Escape

[hexx_agon]

When you know what's coming, how do you escape? And who will help you?

My first story, be kind!

Set towards the tail end of Season 4 in my head.
Not sure I got the voices right, Radek's seems off at least.

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Caldwell“Colonel Carter

Comments

[adafrog]

Lovely, thanks.
I'm pretty sure it's Ronon, not Ronan.

[cosmonaut_elf]

Very cute! I liked how everyone was being so... what's the word... almost sneaky about what they were doing. Taking out the transmitters, giving them supplies but still obeying all of the orders given to them.

The story was very unusually formatted, but I must say: it worked well for this fic.

Good job! Hope to see more from you!

[cosmonaut_elf]

Oh, and, the voices were alright. Zelenka did seem a tensy bit off, but not so much that I can put my finger on what it was. Just to try and be helpful. :D

[tktrix]

I like it, very funny, and you gotta love the atlantis team spirit. :)

[lalpadme]

What can I say? It was great to read!!!
I loved the lollipop part, made me smile. ;)