTC
Yay! Thank you so much! :)

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noelia_g March 31 2008, 07:20:51 UTC
Oh, my gods, this is beyond fantastic and adorable. I love Cordelia here, this is my favourite Cordelia. Thank you so much!

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callmesandy March 31 2008, 21:43:37 UTC
I'm so so glad you liked! Yay! :)

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dreamincolor March 31 2008, 23:38:36 UTC
Aw, I love your portrayal of obnoxious, high school Cordy.

That was awesome. Thanks for sharing!

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callmesandy April 3 2008, 22:59:51 UTC
Thank you so so much! :)

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marenfic April 2 2008, 02:10:04 UTC
Hahaha!

This:

Clearly, she was destined for super embarrassing, given that she'd gone from dating Xander to dating Giles. At least it had been a huge upgrade in kissing ability. And sexing abilities.

And this:

Maybe you should get a helmet

Funny, funny, excellent Cordy voice. I am in awe.

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callmesandy April 3 2008, 23:00:11 UTC
Yay! Glad you liked! Thank you! :)

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